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4.16
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This story really blew my expectations out of the water. If I knew it was this good, I'd have read it way earlier. Really love the concept!!
I had a smile on my face the entire time reading it. Be warned, this is somewhat of a crack-comedy fiction, so don't expect any serious existential issues to surface.
Been laughing as I read this, honestly a good fan-fiction. Also doing a good 5.0 to offset the trolls below, who rated 1 stars without reading the story. If anything, I would recommend reading this! Story development is pretty good so far, the writing quality is also good. The stability of updates for the length is reasonable, and the world background so far has been great!
I like it, it's funny. This should have an AU tag because every character is OOC / an anime cliche. So don't expect this to be a serious and true to the original HP. Although I like the MC, I just can't stand most of the other characters. So I appreciate it more when the MC is on his own.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
The story is truly hilarious and different from other harry potter fanfiction. The concept and power of magic is great. Hope you continue, this great novel.
It was fine until it started going the anime powers route and stupidly dense protagonist. It changed from funny to annoying. I feel that at some point it will go so far off tracks that it will be an unsalvagable mess. And of course the overused Hermione (main?) lover.
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This is just the same lame joke over and over and over and over again. l . . . . .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
This is quite amusing and a very interesting idea, I agree with one of the comments, please let the cat become bigger or smaller(size change magic)
It's pretty funny, . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . what more do you want?
I'll look at your profile if I want to junior daoist. ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠿⠛⠛⠛⠋⠉⠈⠉⠉⠉⠉⠛⠻⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠋⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡏⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⣤⣤⣤⣄⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⢿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⢏⣴⣿⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣟⣾⣿⡟⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⢢⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣟⠀⡴⠄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⠟⠻⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠶⢴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿ ⣿⣁⡀⠀⠀⢰⢠⣦⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⠀⣴⣶⣿⡄⣿ ⣿⡋⠀⠀⠀⠎⢸⣿⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠗⢘⣿⣟⠛⠿⣼ ⣿⣿⠋⢀⡌⢰⣿⡿⢿⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠀⢸⣿⣿⣧⢀⣼ ⣿⣿⣷⢻⠄⠘⠛⠋⠛⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢿⣧⠈⠉⠙⠛⠋⠀⠀⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣧⠀⠈⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠟⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⢃⠀⠀⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡿⠀⠴⢗⣠⣤⣴⡶⠶⠖⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⡸⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡀⢠⣾⣿⠏⠀⠠⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠛⠉⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣧⠈⢹⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣰⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⠈⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣠⣴⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣠⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣄⣀⣀⣀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⡄⠀⠀⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⠀⠀⠀⠙⣿⣿⡟⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠇⠀⠁⠀⠀⠹⣿⠃⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠛⣿⣿⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢐⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠛⠉⠉⠁⠀⢻⣿⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠈⣿⣿⡿⠉⠛⠛⠛⠉⠉ ⣿⡿⠋⠁⠀⠀⢀⣀⣠⡴⣸⣿⣇⡄⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⡿⠄⠙⠛⠀⣀⣠⣤⣤⠄
It's gold. The story is fu**ng hilarious, and I had to go out from the library Was laughing too hard Didn't happen since reading Kyou kara ore wa, a manga
Wow you just had to make it funny and interesting, didn't ya? I come here for another Mary-sue and get the wonderful crookshanks himself. Jeez writers these days. Keep it up love it!
I like the story so far and it is different from your normal fanfic which give it more vibes. I am hoping for more chapters and keep up the good work. BEST WISHES!!!😊😊😊
Everything so far abou this book is perfect please keep writing 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😁😆😆😆😆😁😆😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😆😁😄😁😄😃😄😁😄😄😁😆😁😄😄😁😁😁😄😄😁😁😁😄😄😁😁😁😄😁🤣😄😁😁😁😆😆😆😁😄😃😀😀😄😄😁😆😃😃😄😁😆😆😁😁😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄 ……
Was honestly getting sick of the cliché HP fics but this has proved to be genuinely entertaining so far.
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This fanfic deserves a 5 star rating. I was so bored reading other fanfics with repetitive stories when I stumbled upon this absolute masterpiece. This is now my favourite HP story..I hope the author continues this...
This story really blew my expectations out of the water. If I knew it was this good, I'd have read it way earlier. Really love the concept!!
I had a smile on my face the entire time reading it. Be warned, this is somewhat of a crack-comedy fiction, so don't expect any serious existential issues to surface.
Been laughing as I read this, honestly a good fan-fiction. Also doing a good 5.0 to offset the trolls below, who rated 1 stars without reading the story. If anything, I would recommend reading this! Story development is pretty good so far, the writing quality is also good. The stability of updates for the length is reasonable, and the world background so far has been great!
I like it, it's funny. This should have an AU tag because every character is OOC / an anime cliche. So don't expect this to be a serious and true to the original HP. Although I like the MC, I just can't stand most of the other characters. So I appreciate it more when the MC is on his own.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story is truly hilarious and different from other harry potter fanfiction. The concept and power of magic is great. Hope you continue, this great novel.
It was fine until it started going the anime powers route and stupidly dense protagonist. It changed from funny to annoying. I feel that at some point it will go so far off tracks that it will be an unsalvagable mess. And of course the overused Hermione (main?) lover.
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This is just the same lame joke over and over and over and over again. l . . . . .
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is quite amusing and a very interesting idea, I agree with one of the comments, please let the cat become bigger or smaller(size change magic)
It's pretty funny, . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . what more do you want?
I'll look at your profile if I want to junior daoist. ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠿⠛⠛⠛⠋⠉⠈⠉⠉⠉⠉⠛⠻⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠋⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠛⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡏⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⣤⣤⣤⣄⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⢿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⢏⣴⣿⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣟⣾⣿⡟⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⢢⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣟⠀⡴⠄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⣄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⠟⠻⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠶⢴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿ ⣿⣁⡀⠀⠀⢰⢠⣦⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⠀⣴⣶⣿⡄⣿ ⣿⡋⠀⠀⠀⠎⢸⣿⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠗⢘⣿⣟⠛⠿⣼ ⣿⣿⠋⢀⡌⢰⣿⡿⢿⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠀⢸⣿⣿⣧⢀⣼ ⣿⣿⣷⢻⠄⠘⠛⠋⠛⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢿⣧⠈⠉⠙⠛⠋⠀⠀⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣧⠀⠈⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠟⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⢃⠀⠀⢸⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⡿⠀⠴⢗⣠⣤⣴⡶⠶⠖⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⡸⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡀⢠⣾⣿⠏⠀⠠⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠛⠉⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣧⠈⢹⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣰⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⠈⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣠⣴⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣠⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣄⣀⣀⣀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠘⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⡄⠀⠀⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⠀⠀⠀⠙⣿⣿⡟⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠇⠀⠁⠀⠀⠹⣿⠃⠀⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡿⠛⣿⣿⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢐⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠛⠉⠉⠁⠀⢻⣿⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠈⣿⣿⡿⠉⠛⠛⠛⠉⠉ ⣿⡿⠋⠁⠀⠀⢀⣀⣠⡴⣸⣿⣇⡄⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⡿⠄⠙⠛⠀⣀⣠⣤⣤⠄
It's gold. The story is fu**ng hilarious, and I had to go out from the library Was laughing too hard Didn't happen since reading Kyou kara ore wa, a manga
Wow you just had to make it funny and interesting, didn't ya? I come here for another Mary-sue and get the wonderful crookshanks himself. Jeez writers these days. Keep it up love it!
I like the story so far and it is different from your normal fanfic which give it more vibes. I am hoping for more chapters and keep up the good work. BEST WISHES!!!😊😊😊
Everything so far abou this book is perfect please keep writing 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😆😁😆😆😆😆😁😆😁😁😆😆😆😆😆😆😁😄😁😄😃😄😁😄😄😁😆😁😄😄😁😁😁😄😄😁😁😁😄😄😁😁😁😄😁🤣😄😁😁😁😆😆😆😁😄😃😀😀😄😄😁😆😃😃😄😁😆😆😁😁😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄 ……
Was honestly getting sick of the cliché HP fics but this has proved to be genuinely entertaining so far.
A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!! A great start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This fanfic deserves a 5 star rating. I was so bored reading other fanfics with repetitive stories when I stumbled upon this absolute masterpiece. This is now my favourite HP story..I hope the author continues this...