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I don't understand why you are copying the original. There are scanty deviations here, really it was impossible to make serious changes to the plot in order to attract the reader's attention. I was hoping to see an interesting harem story, but it's mediocre.
Não sei se o autor vai alterar depois mas para mim isso é uma copia de oregairu a qual ele só alterou um pouco a escrita, fazendo ter varios erros ortográficos!
Nice story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very nice this story and very heart touching story his the behest story of country behest story of World best story gooooooooooooooooooooooood
I don't understand why you are copying the original. There are scanty deviations here, really it was impossible to make serious changes to the plot in order to attract the reader's attention. I was hoping to see an interesting harem story, but it's mediocre.
Não sei se o autor vai alterar depois mas para mim isso é uma copia de oregairu a qual ele só alterou um pouco a escrita, fazendo ter varios erros ortográficos!
Nice story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
very nice this story and very heart touching story his the behest story of country behest story of World best story gooooooooooooooooooooooood