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it was very nice fanfiction bit ruthless but nice but I want to ask is this dropped
Best Spiderman fanfiction with a good mc and power ups.. y'all should give it a try if u are a fan of Marvel.. don't mind if it's Harem it's well managed
The writings ain't perfect, but I like the story.It's like a wuxia story bi ch slapping people, but not as brain dead yah know? I don't have to turn off my brain to enjoy this.I hope this continues or gets completed.
It's good that you survived, I hope you continue to write novels and I pray that you recover soon
Pretty good, worth a look if you are into more kill heavy MC's. I feel like he leans a bit to much into cringy/edgelord territory in some places although it never goes too far over the line as to be unreadable. I'm not against killing either but I feel this fic goes a bit into more unhinged territory instead of pragmatic as he basically just kills any goons he runs into. Feels like someone as smart as MC would keep their kills more targeted to me anyway.
yoo where are the new chapters at man ? are you alive hope you are bc i love this story
hey!! did your inspiration tank???why are there no more chapters?? you know that there is mj's mother and sister left too right??
I feel ashamed I didn't give this review a year ago, But my dumbà$$ forgot teehee This fanfiction is far one of best on the platform and the best of marvel fic here almost perfect English, at least by my standards, very readable and variety of words to write from MC isn't edge lord, pushover, or depressed kind main character, but he also rather charismatic, sensible and empathetic and I think that's the main attraction that's what stories need Also main girls aren't helpless NPCs and have actual positives aspects, flaws and personality which makes them relatable and could empathize with, this can be especially illustrated with MJ and black cat case. another great thing is the power pacing which is perfectly blend with the actual pacing of the chapter, you won't find MC buffed in 10 chapters, and won't find him nerfed after gaining enough power another aspect is the face slapping which isn't exaggerated, but when used, it would be incredibly satisfying to see updates aren't as stable but this I won't blame since it's a fanfic and I won't be a chosen beggar, author can take his time to keep his quality and for the lovers of spicy chapters, they aren't lack of them, although my degenerate self would always to want more lemo- *cough* spice all in all, very solid story, would recommend to read. bye~
solid 4 star why? cause, some missing details to make my small mind imagine what happened/what does it look like/how does it happen? example: his girlfriends parent is visiting end of the chapter. next chapter later there he is training with his dummy's. and here me wondering what happened with the girlfriend parents visit. also his suits, yuri's suits, his house/their company headquarters and many more, although not so important to be in detail's well it would have been better if you have describe them so i can use my imaginary powers good 👍 fanfic though rooting for more chapters.I like it, keep up the good work don't drop pls. Well sorry for my comment i'm not that good in english.
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eu gostei muito senti em meu coração que foi uma boa historia mais após um tempo parece que fica pisicotico e começa a acelerar o crecimento da pisicopatia torna tudo uma escala "global" e o densenvol vimento do personagem ao meu ver e bom mais deixa a desejar com coisas forçadas como uma pessoa "comum" começa a matar facilmente sem um peso
Good job author, I like this one a lot, but yeah, I have a little problem, I hope you can post more chapters/week, but yeah, 5/5, Love it, totally worth reading
Best novel I've read about the MU. This is a must, thank you for this story author :)
One of the greatest fanfictions on this platform. PERIOD. Only problem I have with it is the updating stability. Otherwise amazing fanfic
If It were possible I would have given this 999 stars out of 5…………I never thought I would get soo attached to something on web this much. God bless you ash.
This is one of the best fanfictions, no, one of the best stories I have read on this site. A reincarnate who does not to pretend to be a goody two shoes or acts like the original character. Someone who knows what consequences certain actions can bring, that the world is a more cruel place than it seems. The story developement is slow but the author is taking his time to explain everything and giving the characters a certain depth that you normally do not find in most stories. The only downside is the updates take long, but the chapters are very long.
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it's a great story but there are some grammar mistakes throughout the story, if not for than I'd give it 4.5. but definitely recommend you read this
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE including his family, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC's childrens better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP, his Children's and also a bit of power up to wives to always remain only below or equal to him. Thanks- Reader!
There is a feature on RR that allows you to 'hide' stories that you aren't interested in. I wish that WN had this feature so that I would never accidentally have to read this again.
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it was very nice fanfiction bit ruthless but nice but I want to ask is this dropped
Best Spiderman fanfiction with a good mc and power ups.. y'all should give it a try if u are a fan of Marvel.. don't mind if it's Harem it's well managed
The writings ain't perfect, but I like the story.It's like a wuxia story bi ch slapping people, but not as brain dead yah know? I don't have to turn off my brain to enjoy this.I hope this continues or gets completed.
It's good that you survived, I hope you continue to write novels and I pray that you recover soon
Pretty good, worth a look if you are into more kill heavy MC's. I feel like he leans a bit to much into cringy/edgelord territory in some places although it never goes too far over the line as to be unreadable. I'm not against killing either but I feel this fic goes a bit into more unhinged territory instead of pragmatic as he basically just kills any goons he runs into. Feels like someone as smart as MC would keep their kills more targeted to me anyway.
yoo where are the new chapters at man ? are you alive hope you are bc i love this story
hey!! did your inspiration tank???why are there no more chapters?? you know that there is mj's mother and sister left too right??
I feel ashamed I didn't give this review a year ago, But my dumbà$$ forgot teehee This fanfiction is far one of best on the platform and the best of marvel fic here almost perfect English, at least by my standards, very readable and variety of words to write from MC isn't edge lord, pushover, or depressed kind main character, but he also rather charismatic, sensible and empathetic and I think that's the main attraction that's what stories need Also main girls aren't helpless NPCs and have actual positives aspects, flaws and personality which makes them relatable and could empathize with, this can be especially illustrated with MJ and black cat case. another great thing is the power pacing which is perfectly blend with the actual pacing of the chapter, you won't find MC buffed in 10 chapters, and won't find him nerfed after gaining enough power another aspect is the face slapping which isn't exaggerated, but when used, it would be incredibly satisfying to see updates aren't as stable but this I won't blame since it's a fanfic and I won't be a chosen beggar, author can take his time to keep his quality and for the lovers of spicy chapters, they aren't lack of them, although my degenerate self would always to want more lemo- *cough* spice all in all, very solid story, would recommend to read. bye~
solid 4 star why? cause, some missing details to make my small mind imagine what happened/what does it look like/how does it happen? example: his girlfriends parent is visiting end of the chapter. next chapter later there he is training with his dummy's. and here me wondering what happened with the girlfriend parents visit. also his suits, yuri's suits, his house/their company headquarters and many more, although not so important to be in detail's well it would have been better if you have describe them so i can use my imaginary powers good 👍 fanfic though rooting for more chapters.I like it, keep up the good work don't drop pls. Well sorry for my comment i'm not that good in english.
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eu gostei muito senti em meu coração que foi uma boa historia mais após um tempo parece que fica pisicotico e começa a acelerar o crecimento da pisicopatia torna tudo uma escala "global" e o densenvol vimento do personagem ao meu ver e bom mais deixa a desejar com coisas forçadas como uma pessoa "comum" começa a matar facilmente sem um peso
Good job author, I like this one a lot, but yeah, I have a little problem, I hope you can post more chapters/week, but yeah, 5/5, Love it, totally worth reading
Best novel I've read about the MU. This is a must, thank you for this story author :)
One of the greatest fanfictions on this platform. PERIOD. Only problem I have with it is the updating stability. Otherwise amazing fanfic
If It were possible I would have given this 999 stars out of 5…………I never thought I would get soo attached to something on web this much. God bless you ash.
This is one of the best fanfictions, no, one of the best stories I have read on this site. A reincarnate who does not to pretend to be a goody two shoes or acts like the original character. Someone who knows what consequences certain actions can bring, that the world is a more cruel place than it seems. The story developement is slow but the author is taking his time to explain everything and giving the characters a certain depth that you normally do not find in most stories. The only downside is the updates take long, but the chapters are very long.
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it's a great story but there are some grammar mistakes throughout the story, if not for than I'd give it 4.5. but definitely recommend you read this
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE including his family, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC's childrens better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP, his Children's and also a bit of power up to wives to always remain only below or equal to him. Thanks- Reader!
There is a feature on RR that allows you to 'hide' stories that you aren't interested in. I wish that WN had this feature so that I would never accidentally have to read this again.
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