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Was expecting more keeps adding more girls to the harem and doesn't even give time for the others and doesn't seem to have any plot as author adds stuff mid way not for me and too much fan fiction if thats a thing its a first for me thats for sure but wish the best of luck not my kind of fic
I don't like systems, since the plot only revolves around it. the personalities are quite questionable, that is, many look alike, the plot is extremely slow and the fact that part of the chapter is from the system makes it worse Even so, it can be seen that you put effort into the world
I really like the idea and plot, but sometimes the lack of continuity and constant change of plans and system is such a turn of.
I have to say. The the cartoon and animes that author have chosen are really unique.
Look, this is propably the best stuff I read in this God forsaken place for a very long time. Why? Because that's actually fun. Ton of girls, simply but working concept. And mc that isn't boring. So yeah, very good job. P. S. Just a bit of nagging. I can't be always so nice and you do have objective problem. Try to keep in moderation how many things you want to adress in each chapter. If mc goes for a battle - focus more on it. Don't talk that much about future plans, new girls all the time. Because story moves too slowly.
Good fic :D ..........................................................................................................................................
Lve it, first of all you need to know this is a Harem novel, a Big harem novel where our mc had luck in this apocalypse and decided to use this situation to have his own harem. here the girls wont fall in love with mc just at first sight or it wont be a forced plot to make them fall, all the girls here are added logically, each one acording to their own circunstances. this might sound like nothing but here in webnovel belive me its rare seing this nstead of some crack fics where girls fall in love with mc just because is mc. Another important thing is the World, its a big crossover world, with unseen universes, like Kim possible, Steven universe, Ben 10, scooby doo, hotel transilvaniaa nad a lot of other unseen nontypical worlds. If you want sometihng new, this is for you.
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we got something interesting boys. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Kim possible? Scooby Doo?.... we are in unexplored lands boys! be ready for anything..............[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
As all authors do I have come here to shamelessly give myself 5 stars because it's hard to type on a phone and it's a harem so automatic +5 stars lol
It looks promising, more chapters . Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
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Won't lie I clicked as soon as I saw hotel transylvania BUT it is good, the mc isn't boring, simple plot, and personally I just like his writing style but hey, everyone's got their own tastes. Try it out yeah?
Was expecting more keeps adding more girls to the harem and doesn't even give time for the others and doesn't seem to have any plot as author adds stuff mid way not for me and too much fan fiction if thats a thing its a first for me thats for sure but wish the best of luck not my kind of fic
I don't like systems, since the plot only revolves around it. the personalities are quite questionable, that is, many look alike, the plot is extremely slow and the fact that part of the chapter is from the system makes it worse Even so, it can be seen that you put effort into the world
I really like the idea and plot, but sometimes the lack of continuity and constant change of plans and system is such a turn of.
I have to say. The the cartoon and animes that author have chosen are really unique.
Look, this is propably the best stuff I read in this God forsaken place for a very long time. Why? Because that's actually fun. Ton of girls, simply but working concept. And mc that isn't boring. So yeah, very good job. P. S. Just a bit of nagging. I can't be always so nice and you do have objective problem. Try to keep in moderation how many things you want to adress in each chapter. If mc goes for a battle - focus more on it. Don't talk that much about future plans, new girls all the time. Because story moves too slowly.
Good fic :D ..........................................................................................................................................
Lve it, first of all you need to know this is a Harem novel, a Big harem novel where our mc had luck in this apocalypse and decided to use this situation to have his own harem. here the girls wont fall in love with mc just at first sight or it wont be a forced plot to make them fall, all the girls here are added logically, each one acording to their own circunstances. this might sound like nothing but here in webnovel belive me its rare seing this nstead of some crack fics where girls fall in love with mc just because is mc. Another important thing is the World, its a big crossover world, with unseen universes, like Kim possible, Steven universe, Ben 10, scooby doo, hotel transilvaniaa nad a lot of other unseen nontypical worlds. If you want sometihng new, this is for you.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
we got something interesting boys. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Kim possible? Scooby Doo?.... we are in unexplored lands boys! be ready for anything..............[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
As all authors do I have come here to shamelessly give myself 5 stars because it's hard to type on a phone and it's a harem so automatic +5 stars lol
It looks promising, more chapters . Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Won't lie I clicked as soon as I saw hotel transylvania BUT it is good, the mc isn't boring, simple plot, and personally I just like his writing style but hey, everyone's got their own tastes. Try it out yeah?