El Paraiso Perdido: La Venida Del Dios De La Muerte Del Submundo

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_Rico_

Overall the story upto chapter 26 is simply great . The MC is calm and does not have rash personality. The story has great potential and i hope you complete it.

LV 1

Assasins13_Perez

Una increíble historia con personajes muy vividos y fielmente retratados como en la obra original, lo mejor es que van cambiando por la interferencia del personaje no solo por estar en momentos clave de su vida si no que los acompaña todo el camino. Aunque aceleró el ritmo más de lo que me gustaría cuando ingresa al paraíso perdido, se entiende ya que es más poderosos que el original y lo mejor de todo es que tiene todo el sentido del mundo que así lo sea, también muchas mecánicas de la novela original están mejor explicadas en esta como la ley de la causalidad.

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Fuehrer

Ayoo bro, love this fanfic. I haven't read fanfic like this before, so 5 star! And author, I have some question. will you add the concept of world travel later after saving that world later?

LV 10

yasel2219

Solo por ser un 💎fanfic💎de esta novela son 5 estrellas⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

LV 4

vylavy

It's amazing even the chapters I read, one of the fanfics that has excellent potential compared to most fanfics on the platform, let's see in the future if it maintains the quality!☺️

LV 3

Redex933

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CharkraWarlock

Please complete this novel, This is so great

LV 5

Maya_Matengele

Truly excellent in all angles👌🏾. The only fault I find here is in the English translation in the latter chapters the gender indicators are messed up... She is he and his is hers, that is if you do not know the names of the characters you would be left in utter confusion. If you do know them how ever and are patient enough to ignore those errors, then congratulations, you have found yourself a hidden treasure😎

LV 5

Afonso_Aaron

I like the story ......................................................................................................................................

LV 1

Number1Chad

Probably one of the best fanfics on this website if it's about quality and thought behind the story. It's just the MC is a bit too 'good' for my taste, but that's a taste thing so I will still give you five stars. Well done!

LV 13

I_Love_Hina

Don't understand, didn't read it but it's Seol Jihu.... automatic 5 stars.....................,.........jjdididkjcfjeidififododoediicicifiifif

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ravenously_fluked

I really would like more fanfic of SCOG but I can't really understand Spanish. I do know that there may be some auto translation on apps but please, could you make an official English translation like what bukaro is doing? Thanks for the fanfic though.

LV 6

_Cooldude_

Interesting second coming of gluttony fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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JordanU_U

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LV 1

narusa_nart

It's a very good read, Although the story is in Spanish after using translator it feels no different than English one's so don't let that stop you from reading this novel. Loved the novel author keep it up.

LV 3

lord_couchpotato

OMG this is a gem!!!!! Chapters are long and release rate is consistent. Story is also very addictive and tbh i like it better than the original at some point. Author don't drop it damm*t, Even if you rush it up a bit don't drop it.

LV 5

Just_ForFun

It's amazing even the chapters I read, one of the fanfics that has excellent potential compared to most fanfics on the platform, let's see in the future if it maintains the quality!☺️

LV 11

Iamxourtingdeath

To be honest I enjoy your story very much, it's just that I myself don't like 'good' protagonists. I still read it though, definitely well done.

LV 1

Bery_8716

Luar biasa, itu mungkin yang saya pikirkan saat membaca cerita ini. saya cukup banyak membaca cerita fanfiction dan hanya dengan hitungan jari yang dapat membuat saya berdebar dan bersemangat setelah kejenuhan hari hari terakhir.dan saya merasa cukup segar melihat soel jihu dari sudut baru . Yeah, saya tidak tau orang lain menyukai nya seperti saya,tapi untuk diri saya itu cukup untuk membuat ku memeriksa update setiap beberapa jam .