Phoenix in mha

LV 1

finalgetsuga

i lasted 2 chaps mc is a wuss yet tries to seem cool and edgy all in all its cringe and its fast paced leaving out the key factors it imediely skipped four years after he died and thats when the author tells us how he came in the mha world it makes no sense why didnt he tell us that before he skipped 4 years also the mcs abilities are dumb and make no sense mc sucks story sucks and most of all you the author suck

LV 13

_JMR_

first of all the grammar is really bad it makes everything hard to read. Secondly the story in general is pretty bad. If u have wishes it is impossible to not be op in someway. If u don't want op mc then don't give him wishes, but author just tries to nerve him after giving him wishes. And in my eyes mc just wasted his wishes. Lastly we have a lot of things that make no sense, to mention a few: Mc works as a waiter while attending middle school without a guardian. How is that possible ? Even before the real plot starts u will find things that make no sense, but you have to see for yourself.

LV 3

Mark133_Gt

I honestly kinda like the pacing even though its kinda bland and missing somethings its fine better than most stories though i cant find the original work even though if i do i dont know which language it was written

LV 2

Daoist430833

Péssimo. Péssimo. Péssimo. Péssimo. Péssimo. Péssimo.