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Never thought I would read a story that uses lewdness to get stronger but it was still a good read nonetheless, would definitely recommend to read it, as its worth your time.
this is a very good book but I've been wondering when you the author will continue writing more[img=update][img=update][img=update]. When I first started to read it I couldn't put it down and now I'm hooked and want more .
Highly recommend this book, very enjoyable. Characters are comedically at points and feel realistic to an extent. The idea of video game world alongside real world is always a + for me. Character development is slow, but reasonably so being a new game without much information on it and the real has interesting developments as well which are slightly quicker. The abilities are unique and the MC is not overpowered. The only downside being the very slow release rate and the minimal amount of reviews/readers. I do hope this book continues, but I can see it coming to a halt due to lack of support by the community.
It is a wonderful novel. The plot is interesting. We will always support you..............................................................................................................................................
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This is good keep up the good work author. and if you can..... MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE also.... Thank you for your excellent work!!!
this is good...........................................................................................................................................
I hear they hold hands in this book. So lewd. I could never read something like that. but, if you are not against that... read on. I hear there are more lewd things to come.
La historia es muy buena, y puede tener un gran desarrollo. Pero toda esa escena por tomarse de las manos me parece un poco excesivo, no están haciendo mucho más.
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The book is just starting and it's already wonderful, I'm expecting much, so please don't disappoint me on this one too. You know what we like.
Nice to meet you! I love writing this book currently. And I hope you enjoy reading it! It will be a VRMMORPG game with cultivation elements and some lewd handholding. Don't read if you're not into that.
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Never thought I would read a story that uses lewdness to get stronger but it was still a good read nonetheless, would definitely recommend to read it, as its worth your time.
this is a very good book but I've been wondering when you the author will continue writing more[img=update][img=update][img=update]. When I first started to read it I couldn't put it down and now I'm hooked and want more .
Highly recommend this book, very enjoyable. Characters are comedically at points and feel realistic to an extent. The idea of video game world alongside real world is always a + for me. Character development is slow, but reasonably so being a new game without much information on it and the real has interesting developments as well which are slightly quicker. The abilities are unique and the MC is not overpowered. The only downside being the very slow release rate and the minimal amount of reviews/readers. I do hope this book continues, but I can see it coming to a halt due to lack of support by the community.
It is a wonderful novel. The plot is interesting. We will always support you..............................................................................................................................................
Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
This is good keep up the good work author. and if you can..... MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE MORE UPDATES PLEASEEEEE also.... Thank you for your excellent work!!!
this is good...........................................................................................................................................
I hear they hold hands in this book. So lewd. I could never read something like that. but, if you are not against that... read on. I hear there are more lewd things to come.
La historia es muy buena, y puede tener un gran desarrollo. Pero toda esa escena por tomarse de las manos me parece un poco excesivo, no están haciendo mucho más.
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 5/5. Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.5/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The book is just starting and it's already wonderful, I'm expecting much, so please don't disappoint me on this one too. You know what we like.
Nice to meet you! I love writing this book currently. And I hope you enjoy reading it! It will be a VRMMORPG game with cultivation elements and some lewd handholding. Don't read if you're not into that.