11รีวิว
4.15
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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the story is very good but the lack of updates is affecting the overall experience of the readers
Writing quality/world building/character development - was there any? not only dose it not make sence at times, it also appears to me like there are some missing chapters. 1 - Cha Hae-In was stuck in a red gate, which some how turend s rank… mc rescuse her, but wait! he actully dosent!!! how? simple, the whole chapter is skipped… I’m not even kidding, mc finds Cha Hae-In close to death but the chapter ends there, the next chapter is completely diffrence, no explanarion on how or why… 2 - Most if not all the chapters include the status… You’ll be reading what’s the mc’s stats most of the time, chapter 1 okey, chapter 2 okey, but don’t show us useless numbers over and over and over again. It honestly feels like the status was used to make up the word count. 3 - Mc’s powers are basickly the same like Sung’s, but he uses a sword… Nothing original or new from the rest of the solo leveling ff’s Not worth the time, I should have rather just re read the novel of solo leveling then this…
Salah satu fanfiction solo leveling 👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯
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More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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If author wants to delete my review then I won't mind it because this review is heavily biased, I just hate the fact that his special class is just a repackaged version of shadow monarch, just make something original for a special power instead of making him sun jin woo 2.0 with a sword, there are soo many cool abilities but noooo I want the my protagonist to have the same power as the original protagonist but with a different name which completely undermines the original shadow monarch ability and why the shadow monarch was so feared, any way sorry for the rant and good luck with your story and as I said you can delete the review if you think it's too unfair.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Bro pls continue this is literally the best fanfic I’ve read all month pls gang I need more chapters pls 🙏🏾🧎🏾
the story is very good but the lack of updates is affecting the overall experience of the readers
Writing quality/world building/character development - was there any? not only dose it not make sence at times, it also appears to me like there are some missing chapters. 1 - Cha Hae-In was stuck in a red gate, which some how turend s rank… mc rescuse her, but wait! he actully dosent!!! how? simple, the whole chapter is skipped… I’m not even kidding, mc finds Cha Hae-In close to death but the chapter ends there, the next chapter is completely diffrence, no explanarion on how or why… 2 - Most if not all the chapters include the status… You’ll be reading what’s the mc’s stats most of the time, chapter 1 okey, chapter 2 okey, but don’t show us useless numbers over and over and over again. It honestly feels like the status was used to make up the word count. 3 - Mc’s powers are basickly the same like Sung’s, but he uses a sword… Nothing original or new from the rest of the solo leveling ff’s Not worth the time, I should have rather just re read the novel of solo leveling then this…
Salah satu fanfiction solo leveling 👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯👍💯
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Interesting v ... ... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................
If author wants to delete my review then I won't mind it because this review is heavily biased, I just hate the fact that his special class is just a repackaged version of shadow monarch, just make something original for a special power instead of making him sun jin woo 2.0 with a sword, there are soo many cool abilities but noooo I want the my protagonist to have the same power as the original protagonist but with a different name which completely undermines the original shadow monarch ability and why the shadow monarch was so feared, any way sorry for the rant and good luck with your story and as I said you can delete the review if you think it's too unfair.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Bro pls continue this is literally the best fanfic I’ve read all month pls gang I need more chapters pls 🙏🏾🧎🏾