The American Dream: A Modern Officer Sent to the Revolutionary War

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Jicenixe

Not gonna lie this is pretty underated this needs more attention and please don't jinx me that you will drop this or something.🙌🙏🙌🙏🙌🙏🙌🙏 Don't Drop!!!

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SageEnds

I really wanted to like this. It was a unique concept but i just found it turning really stupid. He tells so many people he is from the future, which already makes this unbearable. The writing isnt great either. If you dont mind that kind of stuff, give it a shot.

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Stick_and_Web

This story Is some of the best stuff I ever read and Found on this app or website. It tells how the main character proves himself with improving his relationship with his troops he meets iconic characters like General Arnold and also goes to the future which was affected by Kim’s actions.

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Repo_Games

I really like I first found it on Scrabblehub and have really enjoyed it. I like how he doesn't try and rule with an iron fist or try to keep the knowledge to himself and all the inventions.

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PheonixRising41

I'll be honest, I just wish the guy was immortal so he could be the "Watcher" they wanted. tgcfytcrfcrfcyhvytvnbzuirnbfgauiegbnerujgniuganeiru

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sacredyeti

sorry but your forgetting one key thing America was founded by pirates, fallen nobles , and corrupt officials. your writing is great but it does not qualify as kingdom building Long Live britain 🇬🇧

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rhcharan

I have completely read your thread on the Alternate History wiki.. Didn't know that you have posted it on Royal Road too!! Well, happy to see this gem of an ASB storyline here.. :D

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Etiger789

Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.Keep it up.

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Knossos

This story is a resoundingly awesome work of literature. Dialog, grammar, and action are all great. Very nice work OP, this is super cool.

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G_Mango

I would honestly say this story is so enticing. Like the way the story structure is so unique and different from the rest of the novels out there. I really recommend giving this a shot even though it starts off a little bit slow the story really pulls you in. I won’t give any spoilers but it’s a very different read but definitely recommend.

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Over_Lord_9904

Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!! Good book!!!

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simon_odigwe

wonderful and unique, well written with good world background and and story development. best novel of the genre I ever read. I can't wait to read the news chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾

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Tataitai

Amazing all I gotta say but it sucks that it’s no longer updated and no update abt what happened either.

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Jeffrey_C_Kingston

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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CP_Strats

I understand this is probably going to be taken down for not having perfect rating like most writers do on this app but I just have to be honest. This story started strong and was interesting for a while but at some point it went from a good story with a good premise to an info dump of useless information and glossing over major world events. for whatever reason America became a cowardly nation that accepts being disrespected by China and is scared of a collapsing Spain that is in open Civil War and accepts Americans being murder, despite being this economic and military superpower. It's a story based around the U.S but the only interesting things that are happening is in France. the entire story is constantly being spoiled by the writer because for whatever reason tells you exactly what happens before going into slightly more detail in the next 2 chapters. So everything that goes on in the story doesn't come as a surprise unless you are constantly skipping chapters. The main character was relegated to a side character that is rarely if ever mentioned. After the Revolutionary War this story just falls off hard. Apparently the chapters about the French war is from another writer so most interesting progress that's happening in the story is from someone else.

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WintyLP

nice

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TheHighElite

a solid 4.5 star book but was this put on hiatus or dropped?

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spear_Dem0N

authors-sama make sure indian never be in british control 🙂😂😂