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4.7
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Ok, that opening sentence was awesome. You're writing is really good! I really like the characters' bantering and interactions so far! The story is also great and I'm really hyped to keep reading! Overall great job and keep up the good work!
Here’s my honest review: I’ll start with the cover and the title. My first impression was, “Was the protagonist a thunder manipulator? Or maybe he/she comes from a family who can manipulate thunders but was then annihilated and he/she was the only survivor?” And then the synopsis. I liked that it was short, concise, and direct to the point. Just enough to give you an overall idea of what to expect about the story. And I thought, “Uncover the government secrets and conspiracies?” That’s interesting! It means if they will do that, they will have to be cunning. As I haven’t finished reading it yet, I’ve yet to know the answers to my questions. But the first chapter shows the scene of a normal person doing what a normal person would do which is relatable. But halfway through it, it just went haywire and I didn’t expect that. Who could have thought there will be a murder just after the chill and the (sliceoflife) scene. Anyway, keep it up and keep improving, author.
A great read, I felt like the story and the author was compelling. I think the author does character interactions very well, and the story characters aren't mythical kind of humans they don't seem like they came out of an avengers movie, they are human, relatable. My only issue is that the author does a lot of telling the characters rarely show is what's going on through the actions they exhibit. Now Im not saying its never done but that it isn't done enough making the story a bit dry at times. But overall I enjoyed the book. Keep.working hard
Hm, see i was expecting something bad, but its actually kinda good, scratch that its really good, however the whole "Fate of the world" is a bit cliche, the characters hero journey is interesting to watch
There are fewer grammar errors and u can understand what the author wants to convey his story as. While reading the story, I enjoyed every part of it, though there were a few minor issues here and there, I know that the Author will get better in his way as the time passes.
Not bad, not bas at all, so far so good, this are going well and i'm loving it. Nicely written, visually possible and incredible. The author did a great job.
A romance type of reader but this book is really great, love the writing and the characters, will definitely recommend this novel to my readers and friends that love these types of novels.in addition, keep this up, I love your work .[img=recommend]
I must praise the Story Development above all else as it kick starts with tension from the first chapter onwards. the descriptions rendered to the reader by the author give a clear view of what's happening leaving nothing unsaid, which I like. the author does a good job to portray emotion which I enjoy and find quite realistic in the first few chapters. character design is pretty good as the author establishes the dynamic between Luca and Ramborne early to express his strength in building character. Well done for that. the world building is not yet as apparent to me, but it is steadily building up, which i appreciate.. all in all his is a good read which I recommend for readers.. Well done author.
Initial review, I like how it starts off with hints for what might come in addition to a core event that cements the character's motivation. From the author's inspirations mentioned within the auxiliary chapters, this will likely be a long-term project which will grow in quality as the author's skills develop over time. Whilst it's relatively clean and easy to read it got both some descriptive and grammatical shortcomings, nothing too severe or to the story's detriment, but for now, it's not enough for me to personally give the writing quality a top-notch score. Other than that I like how the story begins and whoever reads this review I would try to sway you to give this one a chance so you can share your own opinions.
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The novel is new but the Storyline is fascinating to an extent that grabs readers attention. Beautiful pictures are drawn through these words. The MC and his friend has their own unique personality and mindset, I would highly recommend this novel. Good wishes to author and his great work.
The two main characters bicker like old friends (which I love), and the adventure will get your blood pumping. It is an exciting read and has a ton of potential!
I should be honest. It's a missing masterpiece, so well arranged. you're truly good at this. I'm even out of words but all I can say, you surely rock.
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The Last of the Thundersouls is a novel that projects itself as a novel that doesn't need a cover. Hidden among the chapters, there is content that you would never long to believe. The main point is that most of the story is within the dialogue; making it perfect for readers to immerse themselves in the conversations and settings. The writing quality is already on point, with its features and identities forming the character behind the words. Interactions are one of my favorites when it comes to this novel. The characters are well diverse, and the personalities are greatly executed within this work. If you are looking for a novel that has entertaining content stored; this novel might be the one for you.
The characters I like and the writing quality is good.I felt the mystery and action at the start then when they entered the new place I felt the adventure aspect of it.Overall really liked it and I was engaged.The new place didn't have a lot of chapters but I know when there are more chapters released I'll really enjoy it.
This story has super high potential and I have definitely enjoyed my time reading this. The plot has very high potential and has shown flashes of it so far. The characters are loveable and great. The worldbuilding is stellar. Updates could come more consistently and the grammar still needs some work (I'm very heavy grammar after all). Also I hope the comedy gets better, as to me it really isn't the funniest type of humor.
currently on chapter 3 and I must say author is pretty good. Tbh, I'm not good at rating people work but this one is good so I suggest you read it. I can see the author but his effort to this, you can see it when you read this novel. I won't say anymore, all the best for you author-san.
As far as I've read, I love the characters, the plot and most definitely the world building. My only gripe is here and there, you have either a phrasing problem or a grammatical error. It doesn't cut away from how I understand the story, but me being a bit of a grammar demon, I did take note of them. Overall good read[img=recommend]
Story is very good and I just have very minor gripes. Not sure if it's grammatical errors or the author meant it that way. Still pretty good though. Keep up the good work!
Shall I say, Luca and Rambone are just amazing lol definitely one of my great read and I know as the story unfold with more chapters it'll only get better hence here I am supporting this book and the author with my 5 star review 🤗. If you're in doubt whether to read it if not then do it, read it and you won't be disappointed.
Three chapters in and its easy to tell that this book is one that paces itself quite well. Aside from a major shock in Chapter 2, and the semblance of one in Chapter 1, the story moves at a gentle pace- initially at least, It likely isn't everyone's cup of tea, but what room there is for shock value, is instead replaced by character interaction and dialogue - something I feel is equally important within a story. So in short, come for the overarching plot, but stay for the characters that develop thanks to the world within!
Definitely one of my favourite recent reads. The story is just unfolding and we're getting through it with the lovely (and somewhat hilarious) interactions of Rambone and Luca. I have the feeling that it's only going to get better with time and more releases, so I'll for sure add it to my library. For anyone reading this review, give this book a try! You won't be disappointed.
It is a nice synopsis which put many things to imagination. I'll wait until 10-20 more of chapters are there to began reading it cause it feels like a mystery.
Shameless 5 star review from the author I know... Let me use this as a chance to give some progress updates and how I've felt on my work on this so far: It hasn't been a total nightmare surprisingly. I'm planning to give Luca and Rambone new looks soon in this current part/arc of the story and use it as a grounds for training and as a way to introduce my magic system which has gone through a lot of revisioning (a good amount since I started this series) and I think that you guys will really like it! My plan for the story is just about complete and currently its just about putting what's on my head and my manuscripts onto paper for you all to read! My gripe in this so far is that I'm not the biggest fan of my characters so far and my release schedule can feel inconsistent at times thanks to some lack of motivation or energy. The support I've gotten from all of you guys is a major motivator for me to keep going. I love you guys.
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Here’s my honest review: I’ll start with the cover and the title. My first impression was, “Was the protagonist a thunder manipulator? Or maybe he/she comes from a family who can manipulate thunders but was then annihilated and he/she was the only survivor?” And then the synopsis. I liked that it was short, concise, and direct to the point. Just enough to give you an overall idea of what to expect about the story. And I thought, “Uncover the government secrets and conspiracies?” That’s interesting! It means if they will do that, they will have to be cunning. As I haven’t finished reading it yet, I’ve yet to know the answers to my questions. But the first chapter shows the scene of a normal person doing what a normal person would do which is relatable. But halfway through it, it just went haywire and I didn’t expect that. Who could have thought there will be a murder just after the chill and the (sliceoflife) scene. Anyway, keep it up and keep improving, author.
A great read, I felt like the story and the author was compelling. I think the author does character interactions very well, and the story characters aren't mythical kind of humans they don't seem like they came out of an avengers movie, they are human, relatable. My only issue is that the author does a lot of telling the characters rarely show is what's going on through the actions they exhibit. Now Im not saying its never done but that it isn't done enough making the story a bit dry at times. But overall I enjoyed the book. Keep.working hard
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There are fewer grammar errors and u can understand what the author wants to convey his story as. While reading the story, I enjoyed every part of it, though there were a few minor issues here and there, I know that the Author will get better in his way as the time passes.
Not bad, not bas at all, so far so good, this are going well and i'm loving it. Nicely written, visually possible and incredible. The author did a great job.
A romance type of reader but this book is really great, love the writing and the characters, will definitely recommend this novel to my readers and friends that love these types of novels.in addition, keep this up, I love your work .[img=recommend]
I must praise the Story Development above all else as it kick starts with tension from the first chapter onwards. the descriptions rendered to the reader by the author give a clear view of what's happening leaving nothing unsaid, which I like. the author does a good job to portray emotion which I enjoy and find quite realistic in the first few chapters. character design is pretty good as the author establishes the dynamic between Luca and Ramborne early to express his strength in building character. Well done for that. the world building is not yet as apparent to me, but it is steadily building up, which i appreciate.. all in all his is a good read which I recommend for readers.. Well done author.
Initial review, I like how it starts off with hints for what might come in addition to a core event that cements the character's motivation. From the author's inspirations mentioned within the auxiliary chapters, this will likely be a long-term project which will grow in quality as the author's skills develop over time. Whilst it's relatively clean and easy to read it got both some descriptive and grammatical shortcomings, nothing too severe or to the story's detriment, but for now, it's not enough for me to personally give the writing quality a top-notch score. Other than that I like how the story begins and whoever reads this review I would try to sway you to give this one a chance so you can share your own opinions.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The novel is new but the Storyline is fascinating to an extent that grabs readers attention. Beautiful pictures are drawn through these words. The MC and his friend has their own unique personality and mindset, I would highly recommend this novel. Good wishes to author and his great work.
The two main characters bicker like old friends (which I love), and the adventure will get your blood pumping. It is an exciting read and has a ton of potential!
I should be honest. It's a missing masterpiece, so well arranged. you're truly good at this. I'm even out of words but all I can say, you surely rock.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The Last of the Thundersouls is a novel that projects itself as a novel that doesn't need a cover. Hidden among the chapters, there is content that you would never long to believe. The main point is that most of the story is within the dialogue; making it perfect for readers to immerse themselves in the conversations and settings. The writing quality is already on point, with its features and identities forming the character behind the words. Interactions are one of my favorites when it comes to this novel. The characters are well diverse, and the personalities are greatly executed within this work. If you are looking for a novel that has entertaining content stored; this novel might be the one for you.
The characters I like and the writing quality is good.I felt the mystery and action at the start then when they entered the new place I felt the adventure aspect of it.Overall really liked it and I was engaged.The new place didn't have a lot of chapters but I know when there are more chapters released I'll really enjoy it.
This story has super high potential and I have definitely enjoyed my time reading this. The plot has very high potential and has shown flashes of it so far. The characters are loveable and great. The worldbuilding is stellar. Updates could come more consistently and the grammar still needs some work (I'm very heavy grammar after all). Also I hope the comedy gets better, as to me it really isn't the funniest type of humor.
currently on chapter 3 and I must say author is pretty good. Tbh, I'm not good at rating people work but this one is good so I suggest you read it. I can see the author but his effort to this, you can see it when you read this novel. I won't say anymore, all the best for you author-san.
As far as I've read, I love the characters, the plot and most definitely the world building. My only gripe is here and there, you have either a phrasing problem or a grammatical error. It doesn't cut away from how I understand the story, but me being a bit of a grammar demon, I did take note of them. Overall good read[img=recommend]
Story is very good and I just have very minor gripes. Not sure if it's grammatical errors or the author meant it that way. Still pretty good though. Keep up the good work!
Shall I say, Luca and Rambone are just amazing lol definitely one of my great read and I know as the story unfold with more chapters it'll only get better hence here I am supporting this book and the author with my 5 star review 🤗. If you're in doubt whether to read it if not then do it, read it and you won't be disappointed.
Three chapters in and its easy to tell that this book is one that paces itself quite well. Aside from a major shock in Chapter 2, and the semblance of one in Chapter 1, the story moves at a gentle pace- initially at least, It likely isn't everyone's cup of tea, but what room there is for shock value, is instead replaced by character interaction and dialogue - something I feel is equally important within a story. So in short, come for the overarching plot, but stay for the characters that develop thanks to the world within!
Definitely one of my favourite recent reads. The story is just unfolding and we're getting through it with the lovely (and somewhat hilarious) interactions of Rambone and Luca. I have the feeling that it's only going to get better with time and more releases, so I'll for sure add it to my library. For anyone reading this review, give this book a try! You won't be disappointed.
It is a nice synopsis which put many things to imagination. I'll wait until 10-20 more of chapters are there to began reading it cause it feels like a mystery.
Shameless 5 star review from the author I know... Let me use this as a chance to give some progress updates and how I've felt on my work on this so far: It hasn't been a total nightmare surprisingly. I'm planning to give Luca and Rambone new looks soon in this current part/arc of the story and use it as a grounds for training and as a way to introduce my magic system which has gone through a lot of revisioning (a good amount since I started this series) and I think that you guys will really like it! My plan for the story is just about complete and currently its just about putting what's on my head and my manuscripts onto paper for you all to read! My gripe in this so far is that I'm not the biggest fan of my characters so far and my release schedule can feel inconsistent at times thanks to some lack of motivation or energy. The support I've gotten from all of you guys is a major motivator for me to keep going. I love you guys.