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Little sisters & Daughters are the most annoying presence in the Novel. Just a resource sucker nothing else.. Also they can't contribute much in establishing "Cultivation family" unless the family is ready to accept the man from outside. so yeah, I think the genre didn't suit me so I don't like it but others can try it.
It’s pretty bad. I was around ch 70 or so and got tired of the MC and FML. She doesn’t even know how strong he is. And he doesn’t seem to care enough to tell her. Incredibly boring
It's a trash novel. if you want to read something about father daughter stuff then... stay at home, dad restraunt is significantly better. if you already read the others, then as long as you can tolerate the long stretches of nonsensical fighting and short bursts of how does she not know already, it is okay.
was a decent read till chapter 490 the translation dropped to mtl level couldn't continue anymore so had to drop it
The book was very informative the lack of good translation at the later chapters was disturbing but it a good read, if any book like this one please recommend[img=update]
Nice, got me hook enough to read it till chapter 11. I'll rest first and then continue tomorrow.
for me i think this novel is good so keep making more novels author hope to see more in the future and if you have haters dont mind them iits natural to have them in life no matter what you do there will always be someone who wont like you or anything you do goodluck
good and lengthy novel. I could have pointed out quite a lot of issues with this novel but it seems like author has noticed this ended things at good element before it gets too much boring and I appreciate it. well, I loved the plot and thanks for ending it.
First and foremost, the plot was riddled with repetition. It felt like I was reading the same scenes over and over again, with only minor variations to the dialogue or setting. As a result, the story failed to maintain my interest, and I found myself skimming through pages just to get to something new. Another major issue was the lack of creativity in the writing. The author relied heavily on tired tropes and clichés, and the characters felt flat and uninspired. It was particularly frustrating to see the main protagonist and heroine constantly referred to as "handsome" and "beautiful" without any real depth or nuance to their personalities. But perhaps the most frustrating aspect of the book was the confusing world development. The author seemed to have a lot of interesting ideas, but failed to fully flesh them out or connect them in a meaningful way. As a result, I found myself struggling to keep track of the various factions and their motivations, and ultimately felt disconnected from the story as a whole. All in all, while the book had its moments, the issues with plot repetition, lack of creativity, character design, and world development left me feeling disappointed and unsatisfied. I wouldn't recommend this book to others, and can only hope that the author will take these criticisms to heart in their future writing.
The plot is interesting and the system is not bad as well, not like most wish systems that assist Mc at every turn but the story flow is horrible, every new scene, around 10 to 20 new characters get introduced only to get amazed by how strong or intelligent the consort is then they are forgotten, this would be somewhat acceptable if it was brief but 2 to 3 chapters of introduction for these 1 scene characters is BS and guess what I'm around 200 chapters in and this has been repeating every 5 or so chapters, the interaction between the kids and Mc is sweet enough but isn't shown enough, more importance is given to those useless 1 time characters than the girls, it's rinse and repeat with new useless character and new scenario with same plot every time, I can't force myself to read just for the sweetness anymore
SKIP THIS BOOK..!!!! This book is interesting at first 100 chap. But it getting boring, repeated scheme, repeated spoiling children, repeating to be misteriouse from his wife. MC keep his strength hidden from his wife that HE IS MORE POWERFULL FOR 800++ CHAPTER. From chapter 200, I keep skipping chapters till 800, but MC keep hide his strength.. I getting bored, SKIP THIS BOOK.!!
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so just to be clear, I love everything about this book except the fact that his wife gets stronger way too fast. Its so annoying cause it removes the male leads superiority in a sense. I mean she basically advanced two major realms in less than a year which would normally take the best geniuses over ten thousand years. But I love the male leads advancement after all he has a system. It would be nice if his wife could slow down a bit. All in all its a great book.
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700+ chapters in, and the highly anticipated identity revealed never occured. Translation drop badly around ch 450+. I just continue reading the raws just for the single, identity reveal and hoping the romance between FMC and MC to blossom. The series got dragged out too much with the plot of "Kill the son, brought out the father, kill the father, brought out the ancestor". Literally everyone knew how powerful and op MC was, except the FMC. Not really worth it to read after chapter 400+, not worth it
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a mtl novel.. don't waste your time. this shou be remove from here. no actual translation on the later chapters .
Really started strong was a great read but after about 480 chapters or so the translation changed the names of people, places, and skills. So instead of being able to read and enjoy like I used to, I now have to re-read each paragraph to make sure that I translate the translation with the old names that you are used to. So in honest opinion if you want to read this novel be ready for a huge let down before it ends and have to do some translations yourself. And message to the author going forward. Don’t change your translator mid story it is horrible to the readers who have been with you for a long time.
its a good father doting for his cute daughters its really good but the translation changed
The names of most of the characters changes as tge story goes on it makes it difficult to understand
the mc is a completely trash and beta mc man got raped and was obsessed with her the sory itself is bad the fl is bad as well mc seems cowardly is to much of a pushover and the story is completely generic
Everything is the same how mc is powerful and how he good and so on but I put up with it and now it getting fking worse all the 4 kid name is change and so random, n now they become maid “the maidservants imme diately put down their spoons and ran to her excitedly.”mother is here”. Are you for real? You want me to pay for this trash?
Quick question I’m only a bit into this novel right now and am wondering if or when his wife finds out how strong he is? I want to know just so I have some chapter to look forward to?
I loved to read this story right up until ch 489. Now that the translation is so bad that the little girls get called maid servants I really can’t bring my self to continue reading this as much as I wish I could.
I know many novels have it where the MC gets things right before he needs it, and this one does it too. But it’s so cute and funny I think that that aspect improves the story a lot. Thanks for the great novel so far Author!
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From After ch 488, the translation got worse. Please fix it I cant beat to read it with trash translation
mmm I don't know where to start. First he has an overpowered system and is kinda lazy which I really appreciate. Second he is the most handsome man in their world and he marries the most beautiful woman and has four really adorable daughters. Everywhere he goes he turns heads due to his looks, strength or talent. Lastly we have his relationship with his wife which is a mix of shyness and ignorance. All in all a very lovely book though his wife might not like it when she finds out he is a cultivator.
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Bird die for food, human die from greed :) ......................Bird die for food, human die from greed :) ......................Bird die for food, human die from greed :) ......................
story is quite good. translations are good but i dont get how come the empress cant find mc is cultivator and powerful , and sometimes its so dumb how they show how stupid is empress and mc. but except that one point everything else is quite good
The story is written in such a way that it seems a 6 yr old kid wrote it from his fantasies . I swear no grown up can have such rubbish imagination. 1) the mc is famous for his cultivation and his literary skills, everyone in the royal palace praises him , everyone knows he's extremely powerful and has defeated extremely powerful villains within seconds, BUT according to the author his wife , who's the empress of that empire is unaware of it.....bruh.... 2) the story is idiotic, system literary gives him cultivation, techniques and makes him overpowered just by taking care of his daughters.....literally mc takes 0 risk . he doesn't even cultivate at all , nor does he learn techniques or anything, everything is done by system just by him taking care of his daughter.......like mc makes food for daughter2 , he gets 500 yrs of cultivation......seriously???? what's the logic???? other system novels at least have logic that mc killed and absorbed their energy, or he gets their fate energy or mc gets the yin energy by dual cultivation or mc changes fate of world and gets fate energy or mc absorbs energy from energy sources.........what do our mc do? he tells a story to his daughter and gets 1000 yrs of cultivation 3) the dialogs .....oh my God, kill me . Any 15 yr old kid with a little common sense can write better than that. Read 5-6 chapters and u will understand 4) mc is boring, very boring, he takes care of daughter, gets stronger , kills his enemies who come to assassinate, and then he ignores his wife ( literally untill the end of the story) , he doesn't say anything to her except what's necessary . To sum it up , if u want to increase your mental strength by reading something that will make u want to kill the author and kill yourself, read it . and webnovel, seriously bro it's time you stop allowing such idiotic novels to even exist , the app has become full of garbage, do something
Little sisters & Daughters are the most annoying presence in the Novel. Just a resource sucker nothing else.. Also they can't contribute much in establishing "Cultivation family" unless the family is ready to accept the man from outside. so yeah, I think the genre didn't suit me so I don't like it but others can try it.
It’s pretty bad. I was around ch 70 or so and got tired of the MC and FML. She doesn’t even know how strong he is. And he doesn’t seem to care enough to tell her. Incredibly boring
It's a trash novel. if you want to read something about father daughter stuff then... stay at home, dad restraunt is significantly better. if you already read the others, then as long as you can tolerate the long stretches of nonsensical fighting and short bursts of how does she not know already, it is okay.
was a decent read till chapter 490 the translation dropped to mtl level couldn't continue anymore so had to drop it
The book was very informative the lack of good translation at the later chapters was disturbing but it a good read, if any book like this one please recommend[img=update]
Nice, got me hook enough to read it till chapter 11. I'll rest first and then continue tomorrow.
for me i think this novel is good so keep making more novels author hope to see more in the future and if you have haters dont mind them iits natural to have them in life no matter what you do there will always be someone who wont like you or anything you do goodluck
good and lengthy novel. I could have pointed out quite a lot of issues with this novel but it seems like author has noticed this ended things at good element before it gets too much boring and I appreciate it. well, I loved the plot and thanks for ending it.
First and foremost, the plot was riddled with repetition. It felt like I was reading the same scenes over and over again, with only minor variations to the dialogue or setting. As a result, the story failed to maintain my interest, and I found myself skimming through pages just to get to something new. Another major issue was the lack of creativity in the writing. The author relied heavily on tired tropes and clichés, and the characters felt flat and uninspired. It was particularly frustrating to see the main protagonist and heroine constantly referred to as "handsome" and "beautiful" without any real depth or nuance to their personalities. But perhaps the most frustrating aspect of the book was the confusing world development. The author seemed to have a lot of interesting ideas, but failed to fully flesh them out or connect them in a meaningful way. As a result, I found myself struggling to keep track of the various factions and their motivations, and ultimately felt disconnected from the story as a whole. All in all, while the book had its moments, the issues with plot repetition, lack of creativity, character design, and world development left me feeling disappointed and unsatisfied. I wouldn't recommend this book to others, and can only hope that the author will take these criticisms to heart in their future writing.
The plot is interesting and the system is not bad as well, not like most wish systems that assist Mc at every turn but the story flow is horrible, every new scene, around 10 to 20 new characters get introduced only to get amazed by how strong or intelligent the consort is then they are forgotten, this would be somewhat acceptable if it was brief but 2 to 3 chapters of introduction for these 1 scene characters is BS and guess what I'm around 200 chapters in and this has been repeating every 5 or so chapters, the interaction between the kids and Mc is sweet enough but isn't shown enough, more importance is given to those useless 1 time characters than the girls, it's rinse and repeat with new useless character and new scenario with same plot every time, I can't force myself to read just for the sweetness anymore
SKIP THIS BOOK..!!!! This book is interesting at first 100 chap. But it getting boring, repeated scheme, repeated spoiling children, repeating to be misteriouse from his wife. MC keep his strength hidden from his wife that HE IS MORE POWERFULL FOR 800++ CHAPTER. From chapter 200, I keep skipping chapters till 800, but MC keep hide his strength.. I getting bored, SKIP THIS BOOK.!!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ so just to be clear, I love everything about this book except the fact that his wife gets stronger way too fast. Its so annoying cause it removes the male leads superiority in a sense. I mean she basically advanced two major realms in less than a year which would normally take the best geniuses over ten thousand years. But I love the male leads advancement after all he has a system. It would be nice if his wife could slow down a bit. All in all its a great book.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ 700+ chapters in, and the highly anticipated identity revealed never occured. Translation drop badly around ch 450+. I just continue reading the raws just for the single, identity reveal and hoping the romance between FMC and MC to blossom. The series got dragged out too much with the plot of "Kill the son, brought out the father, kill the father, brought out the ancestor". Literally everyone knew how powerful and op MC was, except the FMC. Not really worth it to read after chapter 400+, not worth it
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ a mtl novel.. don't waste your time. this shou be remove from here. no actual translation on the later chapters .
Really started strong was a great read but after about 480 chapters or so the translation changed the names of people, places, and skills. So instead of being able to read and enjoy like I used to, I now have to re-read each paragraph to make sure that I translate the translation with the old names that you are used to. So in honest opinion if you want to read this novel be ready for a huge let down before it ends and have to do some translations yourself. And message to the author going forward. Don’t change your translator mid story it is horrible to the readers who have been with you for a long time.
its a good father doting for his cute daughters its really good but the translation changed
The names of most of the characters changes as tge story goes on it makes it difficult to understand
the mc is a completely trash and beta mc man got raped and was obsessed with her the sory itself is bad the fl is bad as well mc seems cowardly is to much of a pushover and the story is completely generic
Everything is the same how mc is powerful and how he good and so on but I put up with it and now it getting fking worse all the 4 kid name is change and so random, n now they become maid “the maidservants imme diately put down their spoons and ran to her excitedly.”mother is here”. Are you for real? You want me to pay for this trash?
Quick question I’m only a bit into this novel right now and am wondering if or when his wife finds out how strong he is? I want to know just so I have some chapter to look forward to?
I loved to read this story right up until ch 489. Now that the translation is so bad that the little girls get called maid servants I really can’t bring my self to continue reading this as much as I wish I could.
I know many novels have it where the MC gets things right before he needs it, and this one does it too. But it’s so cute and funny I think that that aspect improves the story a lot. Thanks for the great novel so far Author!
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ From After ch 488, the translation got worse. Please fix it I cant beat to read it with trash translation
mmm I don't know where to start. First he has an overpowered system and is kinda lazy which I really appreciate. Second he is the most handsome man in their world and he marries the most beautiful woman and has four really adorable daughters. Everywhere he goes he turns heads due to his looks, strength or talent. Lastly we have his relationship with his wife which is a mix of shyness and ignorance. All in all a very lovely book though his wife might not like it when she finds out he is a cultivator.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Bird die for food, human die from greed :) ......................Bird die for food, human die from greed :) ......................Bird die for food, human die from greed :) ......................
story is quite good. translations are good but i dont get how come the empress cant find mc is cultivator and powerful , and sometimes its so dumb how they show how stupid is empress and mc. but except that one point everything else is quite good
The story is written in such a way that it seems a 6 yr old kid wrote it from his fantasies . I swear no grown up can have such rubbish imagination. 1) the mc is famous for his cultivation and his literary skills, everyone in the royal palace praises him , everyone knows he's extremely powerful and has defeated extremely powerful villains within seconds, BUT according to the author his wife , who's the empress of that empire is unaware of it.....bruh.... 2) the story is idiotic, system literary gives him cultivation, techniques and makes him overpowered just by taking care of his daughters.....literally mc takes 0 risk . he doesn't even cultivate at all , nor does he learn techniques or anything, everything is done by system just by him taking care of his daughter.......like mc makes food for daughter2 , he gets 500 yrs of cultivation......seriously???? what's the logic???? other system novels at least have logic that mc killed and absorbed their energy, or he gets their fate energy or mc gets the yin energy by dual cultivation or mc changes fate of world and gets fate energy or mc absorbs energy from energy sources.........what do our mc do? he tells a story to his daughter and gets 1000 yrs of cultivation 3) the dialogs .....oh my God, kill me . Any 15 yr old kid with a little common sense can write better than that. Read 5-6 chapters and u will understand 4) mc is boring, very boring, he takes care of daughter, gets stronger , kills his enemies who come to assassinate, and then he ignores his wife ( literally untill the end of the story) , he doesn't say anything to her except what's necessary . To sum it up , if u want to increase your mental strength by reading something that will make u want to kill the author and kill yourself, read it . and webnovel, seriously bro it's time you stop allowing such idiotic novels to even exist , the app has become full of garbage, do something