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Nothing more to say This book is pro u should read this once not like those novels in which Villan MC trys to get all the the Protagonist girls and stuff it's quite good u should try once
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it was awesome till ch 280 why all the characters on that planet mc mc wife mc enemy mc lover in past character mc maid someone who met the mc in the past 100ch why did you make this like that mc enemy was in another world in another dimension he was so far also mc's wife she was so far and weren't heard about her the Immortal world people, how did they get in this place you was writing good but you made the biggest drop in this novel so don't write a villain story ever cause you have feelings the villain mc shouldn't have feelings has no mercy no love
I wonder when the author will pick this novel back up and let me know because to me this plot was beyond interesting and the style is very comfortable. Keep up the good work can’t wait to see what other troupes and protagonist to be seen and dealt with.
Tbh I like these types of novels and it’s unique to me but why has it been dropped for over a year? It’s very satisfactory to me, I like the plot and the MC’s personality to me is exactly how I like it. He stands on business and I like that about him
Dear author what happened here is it drop or hiatus or you just forgot this? why the last update is 1 year ago?? i like this because it is good
[First of all, this novel doesn't have any elements of a brainless Harem, our MC will not be like other MC who every time he goes somewhere he will bring another woman. But there is romance, and the heroin is a very strong like peerless empress reincarnation.] If you see disclaimers such at the summary/synopsis section, it's usually a red flag. This basically means author is incapable of properly conveying their intent through their writing of the main story so they made a separate footnote like this. I can get behind the 3 stars reviews but 5 stars? Did the author bribe those people or something? Or is that just the standard of Webnovel in general?
I really like this book but I don't know why author stop updating the book. If anyone know comment
used to read this story as soon as it came out... dunno why it got dropped but you can give it a try once maybe the author will continue someday but....
wow this is complete garbage i didn't expect much but i as still disappointed i endured for the 150 ch so i can say it with complete faith that this is garbage and there is no redeeming quality for it . will i explain why is it garbage no this is reached the worst level the level that makes me want other people to read it to suffer with me .
typical story, noting special like Chinese face slapping,arrogant, naive brain dead characters and the characters isn't life like we don't get to know about others characters life in depth mostly only shows mc plus very disappointed at mc character i also thought it single heroine but from mc attitude it doesn't look like it but if it is single fl then MC's char is very trash like from what i've read.....
i read until the last chapter, there some confusing plot like lin tian(mc) have the same face with lin tian (ji xian ex lover), but in the later chapter lintan(mc) had similiar face with mo xie, does that mean the three of them have the same face or author just forget about it and make mistake, and why would the author make another novel with basically the same titile with this novel but with different mc, did u just drop this?i think its stil have potential, i quite enjoy this
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I like it very much so far, but I am wondering if you are planning on continuing it (because I don't want to spend money in seeing the advanced chapter if you dropped, hope you don't mind it). I hope you continue with this wonderful story
.. ..what can I say. .. The our villainous mc says he acts like a villain but he completely acts like a protag. Like other unoriginal villain mc's. The world is also way too convenient. Like how on earth can some random powerhouse be invited to be the prestigious leader of a top organization? ? They dont even know him, his skills, and whether he has unterior motives. No organization that acts like that would be a top organization. Also the reveal of his OP power. It makes no sense. What if they question him why he previously hid his power?? He isnt even pretending to try to hide it. The original 'protag' and 'protag's best friend' are acting like common villains. Other than switching their titles, this is a common not well done face-slapping modern cultuvation novel with one-faced villains.
More updates please author!!!!! Why didn't you not updating any more!!!!!
It's been over a month so why author the isn't updating this novel. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ...
This is one of better urban novels. PRos: - MC does not have harem. -MC is not stupid af and arrogant like in other novels -Characters have life and not just used for Mc to step up. -Story is interesting and has huge scope to expand. Cons: -Mc cares too much about things -Mc is not enough ruthless towards women as he should be, come on man u r supposed to be a villain. -stupid army building by MC which is irrelevant in long run.
okay, I gave this novel a try, i like the idea, but the writer or translator needs to get someone to edit the english and the he needs to setup a better timeline of events.. wish you luck, but i will be dropping this novel.. its hard to read with all these grammer mistakes... and some times i need to go back and make sure I understood correctly.. and that is also a pain. thanks, and keep on trying... [img=recommend]
well, I just started reading.. the idea is good, i just hope the english gets better.. but I will continue to read... ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Glad to find a cultivator story without harem, they're truly too few, so I need to ask whether the story has been dropped because I haven't seen any updated for more than a week
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Writing Quality: Terrible (1) Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3) Plot Development: Yes...just no (1) Character Design: China (2) Prehistory of the World: Modern Cultivation (1) Verdict: A piece of cultivator's nonsense, in the modern world, which lowers its significance even more. I do not advise.
The novel is great, you can call it gold, love it so much, it gives you a different perspective than the usual type of novels we already used to, see the villa pov
TRASH this is why i hate nit harem because there will be a girl left out like gu yixian she sacrifed herself to save the mc but she didn't even got an happy ending atleast for now i don't know she will resurrect.
Good novel. <3 ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️.
biarpun ada beberapa orang yang sok elit ngasih sedikit bintang. sebagai seorang guru, saya menilai bahwa kamu adalah orang yang hanya bermodalkan nekat, nekat, dan nekat. kamu terlalu nekat untuk menjadi mandiri. kalau kamu murid di sekolah saya, kamu akan menjadi murid kesayangan saya. pokoknya semangatlah dalam berkarya dan bekerja sebagai manusia yang mandiri.
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Nothing more to say This book is pro u should read this once not like those novels in which Villan MC trys to get all the the Protagonist girls and stuff it's quite good u should try once
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it was awesome till ch 280 why all the characters on that planet mc mc wife mc enemy mc lover in past character mc maid someone who met the mc in the past 100ch why did you make this like that mc enemy was in another world in another dimension he was so far also mc's wife she was so far and weren't heard about her the Immortal world people, how did they get in this place you was writing good but you made the biggest drop in this novel so don't write a villain story ever cause you have feelings the villain mc shouldn't have feelings has no mercy no love
I wonder when the author will pick this novel back up and let me know because to me this plot was beyond interesting and the style is very comfortable. Keep up the good work can’t wait to see what other troupes and protagonist to be seen and dealt with.
Tbh I like these types of novels and it’s unique to me but why has it been dropped for over a year? It’s very satisfactory to me, I like the plot and the MC’s personality to me is exactly how I like it. He stands on business and I like that about him
Dear author what happened here is it drop or hiatus or you just forgot this? why the last update is 1 year ago?? i like this because it is good
[First of all, this novel doesn't have any elements of a brainless Harem, our MC will not be like other MC who every time he goes somewhere he will bring another woman. But there is romance, and the heroin is a very strong like peerless empress reincarnation.] If you see disclaimers such at the summary/synopsis section, it's usually a red flag. This basically means author is incapable of properly conveying their intent through their writing of the main story so they made a separate footnote like this. I can get behind the 3 stars reviews but 5 stars? Did the author bribe those people or something? Or is that just the standard of Webnovel in general?
I really like this book but I don't know why author stop updating the book. If anyone know comment
used to read this story as soon as it came out... dunno why it got dropped but you can give it a try once maybe the author will continue someday but....
wow this is complete garbage i didn't expect much but i as still disappointed i endured for the 150 ch so i can say it with complete faith that this is garbage and there is no redeeming quality for it . will i explain why is it garbage no this is reached the worst level the level that makes me want other people to read it to suffer with me .
typical story, noting special like Chinese face slapping,arrogant, naive brain dead characters and the characters isn't life like we don't get to know about others characters life in depth mostly only shows mc plus very disappointed at mc character i also thought it single heroine but from mc attitude it doesn't look like it but if it is single fl then MC's char is very trash like from what i've read.....
i read until the last chapter, there some confusing plot like lin tian(mc) have the same face with lin tian (ji xian ex lover), but in the later chapter lintan(mc) had similiar face with mo xie, does that mean the three of them have the same face or author just forget about it and make mistake, and why would the author make another novel with basically the same titile with this novel but with different mc, did u just drop this?i think its stil have potential, i quite enjoy this
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like it very much so far, but I am wondering if you are planning on continuing it (because I don't want to spend money in seeing the advanced chapter if you dropped, hope you don't mind it). I hope you continue with this wonderful story
.. ..what can I say. .. The our villainous mc says he acts like a villain but he completely acts like a protag. Like other unoriginal villain mc's. The world is also way too convenient. Like how on earth can some random powerhouse be invited to be the prestigious leader of a top organization? ? They dont even know him, his skills, and whether he has unterior motives. No organization that acts like that would be a top organization. Also the reveal of his OP power. It makes no sense. What if they question him why he previously hid his power?? He isnt even pretending to try to hide it. The original 'protag' and 'protag's best friend' are acting like common villains. Other than switching their titles, this is a common not well done face-slapping modern cultuvation novel with one-faced villains.
More updates please author!!!!! Why didn't you not updating any more!!!!!
It's been over a month so why author the isn't updating this novel. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ...
This is one of better urban novels. PRos: - MC does not have harem. -MC is not stupid af and arrogant like in other novels -Characters have life and not just used for Mc to step up. -Story is interesting and has huge scope to expand. Cons: -Mc cares too much about things -Mc is not enough ruthless towards women as he should be, come on man u r supposed to be a villain. -stupid army building by MC which is irrelevant in long run.
okay, I gave this novel a try, i like the idea, but the writer or translator needs to get someone to edit the english and the he needs to setup a better timeline of events.. wish you luck, but i will be dropping this novel.. its hard to read with all these grammer mistakes... and some times i need to go back and make sure I understood correctly.. and that is also a pain. thanks, and keep on trying... [img=recommend]
well, I just started reading.. the idea is good, i just hope the english gets better.. but I will continue to read... ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Glad to find a cultivator story without harem, they're truly too few, so I need to ask whether the story has been dropped because I haven't seen any updated for more than a week
We need more plz love the novel😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😌😌😌😌
Writing Quality: Terrible (1) Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3) Plot Development: Yes...just no (1) Character Design: China (2) Prehistory of the World: Modern Cultivation (1) Verdict: A piece of cultivator's nonsense, in the modern world, which lowers its significance even more. I do not advise.
The novel is great, you can call it gold, love it so much, it gives you a different perspective than the usual type of novels we already used to, see the villa pov
TRASH this is why i hate nit harem because there will be a girl left out like gu yixian she sacrifed herself to save the mc but she didn't even got an happy ending atleast for now i don't know she will resurrect.
Good novel. <3 ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️.
biarpun ada beberapa orang yang sok elit ngasih sedikit bintang. sebagai seorang guru, saya menilai bahwa kamu adalah orang yang hanya bermodalkan nekat, nekat, dan nekat. kamu terlalu nekat untuk menjadi mandiri. kalau kamu murid di sekolah saya, kamu akan menjadi murid kesayangan saya. pokoknya semangatlah dalam berkarya dan bekerja sebagai manusia yang mandiri.
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