20รีวิว
4.25
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Haven't read it yet, but is this something like, my 3 beautiful wife's are beautiful vampires? Or the same universe, etc?
I read up to 5 chapters and the characters are annoying, especially the MC. I know it is a quick judgment of the whole story but the MC is unbearable for me. I have the author's other book in bookmarks and I hope it is not like this one.
the story has an interesting premise however as you read on the story line gets jumbled and things get mentioned out of no where and then never again. It feels like a story the author has lost interest in and forgetting past progression. the writing is still better than an mtl
I didn't read much of it, but 16 chapters should be enough for a review. Characters are too shallow, succubus servant comes and bites him out of nowhere, acts like she's in heat all the time but somehow shrinks back down acting 'submissive' I guess. Cuddling with another man in front of your so called loved one is pretty ntr in my opinion, hated it, in comments, author said thats because she is succubus and thats why. Well, that is not a good reason, considering the succubus in question was virgin if I didn't understand it wrong. After I saw couple of reviews, I wanted to read this, coincidentally 'limited free' today was this novel. It was not a good experience for me.
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The worst thing I've read in my life 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Look here guys... I like this novel okay? This is totally my type of fantasy, but whether I like it or not, it doesn't matter. What does matter however is, MALCOLM IS THE BEST GUY!
Once novel I am really enjoying it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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😢Why is there no NTR? This makes no sense. As an incubus does not look for other people's wives..............................................
so I am deleting my past review, this doesn't deserve a 5 star review but it's a pretty interesting read, the author just has to work a bit more on the character design and story development it feels all over the place.
Read up to chapter 23 and there had been no chapter where the author hadn't killed me with those cliffhangers. The author seemed to be on a spree with those, while hooking us like an incubus 😐 the characters even side ones are so beautifully developed and the MC slowly battles with his own emotions. Such a fresh book to read with a hybrid mc.
Concept of the story is amazing, the fact The MC is a hybrid got my attention, the story flow is smooth and understandable, embedding so mysteries and of course Romance I recommend it for others to try out♥️♥️♥️
It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
Marvellous story.... the plot is unique with the protagonist Kayden being a hybrid of two races I didn't think i would ever see. The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture... Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 4/5 Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.8/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right. Sincerely, The one and only Doraemon~
Nice book. The concept is interesting, and most especially the ending parts of chapter one caught my attention, leaving me with a crave for more. Good work author.
Nice one! No grammar mistakes! loved to see more chapters and more 'action' with succumbs! and plot is also good! hoping MC 'smash' anna, it my selfish request!
It's a good book tbh. I like how the vampires had lost their healing abilities and the academy. The writing style of the author is good and the character development is amazing. The feelings of the characters needs to be explained a little more but yeah... looking forward to see how the story goes on. Good Luck Author
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It's only the first chapter and the character development is solid. We get background on Kayden as the MC, reasons to root for him, and of course the mystery. Well, there are parts that feel a bit long-winded in explaining something, but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment of reading this novel.
this novel is a hidden gem. Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status. And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom. The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace. the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors. love reading this novel so far.
Haven't read it yet, but is this something like, my 3 beautiful wife's are beautiful vampires? Or the same universe, etc?
I read up to 5 chapters and the characters are annoying, especially the MC. I know it is a quick judgment of the whole story but the MC is unbearable for me. I have the author's other book in bookmarks and I hope it is not like this one.
the story has an interesting premise however as you read on the story line gets jumbled and things get mentioned out of no where and then never again. It feels like a story the author has lost interest in and forgetting past progression. the writing is still better than an mtl
I didn't read much of it, but 16 chapters should be enough for a review. Characters are too shallow, succubus servant comes and bites him out of nowhere, acts like she's in heat all the time but somehow shrinks back down acting 'submissive' I guess. Cuddling with another man in front of your so called loved one is pretty ntr in my opinion, hated it, in comments, author said thats because she is succubus and thats why. Well, that is not a good reason, considering the succubus in question was virgin if I didn't understand it wrong. After I saw couple of reviews, I wanted to read this, coincidentally 'limited free' today was this novel. It was not a good experience for me.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ The worst thing I've read in my life 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
Look here guys... I like this novel okay? This is totally my type of fantasy, but whether I like it or not, it doesn't matter. What does matter however is, MALCOLM IS THE BEST GUY!
Once novel I am really enjoying it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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😢Why is there no NTR? This makes no sense. As an incubus does not look for other people's wives..............................................
so I am deleting my past review, this doesn't deserve a 5 star review but it's a pretty interesting read, the author just has to work a bit more on the character design and story development it feels all over the place.
Read up to chapter 23 and there had been no chapter where the author hadn't killed me with those cliffhangers. The author seemed to be on a spree with those, while hooking us like an incubus 😐 the characters even side ones are so beautifully developed and the MC slowly battles with his own emotions. Such a fresh book to read with a hybrid mc.
Concept of the story is amazing, the fact The MC is a hybrid got my attention, the story flow is smooth and understandable, embedding so mysteries and of course Romance I recommend it for others to try out♥️♥️♥️
It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
Marvellous story.... the plot is unique with the protagonist Kayden being a hybrid of two races I didn't think i would ever see. The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture... Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into. Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about. Grammar: 4/5 Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this. Writing: 4.8/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more. Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right. Sincerely, The one and only Doraemon~
Nice book. The concept is interesting, and most especially the ending parts of chapter one caught my attention, leaving me with a crave for more. Good work author.
Nice one! No grammar mistakes! loved to see more chapters and more 'action' with succumbs! and plot is also good! hoping MC 'smash' anna, it my selfish request!
It's a good book tbh. I like how the vampires had lost their healing abilities and the academy. The writing style of the author is good and the character development is amazing. The feelings of the characters needs to be explained a little more but yeah... looking forward to see how the story goes on. Good Luck Author
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ It's only the first chapter and the character development is solid. We get background on Kayden as the MC, reasons to root for him, and of course the mystery. Well, there are parts that feel a bit long-winded in explaining something, but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment of reading this novel.
this novel is a hidden gem. Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status. And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom. The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace. the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors. love reading this novel so far.