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I hope you add romance and tell the back story of him and his wife and make them a couple again also i dont think changing hair colors eye colors and face shape should temper with sincro rate it kinda seem dumb when its basically like nerve gear from sao contacting with the nerves in the brain and what not also it semmed odd to me that the business man and his son star to invest without even knowing the name of the person and how hector or whatever his name was didn't recognize drake when drake didn't even change his appearance it jut weird and aslo the voice the way and the tone in which they talk is the same also you add two or more love interests and the ai in is head getting a personality give multiple personality disorder vibes so make it a monotone ai and spliting them in two different ones dosent make sense is kinda offsetting also pls dont make it boyslove becouse its kinda giving the vibes not homo××××ic just isn't my taste
I hope you add romance and tell the back story of him and his wife and make them a couple again also i dont think changing hair colors eye colors and face shape should temper with sincro rate it kinda seem dumb when its basically like nerve gear from sao contacting with the nerves in the brain and what not also it semmed odd to me that the business man and his son star to invest without even knowing the name of the person and how hector or whatever his name was didn't recognize drake when drake didn't even change his appearance it jut weird and aslo the voice the way and the tone in which they talk is the same also you add two or more love interests and the ai in is head getting a personality give multiple personality disorder vibes so make it a monotone ai and spliting them in two different ones dosent make sense is kinda offsetting also pls dont make it boyslove becouse its kinda giving the vibes not homo××××ic just isn't my taste