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The sage has it all. Impressive foreshadowing. Great outline. Perfect storyline. Loved it. Keep updating the novel more frequently, Ash. I look forward to it.
The novel is readable and there is a lot of potential in later chapters. its great for me cause I like historical background. I would say for a fl reader it's a good choice however for ml readers, you can get a different taste because the novel is slow paced and you might need to wait before getting into the action. it's mostly world building here. I would suggest that you have must have patience to read and actually enjoy the book, which I did.
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Such an interesting story.author-san has such a funny writing style too :DI wonder why there are so many free chapters tho 🤔 author should get contract so he can get monies 💲
I can see that you've enjoyed writing this novel, although grammar mistakes was really evident in the early chapters. I'm rooting for your growth author!
Stroy is so cute and chapters are big everything is nice but still author needs to improve a bit. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story development is good, and the characters are not shallow like most other books. Each of the character arcs are amazing, and not to mention, I really like how Ryu is kind of arrogant since it gives the feeling of a mc. Other than a few grammatical mistakes that pop up once in a while, the over all story is excellent. Also, I believe Ryu could get some kind of arc for himself that sets his character much more deeper than it is right now. PS- my personal favorite character is Jun Thank you for your hardwork, and keep it up! since i have currently read only upto ch136 i need to continue reading it. But really, your imagination, and creativity is commendable.
I like the book overall. The story is simple to understand. It's a smooth story if I may say so. I like the conversations and the future plots. I haven't read much so, I can't say more. As for grammar, well, I am not the best person to say as I am the King of foolish Grammar mistakes. Overall, nice one and good to read!
I'm currently past chapter 34, but so far I've been loving it! It's got a strong start and the plot is pretty much open to anything, It's delightful! I love the main character name by the way!
Plot looks interesting. I'd say there's a good story here. As for characters, they look okay, not much development but it's only been 5 chapters. There is a few grammar problems but other than that, story is really good. Good work author.
Great first chap, however I would have liked you to introduce and present your mcs character more in contrast to defining other aspects of the story first. Also, there are some times where you go from present tense to past tense, make sure to stick with just one. other than that and some grammer errors such as repeated !?!?! and stuff, it's all quite good!
love it!!!! Story is great, love the mc and how the story progress, solid 10/10!!![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
It is nice and interesting story, I like the way you depict the character and the transmigration. The plot and its development is great. Definitely auto-collected and I will read it for now. I'm looking forward for the next chapters.
The synopsis got me good. I might try to read this as well. This is the first time I got to read a plot like having two souls and one body hehe.
Its a good read, and personally, the story has gripped me quite tightly.If you are looking for a book to read in your leisure time, I suggest giving this a try. As for the author, he definitely has a lot of potential and I believe can improve and polish himself to a high degree, definitely will write quality books in the future.
This story is an interesting book to have in your library. So far I like the characters and the way everything is set. The story has drawn me in so far so I believe it would draw others as well. Great read
This story is so good! Love the plot and how the story development tales place. Updating Stability is also ok. Character Design is super good!
The story's plot is excellent, the characters and their characteristics are all unique. You can see how vast the author's imagination is while writing this book. I recommend it to all new readers! Have fun and get lost in the world of magic.
Awesome plot with a good pace💞💞💞 The beginning is very catchy and within the first few chapters, you will get addicted to it. A must read book💞💞💞
Amazing story that deserves a lot of recognition for how it’s modified the genre and the author has put out really consistent and strong chapters. The spelling and grammar is a fresh breath of air in a platform where most do not have English as a first language. Honestly not enough praises I can sing about this novel. Definitely recommend a read and adding to your collection!
although i only read the start, but the story seems interesting and will continue to read it. It have a unique style to it, liked the story so far.
One of the best serial novels in Wn that I have ever read. I recommend this book to you all. Make sure you read it! You won't regret it. It's going to be the best time of your life!
It's amazing and great! Keep it up! I'll make sure to share this to a lot of people! [img=recommend] I have some friends who have a taste for this trope.
I'm happy that I discovered this novel. They story is soo good, the characters are cute.It is slow paced and it gives you the opportunity to bond more with the characters. Truly an amazing novel.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
story seems set up for the future and characters are being developed. My only issue is the plot development is too slow. already 30+ chapter in and Ryu is still a baby 😂😂 I need something more fast paced and not this level slow so this is not for me. Though for new readers stick around i guess if you're in it for the future development
This work was recommended to me by the writer of Cultivation time loop author, And I must say this is one of the story I look forward too, the characters are vivid, I can see the originality in the story which is rare, the story is really something fresh and enjoyable, the comedy and jokes are on spot 🤣 references are funny too like kid no jutsu and Indian Joe xD. But I can only only give 3 stars in update stability, I noticed that your updating rate had decreased in January and it is especially hard to wait when story is good, so please update more chapters more often now! Thanks for the work, Keep up the Good work author 🧁
Such a good novel with nice character development. Based on the transmigration world, coupled with the fantasy theme…there’s nothing to say bad about this. I’m glad I found this! Keep it up, author!
I like this book alot! I wonder what's going to happen next. This is an impressive story with nice jokes and also tragedy. like it a lot. all the best writer.
I really like the novel. It's fun, characters are sharing Amazing, character development is going on at a perfect rate. This novel is the full composition of all the emotions. It's really! Really worth the time! Thanks a lot![img=recommend]
The sage has it all. Impressive foreshadowing. Great outline. Perfect storyline. Loved it. Keep updating the novel more frequently, Ash. I look forward to it.
The novel is readable and there is a lot of potential in later chapters. its great for me cause I like historical background. I would say for a fl reader it's a good choice however for ml readers, you can get a different taste because the novel is slow paced and you might need to wait before getting into the action. it's mostly world building here. I would suggest that you have must have patience to read and actually enjoy the book, which I did.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Such an interesting story.author-san has such a funny writing style too :DI wonder why there are so many free chapters tho 🤔 author should get contract so he can get monies 💲
I can see that you've enjoyed writing this novel, although grammar mistakes was really evident in the early chapters. I'm rooting for your growth author!
Stroy is so cute and chapters are big everything is nice but still author needs to improve a bit. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story development is good, and the characters are not shallow like most other books. Each of the character arcs are amazing, and not to mention, I really like how Ryu is kind of arrogant since it gives the feeling of a mc. Other than a few grammatical mistakes that pop up once in a while, the over all story is excellent. Also, I believe Ryu could get some kind of arc for himself that sets his character much more deeper than it is right now. PS- my personal favorite character is Jun Thank you for your hardwork, and keep it up! since i have currently read only upto ch136 i need to continue reading it. But really, your imagination, and creativity is commendable.
I like the book overall. The story is simple to understand. It's a smooth story if I may say so. I like the conversations and the future plots. I haven't read much so, I can't say more. As for grammar, well, I am not the best person to say as I am the King of foolish Grammar mistakes. Overall, nice one and good to read!
I'm currently past chapter 34, but so far I've been loving it! It's got a strong start and the plot is pretty much open to anything, It's delightful! I love the main character name by the way!
Plot looks interesting. I'd say there's a good story here. As for characters, they look okay, not much development but it's only been 5 chapters. There is a few grammar problems but other than that, story is really good. Good work author.
Great first chap, however I would have liked you to introduce and present your mcs character more in contrast to defining other aspects of the story first. Also, there are some times where you go from present tense to past tense, make sure to stick with just one. other than that and some grammer errors such as repeated !?!?! and stuff, it's all quite good!
love it!!!! Story is great, love the mc and how the story progress, solid 10/10!!![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
It is nice and interesting story, I like the way you depict the character and the transmigration. The plot and its development is great. Definitely auto-collected and I will read it for now. I'm looking forward for the next chapters.
The synopsis got me good. I might try to read this as well. This is the first time I got to read a plot like having two souls and one body hehe.
Its a good read, and personally, the story has gripped me quite tightly.If you are looking for a book to read in your leisure time, I suggest giving this a try. As for the author, he definitely has a lot of potential and I believe can improve and polish himself to a high degree, definitely will write quality books in the future.
This story is an interesting book to have in your library. So far I like the characters and the way everything is set. The story has drawn me in so far so I believe it would draw others as well. Great read
This story is so good! Love the plot and how the story development tales place. Updating Stability is also ok. Character Design is super good!
The story's plot is excellent, the characters and their characteristics are all unique. You can see how vast the author's imagination is while writing this book. I recommend it to all new readers! Have fun and get lost in the world of magic.
Awesome plot with a good pace💞💞💞 The beginning is very catchy and within the first few chapters, you will get addicted to it. A must read book💞💞💞
Amazing story that deserves a lot of recognition for how it’s modified the genre and the author has put out really consistent and strong chapters. The spelling and grammar is a fresh breath of air in a platform where most do not have English as a first language. Honestly not enough praises I can sing about this novel. Definitely recommend a read and adding to your collection!
although i only read the start, but the story seems interesting and will continue to read it. It have a unique style to it, liked the story so far.
One of the best serial novels in Wn that I have ever read. I recommend this book to you all. Make sure you read it! You won't regret it. It's going to be the best time of your life!
It's amazing and great! Keep it up! I'll make sure to share this to a lot of people! [img=recommend] I have some friends who have a taste for this trope.
I'm happy that I discovered this novel. They story is soo good, the characters are cute.It is slow paced and it gives you the opportunity to bond more with the characters. Truly an amazing novel.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
story seems set up for the future and characters are being developed. My only issue is the plot development is too slow. already 30+ chapter in and Ryu is still a baby 😂😂 I need something more fast paced and not this level slow so this is not for me. Though for new readers stick around i guess if you're in it for the future development
This work was recommended to me by the writer of Cultivation time loop author, And I must say this is one of the story I look forward too, the characters are vivid, I can see the originality in the story which is rare, the story is really something fresh and enjoyable, the comedy and jokes are on spot 🤣 references are funny too like kid no jutsu and Indian Joe xD. But I can only only give 3 stars in update stability, I noticed that your updating rate had decreased in January and it is especially hard to wait when story is good, so please update more chapters more often now! Thanks for the work, Keep up the Good work author 🧁
Such a good novel with nice character development. Based on the transmigration world, coupled with the fantasy theme…there’s nothing to say bad about this. I’m glad I found this! Keep it up, author!
I like this book alot! I wonder what's going to happen next. This is an impressive story with nice jokes and also tragedy. like it a lot. all the best writer.
I really like the novel. It's fun, characters are sharing Amazing, character development is going on at a perfect rate. This novel is the full composition of all the emotions. It's really! Really worth the time! Thanks a lot![img=recommend]