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I liked the book in the beginning, but not so much now. I’m actually not going to continue with it. Jeanne has been through enough and now they want to break up her and Edward and kill her after the baby is born. WTH??
I"ll give you a piece of advice. Don"t treat Edward too badly, or you'll regret it, 🤔 What does this mean? Susan kwnos something that we don't khow
Bom aguardando e tendo esperança de Edward manda. Alex ir canta coquinho pra não falar outra coisa não desse esse Edward passivo desse jeito então se e pra tá assim que Jeane consiga fugir e toma a rédeas da sua própria vida
I stop reading this novel from now on, I can't stand the stupidity of the story of the protagonists anymore
Essa história e muito interessante mas sinceramente depois de Edward vira fantoche nas mãos Alex não dá agora vai casar até quando em esse Alex e um demônio pelo amor de Deus Autora da jeito de Edward muda
Now they are going to make a relationship between Edward and Susan for Alex benefits, really.
jean please be strong and restore the hills , edward i hope you wont disappoint jean coz the way i see it now , yes … i hope everything is just part of your plan for the better good of your relationship
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I like this book but it seems that I have been reading it for ever. Can there be more chapters daily? 4 is just not enough!
I love this book so much that I only spent a week to read it all. I haven’t unlock all the chapters because I found another way to read it more easily and quicker but I just want to let the author know that I had never read anything this good. I swear. I got so attached to the caracters. I just don’ know what I will do when the story’s over. I’m just do impatient that I may read it all over again!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
hello good day author i miss ur daily update..i hope it will be available soon thanks
Eventhough the character development is slow, but they are deep. The plot is so intriguing. And the author has lot of potential. Keep going.
The Arthur has great ability. The story keeps you in suspense. It has been a long time since I have read a book with this depth. Can ’t wait for next chapters
who is her the baby's father is it the fourth master of swan family or and when did it occur he doesn't seem to act like they had a one-night stand or anything I'm just curious it's interesting but
author, please don't make this story long. I'm loosing my interest to read especially when the chapters are all about their company business. it's very detailed and longer than Edward and Jeanne story. I skipped chapters.
Read up to chapter 60. The revenge part takes forever and seems to drag out. Revenge part or faceslapping is not even that satisfying at all since she has a goldenfinger (the ML and her son). The villians are just so bland and its the usual troupe of her being badly treated in the family. She can easily expose her family by taping some of the conversations and get it done easily. It is ridiculous how she has a 200 IQ son. Why does she involve him in her family affairs just for her revenge? I don't like the FL at all and she is just a boring character. Only thing going for her is her revenge tbh.
Great story short and sweet please keep your story short and to the point do not stretch your story like some author who take your story very long and I lose interest very fast please keep up the good work thank you.
Freeeeeeeee freeeeeee platform !!! This is toooooo exxxxpensiiiive !!!!!! Why do we gotta pay more for privilege chapters?!?!?!?
update from chapter 300: > THERE IS NO UPDATE IN THEIR LOVE LIFE! > Read if you want to get frustrated! > Writing quality is very redundant and one sentence description, not a paragraph.. what a pain to read. > After 300 chaps, there is still very little known about the life of Jeanne or why she refuses the father of her child so badly. > Every chap feels like a filler with no sense of achievement or something big every chap. > I said before that it is a slow burn and slow paced, well yep, SLOWER THAN A SLOTH! > Read if you want to have white hairs! That's it! This just made me lose interest and drop this book.
Sloooowbuuuurn! Almost at chap 200 but their is little progress between the main characters. I feel like it's too focused to the face slapping part that the FL and ML scenes are not really emphasized. Although their child is amazing, but I'd like to see more of the child acting like a child rather than being patronized as a genius and as part of the whole revenge scheme.
✓ Very slow burn! If you are into that, go ahead and read! ✓ Face slapping ✓ Detailed scenes and arcs ✓ Strong ML and FL though their romance is going like a snail's pace. ✓ The son is amazing! ✓ Needs more dialogue between FL and ML please! ✓ Contemporary romance
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Too expensive to read novels from this site… this book is good but the author is too greedy. I like novels that end after you pay 20-30$ not 100$. too much…
I think the story needs acceleration .................................story development is quite slow if it's became a little faster it would be better
I liked the book in the beginning, but not so much now. I’m actually not going to continue with it. Jeanne has been through enough and now they want to break up her and Edward and kill her after the baby is born. WTH??
I"ll give you a piece of advice. Don"t treat Edward too badly, or you'll regret it, 🤔 What does this mean? Susan kwnos something that we don't khow
Bom aguardando e tendo esperança de Edward manda. Alex ir canta coquinho pra não falar outra coisa não desse esse Edward passivo desse jeito então se e pra tá assim que Jeane consiga fugir e toma a rédeas da sua própria vida
I stop reading this novel from now on, I can't stand the stupidity of the story of the protagonists anymore
Essa história e muito interessante mas sinceramente depois de Edward vira fantoche nas mãos Alex não dá agora vai casar até quando em esse Alex e um demônio pelo amor de Deus Autora da jeito de Edward muda
Now they are going to make a relationship between Edward and Susan for Alex benefits, really.
jean please be strong and restore the hills , edward i hope you wont disappoint jean coz the way i see it now , yes … i hope everything is just part of your plan for the better good of your relationship
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I like this book but it seems that I have been reading it for ever. Can there be more chapters daily? 4 is just not enough!
I love this book so much that I only spent a week to read it all. I haven’t unlock all the chapters because I found another way to read it more easily and quicker but I just want to let the author know that I had never read anything this good. I swear. I got so attached to the caracters. I just don’ know what I will do when the story’s over. I’m just do impatient that I may read it all over again!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
hello good day author i miss ur daily update..i hope it will be available soon thanks
Eventhough the character development is slow, but they are deep. The plot is so intriguing. And the author has lot of potential. Keep going.
The Arthur has great ability. The story keeps you in suspense. It has been a long time since I have read a book with this depth. Can ’t wait for next chapters
who is her the baby's father is it the fourth master of swan family or and when did it occur he doesn't seem to act like they had a one-night stand or anything I'm just curious it's interesting but
author, please don't make this story long. I'm loosing my interest to read especially when the chapters are all about their company business. it's very detailed and longer than Edward and Jeanne story. I skipped chapters.
Read up to chapter 60. The revenge part takes forever and seems to drag out. Revenge part or faceslapping is not even that satisfying at all since she has a goldenfinger (the ML and her son). The villians are just so bland and its the usual troupe of her being badly treated in the family. She can easily expose her family by taping some of the conversations and get it done easily. It is ridiculous how she has a 200 IQ son. Why does she involve him in her family affairs just for her revenge? I don't like the FL at all and she is just a boring character. Only thing going for her is her revenge tbh.
Great story short and sweet please keep your story short and to the point do not stretch your story like some author who take your story very long and I lose interest very fast please keep up the good work thank you.
Freeeeeeeee freeeeeee platform !!! This is toooooo exxxxpensiiiive !!!!!! Why do we gotta pay more for privilege chapters?!?!?!?
update from chapter 300: > THERE IS NO UPDATE IN THEIR LOVE LIFE! > Read if you want to get frustrated! > Writing quality is very redundant and one sentence description, not a paragraph.. what a pain to read. > After 300 chaps, there is still very little known about the life of Jeanne or why she refuses the father of her child so badly. > Every chap feels like a filler with no sense of achievement or something big every chap. > I said before that it is a slow burn and slow paced, well yep, SLOWER THAN A SLOTH! > Read if you want to have white hairs! That's it! This just made me lose interest and drop this book.
Sloooowbuuuurn! Almost at chap 200 but their is little progress between the main characters. I feel like it's too focused to the face slapping part that the FL and ML scenes are not really emphasized. Although their child is amazing, but I'd like to see more of the child acting like a child rather than being patronized as a genius and as part of the whole revenge scheme.
✓ Very slow burn! If you are into that, go ahead and read! ✓ Face slapping ✓ Detailed scenes and arcs ✓ Strong ML and FL though their romance is going like a snail's pace. ✓ The son is amazing! ✓ Needs more dialogue between FL and ML please! ✓ Contemporary romance
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ggyftvgug gfyhvggghhhdygfrtgdetgfryg aqedsrchtgjkokngholmvftjggjkngfhkjvgukjbgfyjbfgyhvfgjhffygcfyjbghjgfghfrthjijfd . cfdtukbcddvh bhffffghhhhh
I can’ put this book down[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Too expensive to read novels from this site… this book is good but the author is too greedy. I like novels that end after you pay 20-30$ not 100$. too much…
I think the story needs acceleration .................................story development is quite slow if it's became a little faster it would be better
Well this week the author kills Jeanne. Good that 😥😥😠