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Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
This is an absolutely amazing fanfic I love it so much and hope it keeps going for a long time. Thank you author!
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Best crossover fic I have ever read!! Seriously got me engage with the story so badly that I havent leave my phone in 1 day. Keep up the good work on updating it!! Cant wait for the plot.
I love 💕💕💕💕💕💕 love 💝💝💝💝💝💝 love 😘😘😘😘😘 this story!!!!! This the first cultivation, transmigration, and reincarnation Harry Potter fanfiction I've ever read. You really need to post more often!!!!!
I recommend the story to those who want to read GoT. Although the basic elements of GoT are present, the story has changed and evolved at many points. Mc, no matter how Harry he is, he was actually designed to be an OC, and that's a good thing for me. (Spoilers for some points!) I have 2 complaints about the story. Firstly, the ages, Mc caused a lot of events at 6 years old and it seems strange to me in every way. If you had ever interacted with 6-year-olds near you, you would have realized what a strange story it is. My second complaint is that Hogwarts or a wizard school has not been established yet. He can easily establish a school with teachers such as the wizards he has trained for years, the alchemists he has kidnapped, and the Masters (reading, writing, counting) whom he can corruptly attract, but he is still gone for 103 episodes. Apart from these, I think the author added a Wizard to the story very well. It gave me all the fun I wanted from the story. But I wish there would be more intimate moments with Mc's family or relatives.
author! im only in chapter 2 but i already know the book will be very good. continue update until completion. don't drop
This is the rating I would give this fanfic... It's one of the few got fanfics to satisfy me. Not only is the story good with characters involved ,but storyline being build by the author is also very good... but updating a chapter in a week is too long in my opinion... but that's cool...
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Harry tiene 6 años, pero es basicamente dios, demasiado OP, Las reacciones de los personajes son estupidas, puede hacer un barco volador y los personajes estan como ‘ah vale guay’ De lo mas estupido que leí.
It's really entertaining when it focuses on Harry. But i keep finding myself skipping any stuff he's not in. I also dislike that Harry has little access to magic. It is becoming harder to stay entertained by this fic even though i dont think it is bad at all.
I'll be honest the story is good and definitely worth a read I'd say my only real issue is mostly with the authors portrayal of harry or Harrion for the story and his depiction of potter verse magic Now I'm not saying harry is horrible or anything but theres several points that I find explanations lacking or convenient for the author but dont really hold weight in my opinion or semi contradictory harry from early chapters is depectied as having been a competent leader both as a commander and a politician then later joined the department of mysteries then after his wife died he started traveling the world learning various magics and specialties of the region before fighting in world war between muggles and magicals hoping to die but apparently couldn't but to be honest the timeline laid out feels wonky for the prologue harry is born 1980 first year hogwarts was 1991 defeat of Voldemort was 1998-99 ish then 2 years of bringing purebloods and ministry to heel 10 years as a politician making it stick and pushing through reforms then retired and took his Newt's no mention on which but after joined the dom and enjoyed it immensely researching obscure magic no mention on what 2017 muggles acknoledged the presence magical enclaves bunch of political back and forth during this time harry finds himself pretty much locked in at age 20 and sometime during this point his wife dies at what 50-70?? canon wise wizards live longer Dumbledore was like 160 or more but sure she passed at like half that not that the author mentions any reason she did but sure so he fakes his death with his children most likely in thier 30s then runs off to travel the world no mention of where in the prologue but through the book its mentioned learning various magics and skills and basically learns to dislike muggles and their polluting ways and small mindedness ect after war breaks out joins hoping to die apparently cant even from bullet to the head or heart also magic is dying out but apparently his is only getting stronger and so is his healing deciding worlds dead anyways might as well try the possible portal that's the veil of death and walks through 2075 at 95 reason I point all this out is it honestly feels like a pretty hollow timeline and author uses the undefined knowledge to pick and choose throughout the story like apparently learned Damascus steel blacksmithing seen earth singers in the amazon learned spell forging from the dwarves but fought in to wars and barely learned the basics of potions and healing which both would be invaluable in war but he learned alchemy and multiple rune systems overall author really nitpicks canon not canon when it comes to criticism yet can barely call most of what harry does in this story canon and he subtly tries to nerf him in strange ways stated in the prologue the wand made him able to cast wandless magic came as easy as breathing with no exhaustion or resistance from the magic in his body yet when he is reborn it slowly semi fades to the background becoming less useful but he makes a new ring focus that's somehow better then a fabled wand that is intrinsically bonded to him or how hes a semi master apparently at warding but apparently there is no known rune to draw power/magic so he cant use them to draw magic into his body leaves me wondering how any of his runes work theres alot more especially as the story progresses but to sum it up my issues with the story is it feels like theres alot of inconsistencies between how Harry's magic works and what he knows doesnt know and authors attitude about canon fanon facts then blatantly makes up his own fanon logic then argues is someone points out something that's "fanon" but logical canon considering Rowling was bare bones in pretty much all aspects of her magic system and in some areas barely even more then off handed comments most of it seems to be used as limitations on harry even outside of magic like first harry had no intrest in learning the sword then slowly started to then created some half assed potion ritual that made him stronger with better reflexes and stamina but has to take the potion monthly then later for some reason the war with muggles became medieval and hes actually skilled or something not sure wasnt clear but he has a distaste for it then apparently he has far more baggage related to the war then previously shown but honestly feels like a cop out to basically keep harry out of the current war anyways I'm rambling and this is far longer of a review then planned story is good overall its worth reading I personally just have an issue mostly in mcs portrayal and everything surrounding them basically lol
Best fanfiction I read in a long time,it has great grammar and a very fresh and exciting concept with a somewhat stable update schedule makes this the best harry potter fanfiction I had ever read and I beg of the author to continue writing this wonderful story
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I absolutely love this story. One of my all time favorites. Highly recommend and I await with baited breath for the next chapter.
so keep the story super.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great novel. thank you! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Very good, enjoyable and intriguing.,...................................................................................,.............................
Personally I don’t really like most of it however the quality is really good and it adds depth to characters that are normally just overlooked as bad and then killed
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Good Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
This is an absolutely amazing fanfic I love it so much and hope it keeps going for a long time. Thank you author!
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⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ so far so good. It was a nice and enjoyable reading. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Best crossover fic I have ever read!! Seriously got me engage with the story so badly that I havent leave my phone in 1 day. Keep up the good work on updating it!! Cant wait for the plot.
I love 💕💕💕💕💕💕 love 💝💝💝💝💝💝 love 😘😘😘😘😘 this story!!!!! This the first cultivation, transmigration, and reincarnation Harry Potter fanfiction I've ever read. You really need to post more often!!!!!
I recommend the story to those who want to read GoT. Although the basic elements of GoT are present, the story has changed and evolved at many points. Mc, no matter how Harry he is, he was actually designed to be an OC, and that's a good thing for me. (Spoilers for some points!) I have 2 complaints about the story. Firstly, the ages, Mc caused a lot of events at 6 years old and it seems strange to me in every way. If you had ever interacted with 6-year-olds near you, you would have realized what a strange story it is. My second complaint is that Hogwarts or a wizard school has not been established yet. He can easily establish a school with teachers such as the wizards he has trained for years, the alchemists he has kidnapped, and the Masters (reading, writing, counting) whom he can corruptly attract, but he is still gone for 103 episodes. Apart from these, I think the author added a Wizard to the story very well. It gave me all the fun I wanted from the story. But I wish there would be more intimate moments with Mc's family or relatives.
author! im only in chapter 2 but i already know the book will be very good. continue update until completion. don't drop
This is the rating I would give this fanfic... It's one of the few got fanfics to satisfy me. Not only is the story good with characters involved ,but storyline being build by the author is also very good... but updating a chapter in a week is too long in my opinion... but that's cool...
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Harry tiene 6 años, pero es basicamente dios, demasiado OP, Las reacciones de los personajes son estupidas, puede hacer un barco volador y los personajes estan como ‘ah vale guay’ De lo mas estupido que leí.
It's really entertaining when it focuses on Harry. But i keep finding myself skipping any stuff he's not in. I also dislike that Harry has little access to magic. It is becoming harder to stay entertained by this fic even though i dont think it is bad at all.
I'll be honest the story is good and definitely worth a read I'd say my only real issue is mostly with the authors portrayal of harry or Harrion for the story and his depiction of potter verse magic Now I'm not saying harry is horrible or anything but theres several points that I find explanations lacking or convenient for the author but dont really hold weight in my opinion or semi contradictory harry from early chapters is depectied as having been a competent leader both as a commander and a politician then later joined the department of mysteries then after his wife died he started traveling the world learning various magics and specialties of the region before fighting in world war between muggles and magicals hoping to die but apparently couldn't but to be honest the timeline laid out feels wonky for the prologue harry is born 1980 first year hogwarts was 1991 defeat of Voldemort was 1998-99 ish then 2 years of bringing purebloods and ministry to heel 10 years as a politician making it stick and pushing through reforms then retired and took his Newt's no mention on which but after joined the dom and enjoyed it immensely researching obscure magic no mention on what 2017 muggles acknoledged the presence magical enclaves bunch of political back and forth during this time harry finds himself pretty much locked in at age 20 and sometime during this point his wife dies at what 50-70?? canon wise wizards live longer Dumbledore was like 160 or more but sure she passed at like half that not that the author mentions any reason she did but sure so he fakes his death with his children most likely in thier 30s then runs off to travel the world no mention of where in the prologue but through the book its mentioned learning various magics and skills and basically learns to dislike muggles and their polluting ways and small mindedness ect after war breaks out joins hoping to die apparently cant even from bullet to the head or heart also magic is dying out but apparently his is only getting stronger and so is his healing deciding worlds dead anyways might as well try the possible portal that's the veil of death and walks through 2075 at 95 reason I point all this out is it honestly feels like a pretty hollow timeline and author uses the undefined knowledge to pick and choose throughout the story like apparently learned Damascus steel blacksmithing seen earth singers in the amazon learned spell forging from the dwarves but fought in to wars and barely learned the basics of potions and healing which both would be invaluable in war but he learned alchemy and multiple rune systems overall author really nitpicks canon not canon when it comes to criticism yet can barely call most of what harry does in this story canon and he subtly tries to nerf him in strange ways stated in the prologue the wand made him able to cast wandless magic came as easy as breathing with no exhaustion or resistance from the magic in his body yet when he is reborn it slowly semi fades to the background becoming less useful but he makes a new ring focus that's somehow better then a fabled wand that is intrinsically bonded to him or how hes a semi master apparently at warding but apparently there is no known rune to draw power/magic so he cant use them to draw magic into his body leaves me wondering how any of his runes work theres alot more especially as the story progresses but to sum it up my issues with the story is it feels like theres alot of inconsistencies between how Harry's magic works and what he knows doesnt know and authors attitude about canon fanon facts then blatantly makes up his own fanon logic then argues is someone points out something that's "fanon" but logical canon considering Rowling was bare bones in pretty much all aspects of her magic system and in some areas barely even more then off handed comments most of it seems to be used as limitations on harry even outside of magic like first harry had no intrest in learning the sword then slowly started to then created some half assed potion ritual that made him stronger with better reflexes and stamina but has to take the potion monthly then later for some reason the war with muggles became medieval and hes actually skilled or something not sure wasnt clear but he has a distaste for it then apparently he has far more baggage related to the war then previously shown but honestly feels like a cop out to basically keep harry out of the current war anyways I'm rambling and this is far longer of a review then planned story is good overall its worth reading I personally just have an issue mostly in mcs portrayal and everything surrounding them basically lol
Best fanfiction I read in a long time,it has great grammar and a very fresh and exciting concept with a somewhat stable update schedule makes this the best harry potter fanfiction I had ever read and I beg of the author to continue writing this wonderful story
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I absolutely love this story. One of my all time favorites. Highly recommend and I await with baited breath for the next chapter.
so keep the story super.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great novel. thank you! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Very good, enjoyable and intriguing.,...................................................................................,.............................
Personally I don’t really like most of it however the quality is really good and it adds depth to characters that are normally just overlooked as bad and then killed
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Good Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!