3รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
ill try to update this as much as i can everyday but the minimum chapter amount per day is about 1 or 2 . Why did you scroll this far down
This review is harsh not because the story plot or idea is bad but because the grammar is bad. I really did try reading this because it’s a good idea but in the end I had to decipher sentences like a Chinese novel. Idk if it’s translated poorly or something but in the end it feels like a Chinese novel. It even gets direct quotes from the movie wrong such as Shield.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ ill try to update this as much as i can everyday but the minimum chapter amount per day is about 1 or 2 . Why did you scroll this far down
This review is harsh not because the story plot or idea is bad but because the grammar is bad. I really did try reading this because it’s a good idea but in the end I had to decipher sentences like a Chinese novel. Idk if it’s translated poorly or something but in the end it feels like a Chinese novel. It even gets direct quotes from the movie wrong such as Shield.
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