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It's an excellent fic, very good and recommended, especially for those who don't want to see a hero but just another Marvel killer from the crowd. I have mixed feelings about this fic, many times I was about to drop it, but more than anything because many things don't make sense. But that doesn't take away the good stuff, read it if you can.[img=recommend]
Great fanfic, but it lost some points for being a blatant wish-fulfillment. One of the main things that makes Peter Parker Spider-Man is "Nobody Dies" even though the writers made it completely ridiculous over time. I love superheroes who kill and are still heroes, but the fact that everyone who knows him is completely comfortable with him being a guilt-free mass murderer doesn't feel right. I can even accept the Harem, but all of them being completely indifferent to Peter practically collecting Marvel's sexy women took away the depth. Maybe it should have made it more like "The Spider", another Spider-Man self-insert fanfic, which managed to make the Harem a little more realistic because it turned it into real Polyamory.
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I can't even begin to express how much this surprised me. Great MC, and the best take on a harem on par or better than "My three wives are beautiful vampires". doesn't get boring or repetitive and side characters have well ...character.
1 CAPITULO POR SEMANA...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK... :C everything else out of 10!
Perfection which should not be possible. So I decided that his was written by a non human species, maybe an alien or a god idk. This story is a masterpiece. Luv u - sincerely Me
Current Chapter :32 The story is about an SI who wake up as Spiderman. At first I thought this would be just like "The Spider" by Imjusttryingtofindmyway and to a degree it is similar. The way Peter goes to Baxter, evolving his physique, arsenal and flirting with Susan is similar to how the Spider and this story goes. The difference is that this Peter to a point of view is not really mentally stable. He kills when he can subdue it's opponent. Kills for the heck of it while justifying it with an excuse that it would be better in the long run and I agree. I know this Peter is not a HERO and for a genius he didn't think that killing criminals he encounter would not put a target on his back? That's also the one thing I'm honestly baffled, Peter killed quite a lot of grunts and S.H.I.E.L.D didn't even knock on his door? the mortality rate should be a sign to warrant an investigation but the rumors of a Mutate running around killing criminals should be a code red for them to put manpower on investigating Spiderman identity but there's none of that. The fanfic while good, has its holes, some of it are a bit forced, that luck just falls to to the MC's lap. for example is the Spiders and the tech. Also Reed doing what he did in the chapter 27- 31 is quite an OOC. I don't normally review a fanfic so I might not made this clear and good. I have many things to point out like training and his action on imitating the Creed and how he fails on it but........ nah.
Current chapter: 68 I was originally scared of reading another self-insert boring MC with repetitive harem members but this one is gladly not one of them. I like how much effort the writer is trying to put into the fight scene and I get the feeling that I am reading about a spider person and not just another guy fighting (of course it is not as good as watching the actual it but its great interpretation from a novel point of view). This is not for everyone as it has a serious undertone with some gore but not a horror movie or doom eternal type of gore. The MC is OP but the fights are still entertaining since, as far as I can remember, the fights are written differently so it doesn't feel boring, plus Spiderman, in general, is lowkey OP so yeah, no surprise. The only thing that would stop people from reading this novel is that this genre is not for everyone, but the author has been fleshing out the MC and he feels like a Human given Super human power and not 2D MC that is oh so perfect. Overall the Author seems to be responsive to the audience and willing to improve so better to start reading early if you have any cool ideas, feel free to share them. To the Author: For future fight scenes, you can look at the various spider man games for reference or you could look at the Death Battle epesiode with batman vs spiderman. Also, longer chapters are better.
Пока что лучшая работа по жёсткому, я имею ввиду ОЧЕНЬ ЖЕСТКОМУ, КРОВОЖАДНОМУ человеку пауку, но при этом СПРАВЕДЛИВОМУ. Не со старта, но довольно быстро он становится ОР. Отдельного разговора заслуживает некартонное, неклишированное развитие личности И сюжета. Клубника тут чисто для фона, но она качественная)
It's all good Author-san keep up the good work, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is one of the best Marvel fanfiction I've read. The direction Peter is taking is refreshing and a change of habit. Also, the story and the characters are very well written.
This Story is Awesome. I like this very much cause of the MC. And it isn't your typical Isekai story. Thank you for your Hardworking Story AUTHOR-SAN.
It is one of the best spider-man fanfic so far imo , pretty well written and author is trying something different with Peter rather than the usual cookie cutter ... fans of anti-hero MCs wil love this too, i hope it will continue till end and not get dropped
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Loved the story. Very unique with how he progresses and lives his life. Updates are phenomenal and the development was splendid. The only thing that could use some work is the grammar, which isn't too bad back Grammarly could help tones.
In love with this story, thank you for writing this work of art. ................................................................................................................................
This Webnovel is brilliant I love how different this Peter is. I am impressed with the story development and I hope to read the new chapters that are hopefully coming soon.👍
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Great story I really like how the mc has some similarities to Lelouch and I'm really excited at how the bad guys are being put down and how the 'sheeps' react to the hundreds of horrors of their universe
primero no abandones me gusta mycho espero una actualizacion mas rapida me gusta los personajes espero que she hull sea como en los comic una mujer fuerte y segura tambien espero la incorporacion de iron girl o de shuri o wanda . tambien un arco o episodio de una copetencia de tecnologia entre tony y peter HAS QUE PETER CREA UN JUEGO DE YUGIOH JAJAJA piemso que seria bueno o un traje de power ranger jajajajajajaja
I like the storyline and I hope it will be better in the future... I also hope the story will update quickly and I will still be your loyal reader :D still don't be discouraged author
While well written, the character development is meh. Its a basic harem story where all the women just throw themselves at mc, irregardless of there source material character. However it is an interesting and, with the exception of above, well written story with a descent premise.
It is an amazing story!!! I like the way this peter parker handles the problems his way. The character interactions are also good for me.
the story is very interesting the plot I found it amazing, the personality of the protagonist is very good I liked it a lot, the harem very interesting I really liked the personality of the heroines and their stories, I highly recommend you won't be sorry the author knows how to make this story,I just wanted you to put Emma Frost in the harem
This is possibly the best thing I've read on this app. The story progression is very thought out and consistent, while the fights scenes get me very excited to the point of me running around my house cheering. The lemons's are very good and I give them a solid 7.5/10 and considering this is the authors first time writing them I think that it has a very promising lemony future. It is harem but so far each character has gotten a fare share of character development. overall Ican't wait for the story to keep advancing! 😁
I like this Peter SI, he is pretty different than most SI's who just want to be a Superhero just because they are a Marvel fan. The last Peter Parker SI I read was The Spider by I'mjusttryingtofindmyway, one of the best Fanfics I have ever read.
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dude this is so good i was looking for good novel and i found so good one.Thank you this days is so hard to find good one i literally bored
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Nice novel expecting more of it ...................................................................................................,..........,..................................................... .................
It's an excellent fic, very good and recommended, especially for those who don't want to see a hero but just another Marvel killer from the crowd. I have mixed feelings about this fic, many times I was about to drop it, but more than anything because many things don't make sense. But that doesn't take away the good stuff, read it if you can.[img=recommend]
Great fanfic, but it lost some points for being a blatant wish-fulfillment. One of the main things that makes Peter Parker Spider-Man is "Nobody Dies" even though the writers made it completely ridiculous over time. I love superheroes who kill and are still heroes, but the fact that everyone who knows him is completely comfortable with him being a guilt-free mass murderer doesn't feel right. I can even accept the Harem, but all of them being completely indifferent to Peter practically collecting Marvel's sexy women took away the depth. Maybe it should have made it more like "The Spider", another Spider-Man self-insert fanfic, which managed to make the Harem a little more realistic because it turned it into real Polyamory.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I can't even begin to express how much this surprised me. Great MC, and the best take on a harem on par or better than "My three wives are beautiful vampires". doesn't get boring or repetitive and side characters have well ...character.
1 CAPITULO POR SEMANA...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK...1 CHAPTER PER WEEK... :C everything else out of 10!
Perfection which should not be possible. So I decided that his was written by a non human species, maybe an alien or a god idk. This story is a masterpiece. Luv u - sincerely Me
Current Chapter :32 The story is about an SI who wake up as Spiderman. At first I thought this would be just like "The Spider" by Imjusttryingtofindmyway and to a degree it is similar. The way Peter goes to Baxter, evolving his physique, arsenal and flirting with Susan is similar to how the Spider and this story goes. The difference is that this Peter to a point of view is not really mentally stable. He kills when he can subdue it's opponent. Kills for the heck of it while justifying it with an excuse that it would be better in the long run and I agree. I know this Peter is not a HERO and for a genius he didn't think that killing criminals he encounter would not put a target on his back? That's also the one thing I'm honestly baffled, Peter killed quite a lot of grunts and S.H.I.E.L.D didn't even knock on his door? the mortality rate should be a sign to warrant an investigation but the rumors of a Mutate running around killing criminals should be a code red for them to put manpower on investigating Spiderman identity but there's none of that. The fanfic while good, has its holes, some of it are a bit forced, that luck just falls to to the MC's lap. for example is the Spiders and the tech. Also Reed doing what he did in the chapter 27- 31 is quite an OOC. I don't normally review a fanfic so I might not made this clear and good. I have many things to point out like training and his action on imitating the Creed and how he fails on it but........ nah.
Current chapter: 68 I was originally scared of reading another self-insert boring MC with repetitive harem members but this one is gladly not one of them. I like how much effort the writer is trying to put into the fight scene and I get the feeling that I am reading about a spider person and not just another guy fighting (of course it is not as good as watching the actual it but its great interpretation from a novel point of view). This is not for everyone as it has a serious undertone with some gore but not a horror movie or doom eternal type of gore. The MC is OP but the fights are still entertaining since, as far as I can remember, the fights are written differently so it doesn't feel boring, plus Spiderman, in general, is lowkey OP so yeah, no surprise. The only thing that would stop people from reading this novel is that this genre is not for everyone, but the author has been fleshing out the MC and he feels like a Human given Super human power and not 2D MC that is oh so perfect. Overall the Author seems to be responsive to the audience and willing to improve so better to start reading early if you have any cool ideas, feel free to share them. To the Author: For future fight scenes, you can look at the various spider man games for reference or you could look at the Death Battle epesiode with batman vs spiderman. Also, longer chapters are better.
Пока что лучшая работа по жёсткому, я имею ввиду ОЧЕНЬ ЖЕСТКОМУ, КРОВОЖАДНОМУ человеку пауку, но при этом СПРАВЕДЛИВОМУ. Не со старта, но довольно быстро он становится ОР. Отдельного разговора заслуживает некартонное, неклишированное развитие личности И сюжета. Клубника тут чисто для фона, но она качественная)
It's all good Author-san keep up the good work, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is one of the best Marvel fanfiction I've read. The direction Peter is taking is refreshing and a change of habit. Also, the story and the characters are very well written.
This Story is Awesome. I like this very much cause of the MC. And it isn't your typical Isekai story. Thank you for your Hardworking Story AUTHOR-SAN.
It is one of the best spider-man fanfic so far imo , pretty well written and author is trying something different with Peter rather than the usual cookie cutter ... fans of anti-hero MCs wil love this too, i hope it will continue till end and not get dropped
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Loved the story. Very unique with how he progresses and lives his life. Updates are phenomenal and the development was splendid. The only thing that could use some work is the grammar, which isn't too bad back Grammarly could help tones.
In love with this story, thank you for writing this work of art. ................................................................................................................................
This Webnovel is brilliant I love how different this Peter is. I am impressed with the story development and I hope to read the new chapters that are hopefully coming soon.👍
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Great story I really like how the mc has some similarities to Lelouch and I'm really excited at how the bad guys are being put down and how the 'sheeps' react to the hundreds of horrors of their universe
primero no abandones me gusta mycho espero una actualizacion mas rapida me gusta los personajes espero que she hull sea como en los comic una mujer fuerte y segura tambien espero la incorporacion de iron girl o de shuri o wanda . tambien un arco o episodio de una copetencia de tecnologia entre tony y peter HAS QUE PETER CREA UN JUEGO DE YUGIOH JAJAJA piemso que seria bueno o un traje de power ranger jajajajajajaja
I like the storyline and I hope it will be better in the future... I also hope the story will update quickly and I will still be your loyal reader :D still don't be discouraged author
While well written, the character development is meh. Its a basic harem story where all the women just throw themselves at mc, irregardless of there source material character. However it is an interesting and, with the exception of above, well written story with a descent premise.
It is an amazing story!!! I like the way this peter parker handles the problems his way. The character interactions are also good for me.
the story is very interesting the plot I found it amazing, the personality of the protagonist is very good I liked it a lot, the harem very interesting I really liked the personality of the heroines and their stories, I highly recommend you won't be sorry the author knows how to make this story,I just wanted you to put Emma Frost in the harem
This is possibly the best thing I've read on this app. The story progression is very thought out and consistent, while the fights scenes get me very excited to the point of me running around my house cheering. The lemons's are very good and I give them a solid 7.5/10 and considering this is the authors first time writing them I think that it has a very promising lemony future. It is harem but so far each character has gotten a fare share of character development. overall Ican't wait for the story to keep advancing! 😁
I like this Peter SI, he is pretty different than most SI's who just want to be a Superhero just because they are a Marvel fan. The last Peter Parker SI I read was The Spider by I'mjusttryingtofindmyway, one of the best Fanfics I have ever read.
Have at thee................................ ..................................... ..................................................... .....................................
dude this is so good i was looking for good novel and i found so good one.Thank you this days is so hard to find good one i literally bored
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Nice novel expecting more of it ...................................................................................................,..........,..................................................... .................