Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed

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ThunderTaters

Why is there an option for authors to review their own works? This hardly seems fair? But what is fair in life? So don't mind me, shamelessly rating 5 stars. You have to stand up for your own interests, ya know? So yeah, how many words left till I can submit this?

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VenerableHumble

Oh, I knew this from Reddit RI group, so CharredPotato's work is on webnovel too, anyways, Auto support from fellow RI enthusiast...........

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bndr

Tiis work is really great , Auther has taken his time in thinking about the plot very well . The chapter are longer than usual which is good cosidering the somewhat long time between every chapter and the great quality of the work itself. Thanks for making a great art for others to see ❤️.

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EvilGrandpa

Brilliant, this Ri fanfiction is simply brilliant. There are many things I like about this fanfiction, the main character is likable and knows what he is doing. The plot is good, the writing style is also somewhat similar to Ri( another plus for me). This fan fiction has retained majority of essence from the original Ri. The author is really hard-working and talented, another plus. And It's glorified Ri fanfiction, the biggest plus. Negative: with a gun pointed at my head, I'll say this; the update rate isn't all that satisfactory, but I can't really complain. After all, the author isn't really making a living out of this(Idk really, are u). And not to mention, making good content isn't as easy as it seems, but we still need more(I am greedy) So that's that, all in all, it's pretty good Fan Fiction. I hope one day, you create a masterpiece of your own(not fanfiction)

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OrigamiGuyII

This looks so promising. I love the idea of mortal cultivation with the comprehension of Dao a Rank 8 Gu Immortal has accumulated. I can't wait to see where you take this.

The story is truly great but i only have one dislike about this, it has too much side character story 🤣just like in the original ri

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_Bruh

I, your Grandfather, applaud your work. My attainment in the reader path has finally reached grandmaster level because of your profound plot and characters. Keep up the good work junior.

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ALonelyDaoist

Hello there my fellow brothers, who seek to prolong and expand their journey in the Gu World. 1. Let's start with 'Writing Quality'. This aspect of the story is done really well. Style of writing is similar to RI and in my opinion it's a great advantage of this fic, since you can feel that progression of story takes place in the same cold, unforgiving and so familiar to us world of RI. Though it must be said, tha author didn't just tried to imitate Gu Zhen Ren's style, but added his own touch to it. (Yes, there were few moments in the story, which maybe could have been done better, but it doesn't really affect whole work + It's not very critical). 2. To be short about updates: they're on time and stable. 3. Frankly speaking, 37 chapters is miniscule amount of content (drop in ocean to be exact), if we want to draw accurate and not shallow conclusion. But considering a tempo of events happening along the way, I'll allow myself to say that development of a story is great. 4. I think design of characters is done pretty good, but when again to truly see their depth and make final say about them, we'd need to wait a liitle bit more, still this part of the story is solid and actions of characters are logical and don't contradict with their personalities. 5. World buiding is done well, even considering pace of the story, style of writing allows author to create a beautiful background along with a complicated polical situation within a clan. In the end, I want to say: Good job! The fic isn't stupidly made and story has enougth potential to truly bloom and to become amazing tale to read and enjoy. Really enjoyed this story so far and I'll will be waiting for more.

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Ashwatthama

Looks good for now. keep up ........................................................................... .....................................................

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BLANCK

I rly like it. Good luck an hope u have fun writing this:) D

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ReverendWhite

It's short so far, 4 chapters, 1 a week, but enjoyable. My own criticism is lack of chapters. But that's not a story flaw in any way. The main character is a former immortal, so it jumps right into the meat of the content without the need for too much build up. It has multiple perspectives to flesh out the story world. It doesn't try anything too extreme or cheat-y like some fanfiction do and stays true enough to the story and its world's rules. I look forward to seeing more.

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NorbyMtrl_reader

One of the rare RI ff still updatingwort it reading, appreciate the different setting instead of other ff starting the same way. I would like to have more focus story on OC mc and maybe existing characters in the original novel (if alive or same timeline). In general one of the best active ff around. Raccomended

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CourterOfDeath

Thank you thunder taters for writing this. It is probably the only faithful RI fanfic I have seen so far, add on top the storytelling and writing style, it almost feels like an official spin-off to the original, it is that well-written.

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Micko_Saci

Story is great there are almost no writing mistakes and characters actually feel alive.

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Dikomposition

Truly amazing, the story itself is amazing. Not to mention the unique and fresh plot this story contains, I have no idea how this story does not have more recognition. Keep it up!

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LuminousZ

Excellent writing, one of the best FF of RI I have read so far . Keep up .. ..................................................................

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MISLEAD

21 Ch in and writing quality has improved. The background politics and scheming is going good too. You still failed to improve the description part. Only that Grand Formation has decent description. Don't forget Gu also have appearances. Make sure to describe them well. Now time to stockpile until ch50

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hhhhz45

This novel has so much potential !!! finish i t Hope you will finish it

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mwa92i

Just here to give the 5 star you deserve for this

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Heartless_Qi_

great novel by any means I appreciate the world setting and everything but for god's sake please update frequently or this novel will be forgotten. Ps hope gu has nothing to do with DAO marks even with millions of dao marks I bet it can still enlighten you and I doubt the protagonist can find hope gu since it is most likely refined by heaven like wisdom gu.