156รีวิว
3.79
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
1st so many mistakes in grammar 2nd character development it’s a system, what do you expect 3rd blendering of marvel multiverse to keep up with MC’s power level Though I got a nice idea from this if any writers wants to write a ff The host of dedrag fought great rad to escape from the pursuit of all the supernatural and go to the other world But in the fight his soul got destroyed to save dedrag. Also Dedrag able to escape to the other world with a fragment of MC’s soul and reincarnated as a mutant with a alpha level but a bit creative type ability which compliments with his boosted gear. So he have dragon in him which give him many abilities and also boost his physical abilities On the other hand jean have phonex force which give her a boost in her mental abilities The synergy between them can be very good. A good plot for romance. Also MC will not be stupidly powerful and then became alone in later part. He can have the company of jean. So if any writer is interested on making a FF on this concept plz tell me as I can’t write a good ff.
The MC is so stupid you clearly have been showing you can do all types of magic in public and throwing iron monger around like a piece of trash and you don't think the government is watching you he doesn't deserve his powers or a second chance a life if he has all the info you really need but still acts like a naive little hero😮💨
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
so.....yeah..... there's a lot of things wrong with this, the story, the power and skill ranking, charecter.......and the grammatical errors....oh my god...... read at your own risk
it's very fun to read the story and the story is also very interesting to read
I tried, but the grammar and in this story is atrocious, it's basically unreadable.
No lo entiendo, sinceramente no entiendo... Cómo este fanfic tiene tan baja reseña sinceramente es un muy buen fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Really hate that the MCs appearance changes into whatever character he's using. It may be a stupid thing but I can't get into the fic.........................
although I haven't read it all yet and I don't know how the novel develops but I saw in the state of the Auxiliary Volume that it has the midoriya template and I think that at that time the powers of the other wielders contained in OFA had not yet come to light so you could make it face a very strong opponent making it overcome its limits and unlock one or two powers, if you have already implemented something or you are just going to leave it as is it doesn't matter, this is just a suggestion
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Although the Update needs to be consistent or atleast a specific Schedule the rest is fine. Just don't drop it. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!! ....................................................................................................................................
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So I'm going throught the review see if the Mc have atleast 1 lover if there is one can someone add that #romance gonna come back and write real review after I have few chaps under my belt
Great book totally would recommend to read and all that😁😁!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................................................
Maybe my review means less but I had to power through to chapter 4 before giving up. I know I have high standards but this is just terrible
Nada de mais, nem interessante. O típico MC de 13 anos que vende poções mágicas pro mundo. AFF. A criatividade está realmente sumindo, que mundo é esse...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Boring .............. ................................................................................. .................................... ......
The m.c. is Stupid beyond reason. Every single time he makes a catastrophic mistake author comes in clutch to suit him up in plot armour and force the story. Author doesn't take his work seriously. - he doesn't know half the lore of the stories he is writing about. & don't bother to read the source material or even do a 5min wiki search to clarify his mistakes. - like 99% of authors he doesn't know how to write a mind reading chapter & like 90% of the authors he turns his m.c. into some who doesn't read minds even when the entire world is at risk. - so, SO many character plot & lore inconsistencies & the author bulldozers through all of that without even bothering to correct / clarify those mistakes.
Sistema... OUTRO SISTEMA. Sério, onde foi para a criatividade? ...............................................................................................
Maybe I should start reading the reviews before I read the novel. I mean I have no problem with MC having a heroic personality and saving others but saving others at the cost of oneself? Atleast give an introduction about how he became like this. Like what makes him give up his life for another? I can understand the sacrificing oneself to save the world thing but to save a single soul? And I didn't even read past the Ch1.
Sad all the books that are geting updates are hero’s one irl I probably like it but in books I love cun*s lol
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best story out there. Thanks for the hard work and hope u continue this to the end.[img=recommend]
I was looking forward to this when I saw that the first template was Cedric Diggory. I mean, he's a perfect starting template, right? Situationally useful, but not very powerful in the traditional sense, and it wouldn't give him any of the advanced HP magic, right? But NO! Instead of getting Cedric's specific skills, he just got Potterverse magic as a broad category. Seriously, does the author think Cedric Diggory knew how to do that smoke trail apparition thing from the movies? Is this something the MC should be able to do at 40% integration? Also, the MC becomes a vigilante for some reason, at which point I realized this fic would only get worse in the future, and I dropped it.
[изображение = опыт][изображение=fp][img=монеты][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт]
1st so many mistakes in grammar 2nd character development it’s a system, what do you expect 3rd blendering of marvel multiverse to keep up with MC’s power level Though I got a nice idea from this if any writers wants to write a ff The host of dedrag fought great rad to escape from the pursuit of all the supernatural and go to the other world But in the fight his soul got destroyed to save dedrag. Also Dedrag able to escape to the other world with a fragment of MC’s soul and reincarnated as a mutant with a alpha level but a bit creative type ability which compliments with his boosted gear. So he have dragon in him which give him many abilities and also boost his physical abilities On the other hand jean have phonex force which give her a boost in her mental abilities The synergy between them can be very good. A good plot for romance. Also MC will not be stupidly powerful and then became alone in later part. He can have the company of jean. So if any writer is interested on making a FF on this concept plz tell me as I can’t write a good ff.
The MC is so stupid you clearly have been showing you can do all types of magic in public and throwing iron monger around like a piece of trash and you don't think the government is watching you he doesn't deserve his powers or a second chance a life if he has all the info you really need but still acts like a naive little hero😮💨
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ so.....yeah..... there's a lot of things wrong with this, the story, the power and skill ranking, charecter.......and the grammatical errors....oh my god...... read at your own risk
it's very fun to read the story and the story is also very interesting to read
I tried, but the grammar and in this story is atrocious, it's basically unreadable.
No lo entiendo, sinceramente no entiendo... Cómo este fanfic tiene tan baja reseña sinceramente es un muy buen fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Really hate that the MCs appearance changes into whatever character he's using. It may be a stupid thing but I can't get into the fic.........................
although I haven't read it all yet and I don't know how the novel develops but I saw in the state of the Auxiliary Volume that it has the midoriya template and I think that at that time the powers of the other wielders contained in OFA had not yet come to light so you could make it face a very strong opponent making it overcome its limits and unlock one or two powers, if you have already implemented something or you are just going to leave it as is it doesn't matter, this is just a suggestion
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Although the Update needs to be consistent or atleast a specific Schedule the rest is fine. Just don't drop it. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!! ....................................................................................................................................
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So I'm going throught the review see if the Mc have atleast 1 lover if there is one can someone add that #romance gonna come back and write real review after I have few chaps under my belt
Great book totally would recommend to read and all that😁😁!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................................................
Maybe my review means less but I had to power through to chapter 4 before giving up. I know I have high standards but this is just terrible
Nada de mais, nem interessante. O típico MC de 13 anos que vende poções mágicas pro mundo. AFF. A criatividade está realmente sumindo, que mundo é esse...[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Boring .............. ................................................................................. .................................... ......
The m.c. is Stupid beyond reason. Every single time he makes a catastrophic mistake author comes in clutch to suit him up in plot armour and force the story. Author doesn't take his work seriously. - he doesn't know half the lore of the stories he is writing about. & don't bother to read the source material or even do a 5min wiki search to clarify his mistakes. - like 99% of authors he doesn't know how to write a mind reading chapter & like 90% of the authors he turns his m.c. into some who doesn't read minds even when the entire world is at risk. - so, SO many character plot & lore inconsistencies & the author bulldozers through all of that without even bothering to correct / clarify those mistakes.
Sistema... OUTRO SISTEMA. Sério, onde foi para a criatividade? ...............................................................................................
Maybe I should start reading the reviews before I read the novel. I mean I have no problem with MC having a heroic personality and saving others but saving others at the cost of oneself? Atleast give an introduction about how he became like this. Like what makes him give up his life for another? I can understand the sacrificing oneself to save the world thing but to save a single soul? And I didn't even read past the Ch1.
Sad all the books that are geting updates are hero’s one irl I probably like it but in books I love cun*s lol
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best story out there. Thanks for the hard work and hope u continue this to the end.[img=recommend]
I was looking forward to this when I saw that the first template was Cedric Diggory. I mean, he's a perfect starting template, right? Situationally useful, but not very powerful in the traditional sense, and it wouldn't give him any of the advanced HP magic, right? But NO! Instead of getting Cedric's specific skills, he just got Potterverse magic as a broad category. Seriously, does the author think Cedric Diggory knew how to do that smoke trail apparition thing from the movies? Is this something the MC should be able to do at 40% integration? Also, the MC becomes a vigilante for some reason, at which point I realized this fic would only get worse in the future, and I dropped it.
[изображение = опыт][изображение=fp][img=монеты][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт][изображение = опыт]
spammed ratings to increase the rating of novel it not even deserved 3 stars