Twilight: Omega

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Adrian_Putra_3580

My opinion the MC is a good guy,not cautios and smart and maybe have a mental problem he expecting Edward to read his mind(100% true) but he not doing anything to defense againts it like not going to fork he do not have obligation to go there🤔 because that place is dangerous and 99% the danger is because Bella and the reason she still a live because she is the main character and he is a normal human he do not know if he have power before he go to fork but he still choose to go to fork not really a smart move. Its just my opinion good luck on tour work author 🙏👍👍

Estaría genial si estuviera bien hecho, el contexto no es detallado, la calidad de escritura le falta, no hay estabilidad de actualización y el diseño de personajes está horrible.

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Joao_Silva_0541

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bloodcoler

harem like wolf pack please for ticket THE HAREM

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kamran_ein

I like the story, wish updates were more frequent but the author is doing their thing so can't really complain. This story is very similar to another twilight fanfic, (almost the exact same) obviously there are differences. A good read so far and am eager to see how the story progresses

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeeeeeeeèeeeeeee

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LastGod

I think this is a decent fanfic. But it def could have been better. The good points are the story and the MC they are cool and i like their character. The main problem is the finer points. The two big ones are the romance between the MC and his girl seeming to be very weak and thin feeling like there was no real relationship there just a cordiality that included kissing. The other week point is the character dialog not being enough to make you care about the characters. The MC seem mostly fleshed out but the other characters didn't seem to have as solid a foundation or they were not given enough time or dialog for us to understand their character. Another good point thought was the action that really was awesome and kept you entertain all in all it was a decent read.

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Alex_Boen

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.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Good job with the story

......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Please continue

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Jadu_Pandey

Pretty nice the story is very similar to the TWILIGHT new wolf but this is a little better it has a lot common with it particularly the 5th chapter otherwise it is a nice story

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Tv_Tv_7716

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titan10

I hope u update more than one chapter. .....................................................................................................

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Cinvera

Aside from the awkward start, it's a good read overall .................................................... ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Jack7032

hope you don't drop this it's good stuff so far......................... . . ....... ... ..................... ...............

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titan10

Very very good man keep up the good work and don't drop.....................................................................................

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titan10

He dropped it...........................No update in 10 days he won't update anymore............................................M***********.

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Alex_Boen_2677

I enjoyed. Dont drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

LV 4

SrLao

Calidad de la escritura (3/5); Estabilidad de las actualizaciones (3/5); Desarrollo de la historia (1/5); Diseño de personaje (1/5); Fondo mundial (1/5).