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Hi Beastly_Fangs, congrats on winning Silver for the recent WPC #274. Please contact me on Discord to redeem your coin code prize! My discord ID is hongwen#2938
Honestly I’m not really good at reviews so I’ll be just saying stuff that comes to mind So far I’m on chapter 19 the writing is good with some small mistakes here and there but it doesn’t affect the story at all As for the characters apart from the mc and a few disposable side character there hasn’t been many character appearances or development the The start of the story is unique yet not rare so it’s at least refreshing t o read though it’s kinda cliché at some point world building is also good with a cool power system
Good start, great plot ............. I did love to see more chapters, please do some edits on some chapters overall this is a great book[img=faceslap],highly recommended,
A nice well crafted novel is deeply rooted in knowledge of eastern fantasy. I can see that the author is a veteran in his works. It was thought out deeply and I am impressed. 😍 Keep it up! This got potential and I hope you win the contest ❤️
Hi Beastly_Fangs, congrats on winning Silver for the recent WPC #274. Please contact me on Discord to redeem your coin code prize! My discord ID is hongwen#2938
Honestly I’m not really good at reviews so I’ll be just saying stuff that comes to mind So far I’m on chapter 19 the writing is good with some small mistakes here and there but it doesn’t affect the story at all As for the characters apart from the mc and a few disposable side character there hasn’t been many character appearances or development the The start of the story is unique yet not rare so it’s at least refreshing t o read though it’s kinda cliché at some point world building is also good with a cool power system
Good start, great plot ............. I did love to see more chapters, please do some edits on some chapters overall this is a great book[img=faceslap],highly recommended,
A nice well crafted novel is deeply rooted in knowledge of eastern fantasy. I can see that the author is a veteran in his works. It was thought out deeply and I am impressed. 😍 Keep it up! This got potential and I hope you win the contest ❤️
A wonderful story book love the beginning