Dxd :Hero Returned of Isekai

LV 3

Gabichu_Yeah

I really hate Issei as a person and as a protagonist, MC is Issei's best friend and supports him, so this story is a 1/5 in my opinion and I don't think he will come back, the grammar is horrible and the gender of people is not understood in certain scenes. And Issei got his original harem, so... im fking go

LV 1

Rsssse

Grammar is worse than MTL, character, and stories are bad. And if you hate Issei, then you will hate this fanfic more because the mc just supports Issei, and Issei still will get his original harem.

LV 13

NovelMonster

Get an editor. Great premise. Poor execution. Editor. Editor. Editor. Get an editor. Do it. Do it. Just do it. Not grammarly…..or maybe try it, but I don’t think it’ll be enough.

LV 1

maria_garcia_4449

The only romance that the MC has was the first chapter. He says he wants to live in peace but does not leave the Town or try to get away from the supernatural world. HE IS A FRIEND OF ISSEI. ............................................................

LV 4

Uksmal

The MC is a friend of Issei... ................................................... ...............................

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc beta and stupid [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 5

Biggubosu

Man, I don't care about grammar, but it is annoying that mc agrees with everything that is thrown at him. Ah! he is a hero, but that is no reason for him to agree with everything, or better yet, if he really was a hero, he should already start slaughtering the three factions completely, after all, they are the ones who cause the most misery for humans. But this is ignored by him ? Really? UwU [ Use Deepl, and Grammarly. This will improve your grammar, don't forget to reread what is written at least twice. ]

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc beta . Mc simp. MC is Isse's dog [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 3

Mark133_Gt

The story is moving at a nice pace and it seems that the story itself is interesting with having alot of potential just hope that he wont join any peeragesi want to see him as a op human that might become a god

LV 2

Skiffard

Friend of Issei... [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

LV 1

Godchama

Good concept trash execution... nonsensical decision.. In conclusion, a wasted potential fic because of the subpar iq of the author.............

LV 3

DontCallMeSimp

:U

LV 4

Evilswordmank423

The gramar are non readable stat form my point and mc is a pathetic loser i mean his woman was seal and he has no problem with that.........

LV 3

abcdefghi987654321

A meh fanfic ✌🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞✌🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞👌🤞🤞👌🤞🤞🤟🤞🤞🤟🤞🤞🤞🤞👋🤚🤚🤚🤚🤚🤟🤞👋✌✌🤞👌✌🤞🤟🤚🕳🤟🤞✌👌✌✌✌✌🤞🤞🤟🖖👋🖖🤞🤞👌👋👌🕳🗨👋🗨💢💨🤚💢💤🗨💨🗨🤞🗨💨🗨🕳💢💤💢🕳🗯🤟💨🗯💨🗯💤👌👋👌🗯🛃🛅🛃🛅🚭🚹🚭🛅🚹🏘🏜🌏🏖🗻🗾🗻🏘🐅🦍🐩🐈🐮🐅🐈🐯🐈🐅🦓🐯🦓🐅🐱🐅🐅🐅🐅👋👌👋👌👋👌👋🤖😽🤖😽🤖😽😿😽💩👽🤖👽🛍👘🛍👘👘🛍🛍🎍🎏🎋🎐🎋✨🎍

LV 4

DeepCloud

I like the concept of the story and this could have been a really enjoyable read but your writing quality and grammar are simply atrocius. It's hard to keep reading. You need to seriously reconsider your plot development, charcter design and ofc. grammar.

LV 2

wrobe06118

im sorry i dont get all the 5 star reviews when i can barely even read the first chapter with how bad the english is but the story looks good it just got ruined so much cos of no editing

LV 2

Kamsurik_980

Hay~ Here's Author-kun who gives five stars for his own work!............................................................................................[img=recommend]

LV 1

Js_Sensei

I immediately disliked this novel when I found out that the MC is Issei's friend.................................................................................................................................

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc is beta and cuckold man. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]