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It's an awesome start and a novel idea but the translation if it is one...is horrible, it's not unreadable (barely) but for me I can't read the grammar it's past my line of bad grammar but still readable of 46/100 I can push through but I won't, though I can't deny it's a great story but grammar kills it for me. Overall it's great! (for me after I stopped)
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People write a lot of chapters and strain their hands. I wonder why they don't strain their minds a little. A fan like this is great but it's spoiled by haste, I also don't understand why all Naruto fans should start their stories by killing Danzo. I understand it's very dangerous, but it's also the most important element of Naruto story, I think the best time To get rid of Danzo in the story is after Sarutobi death
Nice story [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It's an awesome start and a novel idea but the translation if it is one...is horrible, it's not unreadable (barely) but for me I can't read the grammar it's past my line of bad grammar but still readable of 46/100 I can push through but I won't, though I can't deny it's a great story but grammar kills it for me. Overall it's great! (for me after I stopped)
very nice. Please don't stop posting👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🧚♀️🧚♂️🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♂️🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♂️🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♂️🧚♀️🧚♂️🧚♀️🧚♀️🧚♂️
authors review ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Nice.............. .. ................................................................................................... .
People write a lot of chapters and strain their hands. I wonder why they don't strain their minds a little. A fan like this is great but it's spoiled by haste, I also don't understand why all Naruto fans should start their stories by killing Danzo. I understand it's very dangerous, but it's also the most important element of Naruto story, I think the best time To get rid of Danzo in the story is after Sarutobi death