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The Extra's Return

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นักเขียน: Munruel

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[You have been killed by the Hero of Light.]

[You have died.]

I had died at the hands of the main character in the novel I had read before.

But I got another chance. I regressed and returned to the time when I first entered this novel world.

Once again, I live in this novel world as an extra character.

Since I have experience and knowledge, especially my World System which had upgraded, I'll do what I want to do.

I will become stronger than the main character.
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POV 1 : √
Harem: √
Toxic Friends: X Big No.
Naive Protagonist: X
Pervert Protagonist: X
Toxic Harem: X
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    Munruel

    Sorry, this shameless author asked for permission to give a 5-star rating. Also, if you have any questions or feedback, please comment here. So that I receive a notification. Enjoy your reading time. 🐱

    1yr
    ดู 35 การตอบกลับ
    Tenkainijna

    I am the bone of my sword. Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades. Unaware of the beginning, Nor aware of the end. Withstood pain with inconsistent weapons, my hands will never hold anything. Yet, my flame never ends. My whole body was still Unlimited Blade Works.

    2yr
    ดู 6 การตอบกลับ
    HaracasAye

    Not a villain. Doesnt feel like he is an adult, more like a slightly apathetic teen. The plot of the novel he transmigrates into is nonsensical, having the hero betray humans at the end which has forced the mc into the 'inevitable saviour' role or face extinction. His belief after suffering through two lives is that he wont hurt others unless they hurt him first, great logic. 18 chapters in and theres 3 potential females, can already see where that goes, dont know why theres no harem tag. Grammar mistakes a few times each chapter.

    2yr
    ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
    YourDad_

    Good novel More Updates ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1yr
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    WIKKY
    LV 4 Badge

    From beginning to finish this novel was way too cringy. Primarily because of the cliche over the top egotistical arrogant nobles, and the treacherous family, not to mention the broken English and the supposed man-child hypocrite MC trying to get revenge in every chapter. Anyway, I can go on till the end of time telling you how brain-dead this novel is but there are some good parts to this novel they are just overshadowed by garbage filler where the plot frustratingly goes nowhere. My point is if you like the cliche mentioned above read it if not simply don't waste your time on this novel.

    1yr
    ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
    SoulCore876

    Honestly I can see potential for this story but there are glaring flaws from the chapters I have read up to so far, chapter 16 that is. The author keeps switching pronouns of genders, they would describing a character as a he but not even a few sentences later they'll call them a she. Plus there was one time the MC hit his maid for being disrespectful towards him, but straight away on the next chapter that maid is now a butler. I highly suggest the author to proofread through their chapters once or twice before uploading/publishing it on Webnovel.

    2yr
    ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
    Carbon_6597

    Good Idea. However is let down by the author trying to get us to feel bad for the MC and to put him down. Going over 20 chapters with no real wins for the MC. Paid chapters start at 20 and there is no significant development to tell if you want to pay to continue. In the 20 chapters it still feels like what other books would do with 5. I think it'd a great idea to have already lived the novel. But there is no real power fantasy from having the foresight of the future which makes it feel awkwars

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    KFC_Cat

    I thought it was interesting but.. the dialogues are bad... the level of english is also not good. the characters are one dimensional

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Daoist_Hart

    he got great system (not toxic kind) ✔️ he got transmigrator boon ✔️ he knows novel storyline from 1st life ✔️ he got regressor memory from 2nd life ✔️ he got master to teach him ✔️ he got nobility ✔️ but why MC made lots dumb, and stupid action, like being slave and beggar to life (on 2nd life). I seriously doubt MC ability to walk path humanly possible.

    1yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    heli
    LV 15 Badge

    the quality is not that bad, but the development of the story as some issues, its like you wanting to watch john wick, with all the anger, intense feeling that comes with it and dind out that the john wick character is being played by mr bean. despite mr bean being a good charcter or actor it definitely does not suite a movie like john wick. that is what the author is trying to do, i got to chapter 29 and i am just forced to write a review, the fighging sequences are not good enough, what was said about some characters at the beginning of the chapters do not blend with them 10 or so chapters later. the mc seems to talk to himself or monologue but the author tends to use that to repeat the same thing by explaining again in a first person perspective. the more i read the more points drop for the review. if only author can reread what they wrote.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Suzaku_

    Interesting so far . . . . . . . [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Fajar_Jr_0994

    Apakah ini karakter penjahat kejam? Atau sedikit naif? Isosobssosus8w99w9rififior9doe99w8wuehejjrjd e9w9w88whejejd ue8e8eypcyxpoyftdtd9tfotdttofotfy9yf9tff9yf9yfoyfyf99yfotoyyotfft9f

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    semmuad

    Its great, but the writing quality is a bit poor. The plot of the novel is actually confusing and nonexistent. Add the harem tag too. It has multiple females till date. Look into it. I hope u improve.

    1yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Apocalypse_2ndLife

    Nothing new in world background.. Story should have been the plus point but the extremely bad english made it unbearable. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Fang_Clawn

    Pros: A fun piece of writing to read. Simple paragraphs and a fairly fast pace. Many good scenes and good characters. Cons: Sometimes confusing storyline. The writing quality is not that perfect.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Yi_Zaha

    Its so interesting how the mc does his staff, he has already grown from his first life and there are less rooms for him to mess up. I love how there is always a funny part inbetween the fights[img=update]

    12mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Crycks
    LV 14 Badge

    paywall at chapter 20. Low quality for what i could read up to there. English is good but thats all. Just lost some time on this novel…………….

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    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    sebas_tian

    this is the best that I have read so far so please keep this updated... love your novel[img=recommend]

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    kartik_agarwal

    Before ch 85, the story was average. Although the theme has became common, still it was going okay. But then, out of the blue, a quest comes to mc, to act like a villain in front of jeanne. And that part was really stupid. I don't get why author took the story in such a direction?? Just to add some more misunderstandings etc? Even though all system story are forced developments, but this one is too much.

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Morningstars_Hell

    Good novel if you like 'extra in the novel' type characters [img=update][img=update][img=update]

    1yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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    1. 1
      Epilogue - The Second Dead 2 years ago
    2. 2
      The Extra's Return 2 years ago
    3. 3
      Hikikomori Noble 2 years ago
    4. 4
      Remove Poison in the Body 2 years ago
    5. 5
      Family Conflict 2 years ago
    6. 6
      Detoxification 2 years ago
    7. 7
      Strengthening Skill 2 years ago
    8. 8
      Maturity Ceremony (1) 2 years ago
    9. 9
      Maturity Ceremony (2) 2 years ago
    10. 10
      The Forgotten Dream 2 years ago
    11. 11
      Black Merchant 2 years ago
    12. 12
      Open Status? 2 years ago
    13. 13
      Thugs Again 2 years ago
    14. 14
      Moment of Enlightenment 2 years ago
    15. 15
      Black Box Organization 2 years ago
    16. 16
      The Price of Power 2 years ago
    17. 17
      The Main Character is Coming 2 years ago
    18. 18
      Night Party 2 years ago
    19. 19
      A Little Thing About Our Main Character 1 years ago
    20. 20
      Hero x Extra 1 years ago
    21. 21
      I will Make You a Hikikomori 1 years ago
    22. 22
      Sword Fighting Show 1 years ago
    23. 23
      The Fate of the Extra Character (1) 1 years ago
    24. 24
      A Sweet Gift 1 years ago
    25. 25
      Stigma of Darkness 1 years ago
    26. 26
      Body Reconstruction 1 years ago
    27. 27
      Demonic Mana 1 years ago
    28. 28
      Ghost Face's True Identity 1 years ago
    29. 29
      Callie Claws 1 years ago
    30. 30
      The Giant Bear 1 years ago
    31. 31
      Death of the Giant Bear 1 years ago
    32. 32
      Cultivation Technique 1 years ago
    33. 33
      The Black Box Organization (1) 1 years ago
    34. 34
      The Black Box Organization (2) 1 years ago
    35. 35
      The Black Box Organization (3) 1 years ago
    36. 36
      Killer Kids Squad (1) 1 years ago
    37. 37
      Killer Kids Squad (2) 1 years ago
    38. 38
      Killer Kids Squad (3) 1 years ago
    39. 39
      Great Farewell (1) 1 years ago
    40. 40
      Great Farewell (2) 1 years ago
    41. 41
      Great Farewell (3) 1 years ago
    42. 42
      Sword Aura 1 years ago
    43. 43
      Kill Him 1 years ago
    44. 44
      Remote Village 1 years ago
    45. 45
      Assassin's Candidate 1 years ago
    46. 46
      Where Does My Story Belong? 1 years ago
    47. 47
      Multiple Personality 1 years ago
    48. 48
      Captain and Vice Captain 1 years ago
    49. 49
      Change of Fate 1 years ago
    50. 50
      Handmade Skill Book 1 years ago
    51. 51
      Fier Mountain Investigation Quest 1 years ago
    52. 52
      Svangur Sword 1 years ago
    53. 53
      The Big Treant 1 years ago
    54. 54
      A Cave Inside The Fog Dungeon 1 years ago
    55. 55
      The Title 1 years ago
    56. 56
      The Fallen Lich 1 years ago
    57. 57
      Three Sword Paths To Heaven 1 years ago
    58. 58
      Dragon Eye 1 years ago
    59. 59
      The Devil's Plan 1 years ago
    60. 60
      Toward the Hero's Awakening Event 1 years ago
    61. 61
      Level Up 1 years ago
    62. 62
      Slime 1 years ago
    63. 63
      The Messages 1 years ago
    64. 64
      The King of Merchant... Number Two 1 years ago
    65. 65
      Adventurers Association 1 years ago
    66. 66
      Receptionist Girl 1 years ago
    67. 67
      The Adventurer's Test 1 years ago
    68. 68
      Honey Bee 1 years ago
    69. 69
      The Superiority of a Nobleman 1 years ago
    70. 70
      The Main Heroine 1 years ago
    71. 71
      The Unexpected Scenario 1 years ago
    72. 72
      Elf's Heir?? 1 years ago
    73. 73
      Neglected Quest 1 years ago
    74. 74
      Human Greed 1 years ago
    75. 75
      The Orphanage 1 years ago
    76. 76
      Children's Despair 1 years ago
    77. 77
      The Anger of The Main Heroine 1 years ago
    78. 78
      Berserk Skill 1 years ago
    79. 79
      The Story in the Novel 1 years ago
    80. 80
      Falling into Anger 1 years ago
    81. 81
      A Blessing Phenomenon 1 years ago
    82. 82
      Time to Replenish the Inventory 1 years ago
    83. 83
      Depraved Nanny 1 years ago
    84. 84
      Rat Monster 1 years ago
    85. 85
      Dissociative Amnesia 1 years ago
    86. 86
      Annoying Scenario 1 years ago
    87. 87
      Act Like A Villain (1) 1 years ago
    88. 88
      Act Like a Villain (2) 1 years ago
    89. 89
      Heroine x Extra 1 years ago
    90. 90
      Emotional Fuel Skill 1 years ago
    91. 91
      The 3rd Class Magician 1 years ago
    92. 92
      Great Barrier 1 years ago
    93. 93
      Low Mana 1 years ago
    94. 94
      Acting Isn't My Talent 1 years ago
    95. 95
      Mana Deficiency 1 years ago
    96. 96
      Love-Hate Relationship 1 years ago
    97. 97
      A Bird That Can't Fly 1 years ago
    98. 98
      Captured 1 years ago
    99. 99
      Make Me Your Slave 1 years ago
    100. 100
      Marquess Stronghold 1 years ago
    101. 101
      Clock Tower 1 years ago
    102. 102
      The Slave Audition 1 years ago
    103. 103
      Nest of Slavery (1) 1 years ago
    104. 104
      Nest of Slavery (2) 1 years ago
    105. 105
      Nest of Slavery (3) 1 years ago
    106. 106
      The Mini Concert 1 years ago
    107. 107
      Slave District 1 years ago
    108. 108
      S-Rank Intelligence 1 years ago
    109. 109
      How Hatred is Formed 1 years ago
    110. 110
      Pathetic Old Beastman 1 years ago
    111. 111
      Unexpected Plot 1 years ago
    112. 112
      Confusing Fight 1 years ago
    113. 113
      The Pieces Of The Story 1 years ago
    114. 114
      Mine Dungeon Exploration (1) 1 years ago
    115. 115
      Mine Dungeon Exploration (2) 1 years ago
    116. 116
      A Rock-Hard Monster 1 years ago
    117. 117
      The Show has Closed 1 years ago
    118. 118
      Killing Sensation 1 years ago
    119. 119
      Skill Combination 1 years ago
    120. 120
      My Previous Level 1 years ago
    121. 121
      The Fox 1 years ago
    122. 122
      Last Hit Taste 1 years ago
    123. 123
      A Past Friend 1 years ago
    124. 124
      Beastmen Mark 1 years ago
    125. 125
      Let's Blow Up 1 years ago
    126. 126
      Princess-style Carrying 1 years ago
    127. 127
      The Beauty of a Plan 1 years ago
    128. 128
      Psycho Boss 1 years ago

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