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I read the synopsis. The english was worse than a newborns babies. Can't believe this trash wasted 1min of my time (reading the synopsis). it deserves a 0 star, too bad 1 is the lowest.
Story is really fun to read but gets repetitive really fast. The characters are pretty cliche but I'm a sucker for that so it's alright. There are way to any writing mistakes and the ending is short and a little underwhelming. But still liked the story. Thanks for the read Author-San <3
The story was good and interesting author but it would be good if you could determine what point of view you want to use because it made me confused whose point of view you are using as I moved on the proceeding chapters, the most basic is use third person perspective or point of view, that way even f there are wrong spelling or grammar readers can easily understand the story... 😅 sorry if I talked too much but the story is good and interesting inspite of the confusing pov.. 😁
this has been one of the most interesting stories I've ever read I hope you write more stories like this it helps me keep alive and satisfied love ya
The story is nice and fun to read but need improvement in the spelling part and we need more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Well the novel might has flaws, But you all can't stop me Loving the story, world background and especially the unique quick wear. I'm very excited about the cultivation world 😂😂 because it has 2 yanderes Kyaahhhh luv them 👌👌👌 Thank u for the updates and pleaseeee moreeeeeeeee it's so interesting that I kept checking if it already updated 😉😉👌
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the only real problem I see is the Grammer but overall it's a REALLY good book.
I read the synopsis. The english was worse than a newborns babies. Can't believe this trash wasted 1min of my time (reading the synopsis). it deserves a 0 star, too bad 1 is the lowest.
Story is really fun to read but gets repetitive really fast. The characters are pretty cliche but I'm a sucker for that so it's alright. There are way to any writing mistakes and the ending is short and a little underwhelming. But still liked the story. Thanks for the read Author-San <3
The story was good and interesting author but it would be good if you could determine what point of view you want to use because it made me confused whose point of view you are using as I moved on the proceeding chapters, the most basic is use third person perspective or point of view, that way even f there are wrong spelling or grammar readers can easily understand the story... 😅 sorry if I talked too much but the story is good and interesting inspite of the confusing pov.. 😁
this has been one of the most interesting stories I've ever read I hope you write more stories like this it helps me keep alive and satisfied love ya
The story is nice and fun to read but need improvement in the spelling part and we need more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Well the novel might has flaws, But you all can't stop me Loving the story, world background and especially the unique quick wear. I'm very excited about the cultivation world 😂😂 because it has 2 yanderes Kyaahhhh luv them 👌👌👌 Thank u for the updates and pleaseeee moreeeeeeeee it's so interesting that I kept checking if it already updated 😉😉👌
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the only real problem I see is the Grammer but overall it's a REALLY good book.