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- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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It's a great take on what if dabi was in Hunter X Hunter but some nen terms are not correct, overall great story.
I'm really excited to see where this goes. The writer is doing amazing things with this novel. I'm so happy for another good hxh story. Dabi's powers work really well here. I'm glad the mc is not uber op like other stories but still reasonably very strong.
it's a good story so far i hope to see more. one question why is this not in the fanfic section when I search hxh. 6rv6rvgggggggguguggg
This is better than I thought Good writing quality And I enjoy reading it Good luck, writer ╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯
I think this story has a lot of potential and the writing quality keeps improving. The fight scenes are by far the best part of the book and well described. It’s almost as if you can see, what’s going on, in front of your inner eye. The story is a bit fast paced, but otherwise I don’t have anything to complain about. Keep up the good work.
This was very interesting. I hope you continue. I enjoyed the fact that you were creative by using the idea of Ten to defend yourself so he can use his quirks, you were very creative. I wonder if you could maybe allow him to combine Nen with QUirk, so he can use Ten and his Quirk to defend himself, almost like an ultimate defense, basically like Gaaras Sand armor, but it's with creation flames. Otherwise, I enjoyed this and I hope you continued.
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It's a great take on what if dabi was in Hunter X Hunter but some nen terms are not correct, overall great story.
I'm really excited to see where this goes. The writer is doing amazing things with this novel. I'm so happy for another good hxh story. Dabi's powers work really well here. I'm glad the mc is not uber op like other stories but still reasonably very strong.
it's a good story so far i hope to see more. one question why is this not in the fanfic section when I search hxh. 6rv6rvgggggggguguggg
This is better than I thought Good writing quality And I enjoy reading it Good luck, writer ╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯╰(*°▽°*)╯
I think this story has a lot of potential and the writing quality keeps improving. The fight scenes are by far the best part of the book and well described. It’s almost as if you can see, what’s going on, in front of your inner eye. The story is a bit fast paced, but otherwise I don’t have anything to complain about. Keep up the good work.
This was very interesting. I hope you continue. I enjoyed the fact that you were creative by using the idea of Ten to defend yourself so he can use his quirks, you were very creative. I wonder if you could maybe allow him to combine Nen with QUirk, so he can use Ten and his Quirk to defend himself, almost like an ultimate defense, basically like Gaaras Sand armor, but it's with creation flames. Otherwise, I enjoyed this and I hope you continued.
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