/ Sci-fi / Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start
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The whole world mutated. Mysterious resurrections happened in real life. The Tribulation descended.
Everyone would awaken the ability to rule over beasts at the age of 18 and obtain a Lord Space of their own. After one month, their Lord Space would materialize and they would become a Lord.
When they awakened, each Lord would obtain a summoning pool to summon their own troops.
They had to plunder resources, strengthen their troops, expand their territory and defend themselves against the invasion of demons!
Ren Qi recruited a mutated succubus from the very start. She could keep ascending until she became a fallen angel!
Someone exclaimed, “Someone managed to recruit a succubus?”
Another person said, “Why are you envious of him? Succubi don't have much combat ability and are weak. When his Lord Space materializes, he will most likely be consumed by the demons.”
Someone said, “Hahaha, I awakened a top-tier troop, the Golden Tiger. I am invincible.”
Not long after, Ren Qi’s territory expanded to the Warring Nation Level. A group of fallen angels stood beside him as they looked down on all the demons.
The weakest fallen angel was an existence akin to a demigod.
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เขียนรีวิวWhy did this get picked???? 😭😭😭 bro there were like 3 ACTUALLY DECENT NOVELS AND OFC THE MUTANT SUCCUBUS ONE GETS PICKED??? Ill take this as a reminder to never have hopes for anything in trial read :((
story is not bad. just know the translation quality drops hard in this later on. getting close to MTL quality. examples calls the Male MC her or she multiple times a chapter. call other characters her or he multiple times (incorrect gender) suddenly changes the nickname of characters. suddenly gives characters a nickname as if they always had one incorrect capitilaztion and punctuation.
I am looking forward with the story.I found summary interesting.I like taming and kingdombuliding so I looking forward to it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
TL quality drops too low to be worth reading. Otherwise this is a pretty average novel. Probably about 4 stars if the story stays as it is and there isn't too much nationalism under the poetry.
Sadly this lack lustre story is a rehash of other weak to strong MCs. After a number of chapters I just threw the towel in as you already know the ending which defeats any reading pleasure that could be obtained in this novel. Having Succubus’s as his creature you could imagine various innuendos occurring and it is hinted, but we know it ain’t happening here. Which is pretty much the stereotypical young Chinese male who devotes himself to strength and not relationships, which is a bit more realistic. Anyhow, don’t waste your time with this.
I came into this book with some decent high hopes. And it started off pretty strong but the further I went in the more the quality dropped. I'm not sure who is translating this but there is so many mistranslations that it makes me wonder if they are doing it on purpose. Not only that but the story has so many inconsistencies that it is hard to track what is truly going on.
Look, this novel is trash, worse it even plagiarized plot points from another trash novel*. To make things worse, the translation quality, while fine in the beginning, reaches unedited MTL level of quality later on. *I'm talking about that 99 dragon one. This one has a bit more world building in the beginning, but also has multiple plot points which are exactly the same. (Woman who sells stuff for cheap to gain influence for an alliance; Goblins, which after being discovered attack once at night, only for our MC to go out the next day to wipe them out and sell their armor; a little sister/little brother character who trades with our MC and crafts stuff for them.)
Lemme preface this review by saying: the translation quality for chapters after around 100 is as bad as it gets. The translators stopped caring, obviously, and just slightly edit the MTL. Don't waste currency on this. Outside of the absolutely horrendous quality later, it's pretty cookie cutter for this genre. Not a bad time waster. TLers should be ashamed though, and smacked with dictionaries so they can learn the importance of: 1 not screwing up genders constantly, and 2, learn the importance of not changing a character's name 18 times in one chapter.
In chapter 195, he gained 500000 energy crystal and 10000 magic crystal and used 80000 EC and 200 MC to upgrade to tier six , there should remain 420000 EC and 9800 MC and the requirements for tier 7 upgrade is 200000 EC and 1000 MC and for some unknown reason the mc says that he didn't have enough resources. What the f**k is that 👎👎👎
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it started off so well with plenty of potential. kingdom building with a decently smart mc. but then the typical chinese mc had to make an appearance. our mc was insulted online and of course he could not just ignore it, mind his business and concentrate on developing his strength. no, he had to challenge the one that insulted him, who naturally is supperior to him, to a fight" do you dare fight with your tier 6 troops against my tier 3", lets see who wins blah blah story ruined. i guess i made the classic mistake of falling for a good premise and believing a chinese author can actually write a decent novel.
Just another copy/paste novel about Lords with monster. If you have read one you can immediately see the similarities. No personality. Special Monster. Trade channel. One saint chick, etc.
How much you're gonna bet that this succubus is mentioned only at the beginning and barely anywhere else 😂 .
So far so good. Read up until 25, and it's an actual good story. I would not call it trash or whatever else like some clowns. At the same time, I really dislike the idea of skimpy dressed succubi. But, recent chapter changed that a bit.
Translation is getting worse with time. They literally used 2 different wrong translations for the same character in a single character in 2 consecutive paragraphs.
Usually I don't like kingdom building stories not that much, because they lack sometimes the action. But this story is a little bit different, the balance between action and kingdom building is the correct amount for me [img=recommend] The main problem with this story is the poor writing quality. I read over 300 chapters and there is still a big problem with the gender of the various characters. The main character switched between "he" and "she" very often in the same chapter. Further the naming of the characters is not consistent, e. g. "Elise" is also named "Illis" or "Ylise". @Author-San: Please review the chapters and fix the errors, it makes reading more pleasurable.
with the exception of a few things its the same as all the previous. You read it hoping it will break the mold and do things differently but end up let down. I would love to give these type of novels a zero star rating just because it's been beaten to death on trial reads but compared to the really bad novels on here I have to give some credit and put this at mediocre.
Only as far as chapter 17 the underlying premise sounds good but the author already has created a few issues that will hopefully be addressed and fixed. To start with is not big thing just a detail that could have been used in the world building itself, everyone awakens at 18 years old but every student in the grade awakens on the same day so instead of it being an age thing it should be portrayed as some kind of yearly external energy stimulation that after after experiencing x amount of times one would awaken. The author can't count even in the first two chapters and it gets compounded as time goes on, lords can summon 2 units/ day during their 30 day mental period, awakening summon 2 units next day go to school come home summon 2 units go to school take the test and still only have 2 units instead of 4? Guess he just wanted to make it difficult with the cooldown time on charm skill. Finish test go home summon 2 more, misc. things about getting rewards and people coming to him take up another day or two next time we get a count of his units there should be 8-10 or more but there's still only 4. He's probably going to pull some shenanigans because at this pace he's already reduced the incredibly important and vital 60 units that a lord gets for free during the 30 day post awakening period Onto power levels not much clear info on power levels but it looks like a combination of static troop tier with levels within the tiers there really should have been an info dump in the first 5 chapters about how what tier/level can correspond to what tier/level and how rare certain troop tiers are, The way the talk and treat it so far is the only way to upgrade a tier is via mutation and levels themselves can be gained the monsters consuming resources, which it seems like or protagonist has the knowledge that he should upgrading as fast as possible but he's not, unless the units consuming resources to upgrade can only be done while he is focusing on his mental castle.
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis): (X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out. (YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored. (ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full. (MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out. (P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it. (LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.