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I started reading this novel since 2 days ago at the beginning it’s good am 430 in chapter and he still hasn’t ascend to a higher realm and it torturing me. If like really slow novel this the nove for you.
A very average and bare bones cultivation novel with a "twist" in the form of a game-like system. Readers won't find anything fresh here. Not even something that's done better then the competition.Two notable "features":- Horrendous English. Anything that can be butchered about grammar, syntaxis or punctuation is butchered to the point that you'll be guessing what the heck it supposed to mean more half the time- Ridiculous level of inconsistency in character stats and power levels even by the already poor standards of web novels. For a system based narrative it's a major sin
If not for completing the mission, i would've never come across such a masterpiece. Writing quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ There are some minor grammatical mistakes but not enough to spoil the fun of reading. Story development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I pace of the story is normal. The more you read the more intresting it becomes. Character designs: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character doesn't feel one dimensional. Update stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Overall a decent but intresting read.
all i can say this is: 1. messy power structure 2. mc brain frying logic and iq 3. pokemon catch them all simulator above 3 point already sufficient enough to discourage me to read further adios dear fellow reader and i want to point that this book review section seem sus
Realmente nada nuevo. Típica historia de protagonista chino que reencarna en un joven maestro que tiene un sistema que aprende habilidades y se vuelve fuerte rápido(OJO que soy de los que prefiere los protagonistas fuerte desde el inicio o que sepan aprovechar sus habilidades y conocimientos para hacerse más fuertes) pero es nada nuevo. Miras feo? Te mato. Miras a mi familia? Te mato. Todo el universo se cree que gira a su alrededor. Arrogante a más no poder. Bastante estúpido ya que si es inteligente llegará al nivel más alto en 1 año como mucho y entonces no habría historia. Lo que en mi opinión es una razón muy estúpida para nerfrar tal poder. Para que se lo da entonces? Niños rodeados de niños malcriados y se creen el centro de atención. Macho de verdad es que no hay autores chinos que sepan escribir algo decente? Por qué todos parecen niños de 10 o menos a la hora de escribir? Entiendo que sea un mundo donde el poder lo es todo, pero me niego a creer que a pesar de ser un mundo así todos parezcan retrasados sin dos dedos de frente. En fin... Decepción detrás de decepción. Me planteo seriamente dejar de leer novelas.
Grammar are bad and the plot feels so wrong on many levels. No proper explanation on cultivation levels what so ever. So many loopholes as the story goes on. I tried to endure reading until i can't take it anymore. Gonna drop this now. 😑
Unbelievable how an author can destroy a good book. The first 100 chapters are very god but after that there is nothing just wish fulfilment and not the good kind no development ... The biggest mistake is the world change it makes no sense, why go back to the modern or real world? it is just not fun reading anymore and has nothing to do with the good parts of this book 20 or so chapters in the real world would have been ok but there is just no end to it. save your money it is not worth the 30 dollars
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Well I like this book even the grammar was bad 140 words are too long........................................................................
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The story seems to have a good concept, but the mc is generally pretty dumb and doesn't seem to know what common sense is. Also the grammer even on the "edited" chapters is pretty bad.
Novel started off decently good but started going downhill fast and overall I think I would rather read mtl novels then this because this is worse
The writing quality seems to get worse and worse the further I read, I would it compare it to a mtl chinese web novel in terms of quality not worth anyones time reading if I'm being honest.
this is like reading a chinese cultivation novel, u lose braincells each chapter. i wonder what drugs the author is taking to continue this story.
Not a bad novel actually pretty decent but has many issues such there's a lack of consistency in such as the author forgetting what stage of a technique he is at, there other issues such as adding edited to a chapter yet it being filled with errors and awkward sentences everywhere throughout the chapter there is no way someone proofread it. Would recommend no one spend any money on this since they can't be bothered to fix their mistakes when pointed out by the readers.
Immense trash the first 10 chapters are barely readable and if you continue you will begin to lose brain cells. The author and his friends spammed fake 5-star reviews to get his review higher. TrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrash
I am losing my trust against Chinese with this reviews. How is this novel possibly gets this high score, with this bad grammer is beyond me.
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One star to balance out obvious rating manipulation. If you have to manipulate the review ratings, your a sorry sad excuse for a human being....
this is bad..........................................................................................................................................
It's a the same with all other novels. Mc does not cut the roots of his troubles. Let it grow and harm him back. The grand elder is so indecisive. A stronger fist rules over anything. Imagine the trouble with his clan member can be solved if the grand elder banishes his son to another place than waiting for a ticking time bomb for his clan. He has an idea that his son is involved with the 3rd prince and he knows that It is a danger if one is involves with the royal family. The usual novels having powerful system and a lower iq Mc supporters to pave way for Mc . I can't believe that when he is keeping his relationship with his servant he can't even notice his surroundings and his relationship was found out. Please make it logical. Having 2 lives should at least give him a chance not to be naive
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This Author is just a fake Review Maker. 7 fake 5 star Reviews just because of one 1 star Review. AuthorI and his friend are both brainless Idiots
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a terribly written novel with improper English being used everywhere you look and the story development is also lacking for an example out of nowhere he just automatically has Qi but the last time the author showed his stats he had none he just got it out of nowhere without the author explaining to us how he got it or got over the fact that he was never able to cultivate his Qi before, there are many examples of this in the story leaving the readers to have to assume and make our own analysis of what happened
I started reading this novel since 2 days ago at the beginning it’s good am 430 in chapter and he still hasn’t ascend to a higher realm and it torturing me. If like really slow novel this the nove for you.
A very average and bare bones cultivation novel with a "twist" in the form of a game-like system. Readers won't find anything fresh here. Not even something that's done better then the competition.Two notable "features":- Horrendous English. Anything that can be butchered about grammar, syntaxis or punctuation is butchered to the point that you'll be guessing what the heck it supposed to mean more half the time- Ridiculous level of inconsistency in character stats and power levels even by the already poor standards of web novels. For a system based narrative it's a major sin
If not for completing the mission, i would've never come across such a masterpiece. Writing quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ There are some minor grammatical mistakes but not enough to spoil the fun of reading. Story development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I pace of the story is normal. The more you read the more intresting it becomes. Character designs: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character doesn't feel one dimensional. Update stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ world background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Overall a decent but intresting read.
all i can say this is: 1. messy power structure 2. mc brain frying logic and iq 3. pokemon catch them all simulator above 3 point already sufficient enough to discourage me to read further adios dear fellow reader and i want to point that this book review section seem sus
Realmente nada nuevo. Típica historia de protagonista chino que reencarna en un joven maestro que tiene un sistema que aprende habilidades y se vuelve fuerte rápido(OJO que soy de los que prefiere los protagonistas fuerte desde el inicio o que sepan aprovechar sus habilidades y conocimientos para hacerse más fuertes) pero es nada nuevo. Miras feo? Te mato. Miras a mi familia? Te mato. Todo el universo se cree que gira a su alrededor. Arrogante a más no poder. Bastante estúpido ya que si es inteligente llegará al nivel más alto en 1 año como mucho y entonces no habría historia. Lo que en mi opinión es una razón muy estúpida para nerfrar tal poder. Para que se lo da entonces? Niños rodeados de niños malcriados y se creen el centro de atención. Macho de verdad es que no hay autores chinos que sepan escribir algo decente? Por qué todos parecen niños de 10 o menos a la hora de escribir? Entiendo que sea un mundo donde el poder lo es todo, pero me niego a creer que a pesar de ser un mundo así todos parezcan retrasados sin dos dedos de frente. En fin... Decepción detrás de decepción. Me planteo seriamente dejar de leer novelas.
Grammar are bad and the plot feels so wrong on many levels. No proper explanation on cultivation levels what so ever. So many loopholes as the story goes on. I tried to endure reading until i can't take it anymore. Gonna drop this now. 😑
Unbelievable how an author can destroy a good book. The first 100 chapters are very god but after that there is nothing just wish fulfilment and not the good kind no development ... The biggest mistake is the world change it makes no sense, why go back to the modern or real world? it is just not fun reading anymore and has nothing to do with the good parts of this book 20 or so chapters in the real world would have been ok but there is just no end to it. save your money it is not worth the 30 dollars
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Well I like this book even the grammar was bad 140 words are too long........................................................................
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The story seems to have a good concept, but the mc is generally pretty dumb and doesn't seem to know what common sense is. Also the grammer even on the "edited" chapters is pretty bad.
Novel started off decently good but started going downhill fast and overall I think I would rather read mtl novels then this because this is worse
The writing quality seems to get worse and worse the further I read, I would it compare it to a mtl chinese web novel in terms of quality not worth anyones time reading if I'm being honest.
this is like reading a chinese cultivation novel, u lose braincells each chapter. i wonder what drugs the author is taking to continue this story.
Not a bad novel actually pretty decent but has many issues such there's a lack of consistency in such as the author forgetting what stage of a technique he is at, there other issues such as adding edited to a chapter yet it being filled with errors and awkward sentences everywhere throughout the chapter there is no way someone proofread it. Would recommend no one spend any money on this since they can't be bothered to fix their mistakes when pointed out by the readers.
Immense trash the first 10 chapters are barely readable and if you continue you will begin to lose brain cells. The author and his friends spammed fake 5-star reviews to get his review higher. TrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrashTrash
I am losing my trust against Chinese with this reviews. How is this novel possibly gets this high score, with this bad grammer is beyond me.
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One star to balance out obvious rating manipulation. If you have to manipulate the review ratings, your a sorry sad excuse for a human being....
this is bad..........................................................................................................................................
It's a the same with all other novels. Mc does not cut the roots of his troubles. Let it grow and harm him back. The grand elder is so indecisive. A stronger fist rules over anything. Imagine the trouble with his clan member can be solved if the grand elder banishes his son to another place than waiting for a ticking time bomb for his clan. He has an idea that his son is involved with the 3rd prince and he knows that It is a danger if one is involves with the royal family. The usual novels having powerful system and a lower iq Mc supporters to pave way for Mc . I can't believe that when he is keeping his relationship with his servant he can't even notice his surroundings and his relationship was found out. Please make it logical. Having 2 lives should at least give him a chance not to be naive
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This Author is just a fake Review Maker. 7 fake 5 star Reviews just because of one 1 star Review. AuthorI and his friend are both brainless Idiots
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a terribly written novel with improper English being used everywhere you look and the story development is also lacking for an example out of nowhere he just automatically has Qi but the last time the author showed his stats he had none he just got it out of nowhere without the author explaining to us how he got it or got over the fact that he was never able to cultivate his Qi before, there are many examples of this in the story leaving the readers to have to assume and make our own analysis of what happened