Reviews of A New Hope, Nier by Azazyel - Webnovel

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4.29

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perfect_prince

It was awesome, it was beautiful, it was perfectly balanced,really the only grip I have is the shitty update schedule, but nonetheless I eagerly await more stories of this legend

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Magos_Dominus_8298

Author has lost his way Well this one is a bit difficult to write as I had good time with this novel, however it’s time to address the elephant of the room. While the author’s approach to make fantasy words into more realistic is pretty neat thing same cannot be said about his characters… While it is fairly explaining why androids act such excentric way towards the protagonist the same cannot be said about the later cast,- who were written in a way to lack personal interests and goals solely/mostly focusing on main character whith all essential parts of the relationships and character growth happening off-screen. Alot of good ideas but extreme mediocre execution - I think the perfect summary would be a cartoon box with a caption „here be dragons” which tries to predict that it will get good one day, but in the end is still just a cartoon cube. Most visible issue during later chapters is the pacing or lack of it. Main Protagonist can be presented with a problem with no good solution just to suddenly solve it off-screen or in a span of 2 pages without any sort test of wits and more like angry player complaining to developer to nerf the debuff. As I mentioned before most relationships are extremely fast paced well past the point of them feeling unnatural especially during the multiverse arc which requires it own separate section, believe that! Another big problem is the multiverse arc… yeah… that was bad. The multiverse addition clearly shows that author ran out of the ideas on how to solve the current MC issues so instead he added RWBY into the mix do that he can add more „waifus”. The way it’s implemented lacks any sort of subtlely making novel lose it charms as it becomes yet another multiverse kingdom building webfic. Another thing is author critical errors in using characters introduced with multiverse, who often come as one dimensional, barely having any sort of opinion besides 2-4 selected topics and whatever MC thinks(although it might be an effect of my personal spite for whatever author did to Weiss character) I probably didn’t say anything other than what other readers already said, good idea but terrible execution.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
UnknownSomething

All good things must come to a end… Holy moly this was a good fanfic keep up the amazing work Loved the story even if some of the wording was…iffy but if you get pasted that it’s genuinely a good story. Hope to see more of these in the future.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Garland

Your stories tend to really suffer with pacing and even power scaling issues. You tend to rush events like you really want the story to end with some events feeling that they really have no place being there especially with this whole Multiverse thing is added. Explanation and even its existence isn't really introduced unless suddenly its time for it to happen. The story also lacks consequences for certain actions, this happens, that happens and that is it. It's the same issue that your original Danmachi story had. And that ending, man things are just so rushed and completely unacomplished. You have some amazing ideas but execution really leaves much to be desired.

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Solomonsquill

It was a great read. The fact that I followed all the journey till the end when it was still in the early beginings makes me a little sad that it ended. Thanks for your work author! I will look forward to more stories.

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistR2UJOj

An excellent story for me and in my personal opinion, thank you very much for the Great Story, eagerly awaiting more ART and many more Chapters

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6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Gray_Shannon

I honestly wish he author would consider just continuing the stories without bothering with the commissions but otherwise, it’s really good and The other stories are good to.

8mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Valkorion_2003

Started reading this out of sheer boredom and was immediately hooked. Well-written, engaging, all of that. When the idea of multiverse/world travelling came up I was initially disappointed. I usually hate that kind of thing, it's often just a bad way of trying to keep a bland story interesting. Anyway, super glad I kept reading. Actual depth to the characters, interesting and enjoyable MC. Can't believe I'm actually saying this, but world-travelling done right! Reasons why it's necessary, meeting new characters without discarding old ones, it even fits with the plot! I'm astounded and impressed. Loving this story

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
sewerslvt

Honestly I was enjoying this quite a lot until the remnant arc. The mc says just how much the androids mean to him, yet as soon as he’s in remnant he sleeps with the militia twins…. Which okay I can bypass that. But it started going downhill after he got together with Weiss. It felt way too rushed without reason and it also took away from his interactions with the androids… which should have been the main focus of this fic. It’s not bad however I stopped enjoying this as much during the remnant arc, it feels like he’s always accommodating to Weiss and reading their interactions is honestly a chore. It doesn’t have the same flow as when he talks with the androids.

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9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
RobPlays

Good read. Love the concept of this. Id' really love to see YoRha and MC move to the Mass Effect universe and see how he deals with the Reapers.

9mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
midas7p

muy bueno nunca avía encontrado una historia así en Internet descubrí esta historia por wattpad traducida al español y me gusto tanto que no pude evitar buscarla y mirarla aunque sea con el traductor de google aunque este en ingles y el traductor tenga muchos errores no pudo molestar lo suficiente como para arruinarme la maravillosa experiencia que tuve ahora solo puedo esperar que esta historia se actualice lo antes posible

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11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
generatar_375

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MrSnake1994

the writer is a professional, he/she know how to write, But if you expect it to be Nier only, better stay away, i am fine with a perverted mc, but honestly i think mc is too much perverted,he literally only see android as a play thing rather than a life partner to me. At least thats what it seems to me

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
NeaCambelt

Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Grumpyassasin

Well ima keep this review short….. I have an unhealthy level of obsession with this book…. I’ve reread it at least 4 times robo waifus for the win

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Kinglur

love it, all your books are good but this is my favorite

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
M01marco

keep going don't stop I'll start giving ps here tomorrow

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistkEc4gg

I just love everything about this story, and even though sometimes things are not consistent you can't help but forgive the story. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗 . .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Darknor
LV 11 Badge

Tiene poca seriedad, se nota que esta hecho por un adolescente cachondo que desea el cariño de un monton de mujeres pero no save escribirlo, ademas que prácticamente no se mente casi con la historia principal simplemente homitiendolo, realmente esperaba que el mc fuera mas serio ( ya que que tenga sexo con los androides poco importa) pero es un idiota y no de los idiotas divertidos si no uno que da mucho cringe. En fin no leas esta fanfic si esperas algo medianamente decente y para alguien ya mayor como yo es vastante desagradable.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ender_Vate

the reality about this fic and other works by the author. your stories are good, but if you expect you to start reading and one day you will finish one of your stories forget it, unless you commission all the chapters. author has more than 10 stories in progress and none have concluded, all are on hiatus no commission no stories, I even think it's right for him to charge for his works but at least the author should write original works not fanfic, in the end he charges commission from his character in the stories of others, and not the story itself.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CrimsonN7

Fantastic story ........................................................................................ ......................................

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Bloodnight

Podria escribir la reseña en ingles pero me da una pereza horrible, en fin, buena novela, buen desarrollo, tal vez un poco rápido el romance para mi gusto, pero en definitiva es muy buena, 9/10 en mi humilde opinión, sigue así autor :)

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
W4ND3R1N6_R34D3R

Still liking this author ,he have fine and refined taste ,that's it i guess i will fill the rest with random fact The uncanny valley is a term used to describe the relationship between the human-like appearance of a robotic object and the emotional response it evokes. In this phenomenon, people feel a sense of unease or even revulsion in response to humanoid robots that are highly realistic.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Xinum_Sensational

very good and enjoyable fic, I like it and want more of it. ..........................................................................................

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Curios_Theories

I delighted. Give me more And is a good fic good job author ................................... ............................................................

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SharkDk1

very good man[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
IsekaiLord

the whole story is shet. mc is a degenerate, issei like pervert, that uses the androids programming juat to have sx with them. Useless, idiotuc, disgusting. + its harem, so i was never going to givw it a better than 1 star review.

2yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Bob_Uchiha_XD

Hreqt story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Justin_David_4523

I'm rather new to the Nier setting but I can see a lot of potential here! I'm looking forward to more. I really loved the addition of the multiple square enix franchises.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
TFH
LV 6 Badge

SOLID 5!!!!!!, Grammar is excellent, its funny, it has sêx^y androids and its good to read. its so far chapter 4 and im really enjoying it... It seems MC arrived at Nier Automata: as the "For now" last human alive.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
perfect_prince

It was awesome, it was beautiful, it was perfectly balanced,really the only grip I have is the shitty update schedule, but nonetheless I eagerly await more stories of this legend

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Magos_Dominus_8298

Author has lost his way Well this one is a bit difficult to write as I had good time with this novel, however it’s time to address the elephant of the room. While the author’s approach to make fantasy words into more realistic is pretty neat thing same cannot be said about his characters… While it is fairly explaining why androids act such excentric way towards the protagonist the same cannot be said about the later cast,- who were written in a way to lack personal interests and goals solely/mostly focusing on main character whith all essential parts of the relationships and character growth happening off-screen. Alot of good ideas but extreme mediocre execution - I think the perfect summary would be a cartoon box with a caption „here be dragons” which tries to predict that it will get good one day, but in the end is still just a cartoon cube. Most visible issue during later chapters is the pacing or lack of it. Main Protagonist can be presented with a problem with no good solution just to suddenly solve it off-screen or in a span of 2 pages without any sort test of wits and more like angry player complaining to developer to nerf the debuff. As I mentioned before most relationships are extremely fast paced well past the point of them feeling unnatural especially during the multiverse arc which requires it own separate section, believe that! Another big problem is the multiverse arc… yeah… that was bad. The multiverse addition clearly shows that author ran out of the ideas on how to solve the current MC issues so instead he added RWBY into the mix do that he can add more „waifus”. The way it’s implemented lacks any sort of subtlely making novel lose it charms as it becomes yet another multiverse kingdom building webfic. Another thing is author critical errors in using characters introduced with multiverse, who often come as one dimensional, barely having any sort of opinion besides 2-4 selected topics and whatever MC thinks(although it might be an effect of my personal spite for whatever author did to Weiss character) I probably didn’t say anything other than what other readers already said, good idea but terrible execution.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
UnknownSomething

All good things must come to a end… Holy moly this was a good fanfic keep up the amazing work Loved the story even if some of the wording was…iffy but if you get pasted that it’s genuinely a good story. Hope to see more of these in the future.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Garland

Your stories tend to really suffer with pacing and even power scaling issues. You tend to rush events like you really want the story to end with some events feeling that they really have no place being there especially with this whole Multiverse thing is added. Explanation and even its existence isn't really introduced unless suddenly its time for it to happen. The story also lacks consequences for certain actions, this happens, that happens and that is it. It's the same issue that your original Danmachi story had. And that ending, man things are just so rushed and completely unacomplished. You have some amazing ideas but execution really leaves much to be desired.

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Solomonsquill

It was a great read. The fact that I followed all the journey till the end when it was still in the early beginings makes me a little sad that it ended. Thanks for your work author! I will look forward to more stories.

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistR2UJOj

An excellent story for me and in my personal opinion, thank you very much for the Great Story, eagerly awaiting more ART and many more Chapters

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6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Gray_Shannon

I honestly wish he author would consider just continuing the stories without bothering with the commissions but otherwise, it’s really good and The other stories are good to.

8mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Valkorion_2003

Started reading this out of sheer boredom and was immediately hooked. Well-written, engaging, all of that. When the idea of multiverse/world travelling came up I was initially disappointed. I usually hate that kind of thing, it's often just a bad way of trying to keep a bland story interesting. Anyway, super glad I kept reading. Actual depth to the characters, interesting and enjoyable MC. Can't believe I'm actually saying this, but world-travelling done right! Reasons why it's necessary, meeting new characters without discarding old ones, it even fits with the plot! I'm astounded and impressed. Loving this story

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
sewerslvt

Honestly I was enjoying this quite a lot until the remnant arc. The mc says just how much the androids mean to him, yet as soon as he’s in remnant he sleeps with the militia twins…. Which okay I can bypass that. But it started going downhill after he got together with Weiss. It felt way too rushed without reason and it also took away from his interactions with the androids… which should have been the main focus of this fic. It’s not bad however I stopped enjoying this as much during the remnant arc, it feels like he’s always accommodating to Weiss and reading their interactions is honestly a chore. It doesn’t have the same flow as when he talks with the androids.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
RobPlays

Good read. Love the concept of this. Id' really love to see YoRha and MC move to the Mass Effect universe and see how he deals with the Reapers.

9mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
midas7p

muy bueno nunca avía encontrado una historia así en Internet descubrí esta historia por wattpad traducida al español y me gusto tanto que no pude evitar buscarla y mirarla aunque sea con el traductor de google aunque este en ingles y el traductor tenga muchos errores no pudo molestar lo suficiente como para arruinarme la maravillosa experiencia que tuve ahora solo puedo esperar que esta historia se actualice lo antes posible

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
generatar_375

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MrSnake1994

the writer is a professional, he/she know how to write, But if you expect it to be Nier only, better stay away, i am fine with a perverted mc, but honestly i think mc is too much perverted,he literally only see android as a play thing rather than a life partner to me. At least thats what it seems to me

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
NeaCambelt

Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Grumpyassasin

Well ima keep this review short….. I have an unhealthy level of obsession with this book…. I’ve reread it at least 4 times robo waifus for the win

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Kinglur

love it, all your books are good but this is my favorite

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
M01marco

keep going don't stop I'll start giving ps here tomorrow

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
DaoistkEc4gg

I just love everything about this story, and even though sometimes things are not consistent you can't help but forgive the story. 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗 . .

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Darknor
LV 11 Badge

Tiene poca seriedad, se nota que esta hecho por un adolescente cachondo que desea el cariño de un monton de mujeres pero no save escribirlo, ademas que prácticamente no se mente casi con la historia principal simplemente homitiendolo, realmente esperaba que el mc fuera mas serio ( ya que que tenga sexo con los androides poco importa) pero es un idiota y no de los idiotas divertidos si no uno que da mucho cringe. En fin no leas esta fanfic si esperas algo medianamente decente y para alguien ya mayor como yo es vastante desagradable.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ender_Vate

the reality about this fic and other works by the author. your stories are good, but if you expect you to start reading and one day you will finish one of your stories forget it, unless you commission all the chapters. author has more than 10 stories in progress and none have concluded, all are on hiatus no commission no stories, I even think it's right for him to charge for his works but at least the author should write original works not fanfic, in the end he charges commission from his character in the stories of others, and not the story itself.

เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
CrimsonN7

Fantastic story ........................................................................................ ......................................

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1yr
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Bloodnight

Podria escribir la reseña en ingles pero me da una pereza horrible, en fin, buena novela, buen desarrollo, tal vez un poco rápido el romance para mi gusto, pero en definitiva es muy buena, 9/10 en mi humilde opinión, sigue así autor :)

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W4ND3R1N6_R34D3R

Still liking this author ,he have fine and refined taste ,that's it i guess i will fill the rest with random fact The uncanny valley is a term used to describe the relationship between the human-like appearance of a robotic object and the emotional response it evokes. In this phenomenon, people feel a sense of unease or even revulsion in response to humanoid robots that are highly realistic.

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Xinum_Sensational

very good and enjoyable fic, I like it and want more of it. ..........................................................................................

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Curios_Theories

I delighted. Give me more And is a good fic good job author ................................... ............................................................

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SharkDk1

very good man[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

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IsekaiLord

the whole story is shet. mc is a degenerate, issei like pervert, that uses the androids programming juat to have sx with them. Useless, idiotuc, disgusting. + its harem, so i was never going to givw it a better than 1 star review.

2yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Hreqt story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Justin_David_4523

I'm rather new to the Nier setting but I can see a lot of potential here! I'm looking forward to more. I really loved the addition of the multiple square enix franchises.

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TFH
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SOLID 5!!!!!!, Grammar is excellent, its funny, it has sêx^y androids and its good to read. its so far chapter 4 and im really enjoying it... It seems MC arrived at Nier Automata: as the "For now" last human alive.

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