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Written as of chapter 5. Since it's starting way before any HP cannon events, it feels very fresh and exciting to experience the world of that time. It has a bit more grim dark heavy feeling to it than cannon, witch is to be expected at that age. The MC is still very young, but because her past she is well above her mental age. Witch makes it much more enjoyable to see her thoughts and interactions imo. The characters feel alive, and there dialogues real with there own personality. Grammar is easy to read and with very few errors. The only thing i would nitpick about, is the lack of building the immediate environment/surroundings in the scene changes. Does not need to be extensive, but just a little to build the "frame" of the picture at the very least. Like i said, this is a nitpick. Because it's not a complete lack of it, but just enough to make you feel a bit lost at times. Thank you Author! I hope to read and enjoy your novel for a long time ^^
It's an absolute delight to read it, you just connect with the characters you know, you don't care about morals or what's right or wrong(at least for me) you just care about how she lives, how she does things, her thoughts, her drive, it's simply amazing. You're brilliant and I look forward to reading more.
This is one of, if not the best fanfic. I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The story is interesting, exciting and it just keeps you hooked. I can't exactly put my finger on why this story is so good, but I assume it's because every thing just comes together so well. If you give this story a chance I guarantee you won't regret it. Chapters usually have between 5k to 8k words. So there is already plenty to read. I just hope that the Author finishes this masterpiece one day.
Normally I don't read novel without some meta knowledge. But this even with topics that I don't normally like it's awesome. It kept me glued to the screen for as long as possible because I needed to read more. Congratulations.
A Good Book 👍 ......................... Of course I don't need to explain why, just go and read it if you want to know why.
Great story and character development. Unique story with Harry Potter/Fantastic Beasts universe. Though those that dislike female MC's with yuri - you might be disappointed.
A J.k Rowling verse fanfic like non other, with a power system simple but efficient. We can see a future in the plot, by the way quite the good idea to start from the Grindelwald era cause he is a real dark lord not like Riddle who clearly lack the charisma of a Lord.
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This book wasn’t my cup of tea but I can assure you the book is very good the author obviously cares about the characters and their development and the writing quality is also brilliant
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] An amazing book. Since the story is before the canon it leaves us to enjoy this piece of work without thinking about that. And it is very nice to see an another side of the Harry Potter World through a dark lord's point of view. Thank you author for this.
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Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with how Destiny was able to discover the imposter posing as Marcus Rosier even more so intriguing the people he was communicating with seemed to be one Mad "Eye" Moody wonder what will happen now that the imposter allowed himself to be in a position to get caught by Destiny wonder what she will do cant wait look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
It’s a fantastic fanfic. With an extremely unique perspective of the Harry Potter world. The main character is very well written and her personality in general is great. The plan is unique was a really like I don’t get the feeling of déjà vu. The Chapters are coming out a bit slow. but if that’s what it craves to make such a good story, then just keep the good work up
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with how Dumbledore decided to have Professor Mcgonagall join Grindelwald's army or should say Destiny's army since that is who is in Britain quite intrigued as to what will happen that Dumbledore sent Mcgonagall to be a spy in Destiny's army and of her recruitment especially when she is close to Dumbledore wonder what will happen look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Quite intriguing how there is a secret group of the "light" side that knows of Destiny and how secretive and afraid they are by her and how much of a threat she truly is not to mention wonder how it'll go at the ball and what will she use as brute force against the Malfoy family as well how she'll deal with Tavers look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Definitely quite intriguing and interesting wonder how it'll go their trip to the Muggle World not to mention the reaction of Cassiopeia not sure if spelled that right btw when Destiny does the Fidelious charm like she had promised so to speak as well how the Ball that The Black Family is planning and just how she will deal with Tavers and The Malfoys cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
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Definitely enjoyed reading about the flashback of how Destiny met Quinton Moore not to mention how they were looking for treasure but also quite curious for what will happen next especially after Tom Riddle is born look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Quite intriguing the Mystical Ruins wonder what they discover inside along with why the Muggles were able to get through more importantly why a wizard or witch is helping them look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Quite intrigued by this sort of events not to mention wonder how Imogen will take it of her father working with the Unspeakables and what will happen now that the Bone Family joined Destiny and her cause not just that but also Newt Scamander and his investigation look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
overall good but I have only started to read it but can't wait to get into it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I have never read a fanfic so well writen. I found the harry potter books unreadable because I had problems immersing myself in the story (still got the main info on the universe thought) but your book is perfect. I was caught on the first line. Please keep writing you have a talent for it and thank you for this masterpiece.
Quite intriguing and interesting the idea that Lord Black had proposed to form a new family of The Bones family in order for them to be free and no longer oppressed also quite intrigued as to what they will do now that Destiny knows there deepest secret and how their relationship will fare out look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I'm quite intrigued and curious by just how it'll work for the MC to have her name from being mentioned without her permission in order to be in the shadows gaining power and everything else also wonder what will happen next for The Bone's family look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book was quite interesting the ritual that MC decided to use
I think that way how u had the MC come to a agreement and the way she had answered some of the questions in regards for her plans including of what to do with the muggleborns got me quite intrigued even more so when she had her people including the Black Family capture Merope Gaunt aka Tom Riddle mother with little baby Tom in her stomach still got me more interested and intrigued by this course of action more so the curse she used on the muggle wonder what happens when Tom Riddle is born
I would throw money for this book to be updated more often. The story is amazing, with an interesting take on a time period you dont see explored too often. The grammar is really solid especially for this site. I just cant get enough of it and wanna see where the author takes this story in the future!🔥🔥🔥
this book is absolutely mesmerising. you will just be absorbed whilst reading. it is worth the while. the plots and sequence are to die for.
Love the way that the MC has shown and proven her power but also demonstrating her intelligence and ruthlessness towards her enemies or whoever stands in her way of her goals not to mention how Gellert says he knows she will be the one to kill Dumbledore for she is more powerful wonder what will happen next with her Crimson Knights and Newt
I don't read fanfics. But this story is really great. It is a Harry Potter fanfic, but plays before the books or Phantastic Beasts which I find is way better. The chapters don't come daily, but the writing quality is good and the chapters are long, so all good. The characters are cool and easy to imagine, I really like Grindelwald's and Destiny's relationship
This is an author who puts time, effort, and thought into the work he has created. He doesn’t just write a fic in order to make his own story but, yet he creates his own world that you fall in love with. Keep doing what you always have done, and never doubt the works you’ve made. Skal.
Written as of chapter 5. Since it's starting way before any HP cannon events, it feels very fresh and exciting to experience the world of that time. It has a bit more grim dark heavy feeling to it than cannon, witch is to be expected at that age. The MC is still very young, but because her past she is well above her mental age. Witch makes it much more enjoyable to see her thoughts and interactions imo. The characters feel alive, and there dialogues real with there own personality. Grammar is easy to read and with very few errors. The only thing i would nitpick about, is the lack of building the immediate environment/surroundings in the scene changes. Does not need to be extensive, but just a little to build the "frame" of the picture at the very least. Like i said, this is a nitpick. Because it's not a complete lack of it, but just enough to make you feel a bit lost at times. Thank you Author! I hope to read and enjoy your novel for a long time ^^
It's an absolute delight to read it, you just connect with the characters you know, you don't care about morals or what's right or wrong(at least for me) you just care about how she lives, how she does things, her thoughts, her drive, it's simply amazing. You're brilliant and I look forward to reading more.
This is one of, if not the best fanfic. I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The story is interesting, exciting and it just keeps you hooked. I can't exactly put my finger on why this story is so good, but I assume it's because every thing just comes together so well. If you give this story a chance I guarantee you won't regret it. Chapters usually have between 5k to 8k words. So there is already plenty to read. I just hope that the Author finishes this masterpiece one day.
Normally I don't read novel without some meta knowledge. But this even with topics that I don't normally like it's awesome. It kept me glued to the screen for as long as possible because I needed to read more. Congratulations.
A Good Book 👍 ......................... Of course I don't need to explain why, just go and read it if you want to know why.
Great story and character development. Unique story with Harry Potter/Fantastic Beasts universe. Though those that dislike female MC's with yuri - you might be disappointed.
A J.k Rowling verse fanfic like non other, with a power system simple but efficient. We can see a future in the plot, by the way quite the good idea to start from the Grindelwald era cause he is a real dark lord not like Riddle who clearly lack the charisma of a Lord.
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This book wasn’t my cup of tea but I can assure you the book is very good the author obviously cares about the characters and their development and the writing quality is also brilliant
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] An amazing book. Since the story is before the canon it leaves us to enjoy this piece of work without thinking about that. And it is very nice to see an another side of the Harry Potter World through a dark lord's point of view. Thank you author for this.
moreeeeee moreee moreeeeee moreee the greatest love of my life one direction one way or another teenage dream high school of the dead space for the greatest love of my life one direction one way or another teenage dream high school of the dead space for the greatest love
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with how Destiny was able to discover the imposter posing as Marcus Rosier even more so intriguing the people he was communicating with seemed to be one Mad "Eye" Moody wonder what will happen now that the imposter allowed himself to be in a position to get caught by Destiny wonder what she will do cant wait look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
It’s a fantastic fanfic. With an extremely unique perspective of the Harry Potter world. The main character is very well written and her personality in general is great. The plan is unique was a really like I don’t get the feeling of déjà vu. The Chapters are coming out a bit slow. but if that’s what it craves to make such a good story, then just keep the good work up
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with how Dumbledore decided to have Professor Mcgonagall join Grindelwald's army or should say Destiny's army since that is who is in Britain quite intrigued as to what will happen that Dumbledore sent Mcgonagall to be a spy in Destiny's army and of her recruitment especially when she is close to Dumbledore wonder what will happen look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Quite intriguing how there is a secret group of the "light" side that knows of Destiny and how secretive and afraid they are by her and how much of a threat she truly is not to mention wonder how it'll go at the ball and what will she use as brute force against the Malfoy family as well how she'll deal with Tavers look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Definitely quite intriguing and interesting wonder how it'll go their trip to the Muggle World not to mention the reaction of Cassiopeia not sure if spelled that right btw when Destiny does the Fidelious charm like she had promised so to speak as well how the Ball that The Black Family is planning and just how she will deal with Tavers and The Malfoys cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
I love it Jsfgjdftusfthtsrjsrgjdrgjdrtjsrtjdryjdryudyrudryjyj&|yjdtyutdtyidhhjydryjdryjtgggggggggfhjhgjhrdnhgdjyrekytdkhtfdghjdghjdgyjdgyudghigdhkdfyudryudfyudfyudfyjdftusfyustfjsftudryjdfyidryu
Definitely enjoyed reading about the flashback of how Destiny met Quinton Moore not to mention how they were looking for treasure but also quite curious for what will happen next especially after Tom Riddle is born look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Quite intriguing the Mystical Ruins wonder what they discover inside along with why the Muggles were able to get through more importantly why a wizard or witch is helping them look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Quite intrigued by this sort of events not to mention wonder how Imogen will take it of her father working with the Unspeakables and what will happen now that the Bone Family joined Destiny and her cause not just that but also Newt Scamander and his investigation look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
overall good but I have only started to read it but can't wait to get into it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I have never read a fanfic so well writen. I found the harry potter books unreadable because I had problems immersing myself in the story (still got the main info on the universe thought) but your book is perfect. I was caught on the first line. Please keep writing you have a talent for it and thank you for this masterpiece.
Quite intriguing and interesting the idea that Lord Black had proposed to form a new family of The Bones family in order for them to be free and no longer oppressed also quite intrigued as to what they will do now that Destiny knows there deepest secret and how their relationship will fare out look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I'm quite intrigued and curious by just how it'll work for the MC to have her name from being mentioned without her permission in order to be in the shadows gaining power and everything else also wonder what will happen next for The Bone's family look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book was quite interesting the ritual that MC decided to use
I think that way how u had the MC come to a agreement and the way she had answered some of the questions in regards for her plans including of what to do with the muggleborns got me quite intrigued even more so when she had her people including the Black Family capture Merope Gaunt aka Tom Riddle mother with little baby Tom in her stomach still got me more interested and intrigued by this course of action more so the curse she used on the muggle wonder what happens when Tom Riddle is born
I would throw money for this book to be updated more often. The story is amazing, with an interesting take on a time period you dont see explored too often. The grammar is really solid especially for this site. I just cant get enough of it and wanna see where the author takes this story in the future!🔥🔥🔥
this book is absolutely mesmerising. you will just be absorbed whilst reading. it is worth the while. the plots and sequence are to die for.
Love the way that the MC has shown and proven her power but also demonstrating her intelligence and ruthlessness towards her enemies or whoever stands in her way of her goals not to mention how Gellert says he knows she will be the one to kill Dumbledore for she is more powerful wonder what will happen next with her Crimson Knights and Newt
I don't read fanfics. But this story is really great. It is a Harry Potter fanfic, but plays before the books or Phantastic Beasts which I find is way better. The chapters don't come daily, but the writing quality is good and the chapters are long, so all good. The characters are cool and easy to imagine, I really like Grindelwald's and Destiny's relationship
This is an author who puts time, effort, and thought into the work he has created. He doesn’t just write a fic in order to make his own story but, yet he creates his own world that you fall in love with. Keep doing what you always have done, and never doubt the works you’ve made. Skal.