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4.29 (20 เรตติ้ง)
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On rewrite
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เขียนรีวิวWell what can I do except be shameless and give myself Five stars. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์Honestly I couldn't get past a the first few chapters, not because the story is bad, no the storyline you have chosen to follow within blackclover is decidedly average. No the reason why this fic is bad is because of your terrible grammar and spelling : commas in the rong places, getting the tenses of the verbs rong, messing up the sentence construction between plural and singular and having a overall bad vocabulary.
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did not like! the reason? I'm not obligated to say, go read. ................................................................................
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I don't usually do review but I will just say I like the pacing of this story. it's not too fast nor too slow. I love the character development and it looks like author knows what he is doing. it's not bad nor the best, it's just BALANCED. I love this
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it is a good novel very good novel but it is short and it is some time confusing like i need to read the same part3 or 4 times to undrstand what are going on but it is a good novel
Honestly I’ve enjoyed this fan fic. However there are errors and things that make this fan fic decidedly only decent. The grammer is bad but it gets better throughout. The storyline is average but I enjoy how the author stuck to the original plot for the most part and didn’t add some bs lame plot. The mc isn’t very appealing to readers, he is a more mature version of asta. Idk if that’s what the author was going for but it makes the character meh. The loud crass behavior around yuno Isn’t it for me. He is witty when he flirts which I enjoy but in aspects of life and fights he doesn’t use that wit. I feel like the power scaling has been dramatically stretched so the mc has more to grow to keep the story from ending to early. There are a few chapters that are just so slow and lame that it’s hard to read. The system the mc has is also confusing and overly ominous for no reason. I’m sorry for rambling without a clear order but I just typed as I thought so I’m really sorry.
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Bro this story is perfect pace is not slow or fast it perfect i have nothing but praises for this story just pls dont drop it..
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