3รีวิว
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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เขียนรีวิว
overall this is a really good book so far and I hope that it continues! I'm really happy that I get to be the second review on this book so here is my support author!
Really good fanfic. I wasn't reading from the start, so updating stability is 3. Story development is a bit too fast but otherwise it is quite good. The character design is good but a few more details or one a bit more detailed and longer description would be perfect. World background is a bit chaotic, but again, a bit more detailed description once will definitely give five stars.
overall this is a really good book so far and I hope that it continues! I'm really happy that I get to be the second review on this book so here is my support author!
Really good fanfic. I wasn't reading from the start, so updating stability is 3. Story development is a bit too fast but otherwise it is quite good. The character design is good but a few more details or one a bit more detailed and longer description would be perfect. World background is a bit chaotic, but again, a bit more detailed description once will definitely give five stars.