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Honestly sooo good Need moaarrr 😭 is there any more yuan zun Fanfics that are longer than this? anyone let me know 🙏
One of the best fanfic i have read yet keep up the amazing work author and please do not drop it cause its hard finding something good to read these days
want more chapters its too little i wish there were chaps like 200 to 300 😞 😔 but its amazing i would love more frequent chapters 😍
i liked the story at first. but after he was attacked by the law domain elder the story was less likable. I mean he was related to a double saint and disciple of one why he need to join another sect who don't even have a saint. He could and should have went back. with a saint to guide and depend upon he could have easily become stronger. As I see the author is trying to follow the canon. I don't think it would be necessary with the mc's background.
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Honest review here Writing quality: It is perfect, I didn't notice any mistake, couldnt be better Story development: Really well done, not the typical cliché, it makes sense and I love it Character design: I don't really know what to say here, for me he is a perfect mc, strong yet humble, I give him a 10/10 Update stability: 4 chapters a week is great, would love 4 chapters a day more hehehe World background: It is a ff from Dragon Prince Yuan, so if you read it you should know it, if not, you can still understand everything Personal opinion: I love that the author explained the three cultivation methods in detail, that shows me that he know what he is writing, I will give you my votes, just hope you dont drop, because this is the best ff of it I ever found PS: Give me a like hehehe
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First and foremost well done to the writer I enjoyed this fanfic more than I thought I would I was sceptical at first but I was wrong wish there were more chapters though.
Honestly sooo good Need moaarrr 😭 is there any more yuan zun Fanfics that are longer than this? anyone let me know 🙏
One of the best fanfic i have read yet keep up the amazing work author and please do not drop it cause its hard finding something good to read these days
want more chapters its too little i wish there were chaps like 200 to 300 😞 😔 but its amazing i would love more frequent chapters 😍
i liked the story at first. but after he was attacked by the law domain elder the story was less likable. I mean he was related to a double saint and disciple of one why he need to join another sect who don't even have a saint. He could and should have went back. with a saint to guide and depend upon he could have easily become stronger. As I see the author is trying to follow the canon. I don't think it would be necessary with the mc's background.
yaaaaaa re upload...man! waiting for it for quite a while..........and yes Harem Harem big harem super big harem....super super big harem!!!
Honest review here Writing quality: It is perfect, I didn't notice any mistake, couldnt be better Story development: Really well done, not the typical cliché, it makes sense and I love it Character design: I don't really know what to say here, for me he is a perfect mc, strong yet humble, I give him a 10/10 Update stability: 4 chapters a week is great, would love 4 chapters a day more hehehe World background: It is a ff from Dragon Prince Yuan, so if you read it you should know it, if not, you can still understand everything Personal opinion: I love that the author explained the three cultivation methods in detail, that shows me that he know what he is writing, I will give you my votes, just hope you dont drop, because this is the best ff of it I ever found PS: Give me a like hehehe
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First and foremost well done to the writer I enjoyed this fanfic more than I thought I would I was sceptical at first but I was wrong wish there were more chapters though.