Marvel: Abstract entity

LV 11

_Jo1Jo2Jo3Kurdi_

2 CHAPTERS WASTED TALING ABOUT RELIGION AS IF THE AUTHOR DOES NOG MAKE HIS READERS WAIT LONG FOR CHAPTERS HE EVEN WASTED 2 CHAPTERS ON RELIGION TALK. I MYSELF am a Muslime but if I like to study about my Religion or all the other I would not try learning from a random Novel but reading the Holy books themselves

2yr 17

LV 4

1lazy_loner

after chapter 17 this story became trash 🗑️ . .

2yr 13

LV 14

Demonzor

Nothing special about it mc made some of the most basic wishes you can make. the interactions between characters is ok for a webnovel story.other then that nothing makes me wanna keep reading it

2yr 10

LV 3

BakoaTabwakea00

I love the story. What else can say I love it. Please don't make it harem. The story was great it has great of family bonding without using them as mean to get strong. The mc was good with that amount of intelligence and scheming I really like

2yr 9

LV 14

king_Gurra10

This is a new author and right now the novel is amazing i love the story and how the MC doesn't see them as tool's and actually see them as family. The interaction he has with them is harmonious. p.s Their is never failure only improvemen for the author.

2yr 8

LV 6

Z3RG102077

He started out very well but since he came to Marvel it seems that he became just a supporting character while his AI wants a Harem Yuri and is also too annoying and with little loyalty to the protagonist. All in all it was fun while it lasted. (Translated from Google) :D

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2yr 7

ดู 3 การตอบกลับ

LV 1

timeawayfromstress

mc is stupid, very naive, acts with his emotions, beta mc, novel is very cliche, mc only knows that power will help him etc but he plays the protagonist. He was going to use the codex himself but he didn't, that's stupid.

2yr 6

LV 4

Kitshaar

First!!! Okay, so the author likes to shamelessly claim the first comment if you don't mind and if you do then you should have written it before me, sorry but no sorry. if you have any thoughts about how my writing style and grammar can be better then pls write them in the comments or review.

2yr 4

ดู 9 การตอบกลับ

LV 3

Name123001o2o

Well, the story is interesting in terms of backstory, but the character writing, world-building, and how you handle the plot leave much to be desired. I'll be honest with you, the way you handled the girl. in that alley and how you then took him home because if for the sake of the plot it was forced you changed his personality to Serena the moment he activated in Marvel as opposed to when he was on Krypton the Protagonist feels super fake and makes decisions that by the way, you described it was stupid. Why did you decide to stay with the girl and her family if you didn't want to? maybe you had another intention when doing that but it didn't work for you. My advice structure your story and improve your character build. The idea was interesting and in fact, if you decide to rewrite this you have my full support because I think you have a lot of potentials, and the fact that you dared to publish is admirable, you already took the first step now just worry about improving, Good luck.

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2yr 3

ดู 3 การตอบกลับ

LV 14

Idealist

This novel piqued my interest. Oh my God, I didn't expect this turn to be better and better each chapter. Keep it up! and I can not wait for next chapter

2yr 3

LV 3

GABRIEL_Ferr

Essa história tem um potencial imensurável, se o autor tiver tempo, saude, a história se tornara algo grande. Sobre o futuro romance do protagonista, sinceramente, eu espero que tenha um harém, mais claro, caso não tenha uma entrada para esse harém (2 a 4 mulheres), a IA tera um potencial para ser sua única parceira romântica, por favor querido autor/ autora espero que vc construa essa história com a maior paciência possivel......😊 Boa sorte🤙(caso você va ler esse comentário, ele esta em português - Brazil)

2yr 2

ดู 3 การตอบกลับ

LV 13

Usiel

as of ch. 43 i can say 35 of them were fillers. mc is a beta simp who let ppl walk over him and scuffed as if he is above them.. story is all over the place. first arc was nothing but a filler on its own with nothing to do with MCU. mc with all his knowledge is dumb as rock. so I Hope author stops writing for it's clear that it's not his strong point.

1yr 1

LV 4

Kurama24

Bland is the best way to summarize this ff for me. I read up to 26 chaps and soo far nothing interesting has happened. The ff isn't terrible but it ain't good as well. The most notable issues i had were: 1. The english is sometimes good sometimes bad like 1 min i understand everything then comes a paragraph that makes me go "????" 2. When i read that it would start Dc then be Marvel i expected the mc to actually interact with dc world longer then go to marvel like a multiverse ff but it felt like the dc part was mostly filler that can be summarized into 3 chaps probably, especially since it felt like the reason Dc world was used was just to arm the mc with knowledge and fighting skills b4 dumping him in marvel. 3. The interactions between mc and the characters wasn't really the best. To me he felt like an emotionless doll from age 1-9 when he interacted with his brother, when he grew up more it was ok since he showed more emotions especially to kara but when he went to marvel it felt like mc suddenly became a mix of an edgy/autistic/loner when he interacted with tania especially since it's just another cliché damsel about to be r*p*d. 4. There was nothing to hook/make me want to read more, no epic fight scenes, nothing at all. It's just a slice of life of an mc learning,eating,creating,etc... 5. The Mc's 3rd wish which is 220 IQ (which is used to learn things quicker if i remember correctly) like sure this is author's choice but wow is it a waste of a wish. TLDR: I don't hate the ff but i don't like it either it's just bland and doesn't have anything wanting me to keep reading more

1yr 1

LV 13

Angry_Reviewer

Sigh, typical trash Chinese FF, with horrendous grammer, Cringe dialouge, a retard MC and enough misogyny to choke an incel to death. What a waste.

1yr 1

LV 2

MrSleepyAsh98ij3g

Nice book...chapter 18 and i have nothing to spit out of my mouth except praise.....English pretty clean and the story seem like it is progressing at a good pace..hope you have fixed character for each person because shallow and unrealistic character are the worst.. Overall I seriously recommend this MCU fanfic...DC is only in the early chapters before he went to MCU so its not crossover...And don't let the dumb title fool you... Author get award for having lamest name for books..

2yr 1

LV 13

Snails

To start, this was very interesting even though I don’t know much about Superman stuff. At one part the author only describes one of the characters as looking like they did in the movies, so I’d like to see more description in that regard. It definitely kept getting more and more interesting as it went on, so even if the first chapter was kind of an info dump (though it was very funny how the character broke the wall!) make sure you keep reading! It gets soooo good!!!! Thank you so much! 😋

2yr 1

LV 4

melody_lost_2002

This is a new author but the author has talent when it comes to giving titles. The story is a slow burn until now and it looks like it has the potential to reach 100+ chapters. While the author is a little weak with his tenses, there are no obvious grammatical errors except that in my opinion. While the Author warned about unstable updates until now updates are pretty stable with a maximum gap of 1 day between updates. Story development and world development are going great so far too. World background is obviously 5/5 as it is a fanfic. I hope this novel gets the recognition that it deserves.

2yr 1

LV 1

_LordRavenclaw

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