scythe of calamity

LV 15

streek135

Meh its an interesting concept just the horrendous grammar makes it unreadable. I’ve honestly had a better time reading some mtl stories over this… maybe with a very good editor this story could do well.

LV 3

Snipe_is_here

really like it .............................................................................................................................

LV 4

BobboLobbo

After the dxd arc everything is Trash, the MC ain't the MC anymore, he isn't unique as well, he gives he's new owner the ability of the Gamer, the Gamer system, and it's Hidan just a girl version, still the story is totally trash after the dxd arc. I had high hopes for this but, how unfortunate.

LV 12

comedyisland

this is awesome-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 6

ruhe

I had high hopes

LV 13

Uchiha_Ichigo

such a unique idea i really enjoy this just fix up a few grammar mistakes and this would be perfect. Just typing this for word count

LV 4

THE_BLACK_ONE

after DXD it really is not that good ...........................................................................................................

LV 2

AnotherAtlas

Really needs a grammar upgrade. Try to check for mistakes with word or grammarly. Lots of words lack "s" at the end. Good luck mate. ---------

one word masterpiece

LV 4

ShatteredMusic

This novel is fantastic and the mc will become really op which isnt a bad thing at all. ---------------------------------------------------------------------