Reviews of Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft) by Duncan_Randar - Webnovel

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4.5

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moddddddd

Hey man, when are you going to continue writing again.

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Silas_Savitar_

Very good story with several good sections. I found the magic theme and storyline to be exceptionally good and creative and haven't read it like this anywhere else. Grammar and character interactions are well written.

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3mth
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Lord_of_darkness99

best asoif story ever written in the app

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Caleb_Welbeck

Have you stopped releasing or you are releasing somewhere else

9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Man_Utd_8369

Excellent story development. The world development has been very clear and characters have been very well fleshed out. The story looks to be reaching very exciting stage, although the enemies are very powerful, the development of North is in very early stages

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Paladin_of_the_God

But all a good book excellent characters in story background

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Paladin_of_the_God

A good story with great character development great background lore it isn’t too hard to follow.

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aniket_Aggarwal

This story is a colossal disappointment, a fanfic that fails to capture the essence of what made "Game of Thrones" so enthralling. Unnecessary humor, butchered characters, and a predictable plot make for a narrative that belongs in the crypts with the forgotten lore of Westeros. It's a fate worse than the Iron Islands – utterly forgettable and a waste of precious reading time.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
malhiharjot

Only able to read first two chapters and not able proceed further,only for mental age 6 to 7 year, move further with caution. Idiots who give this story more then 3 or 4 stars.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Asta_4626

"The writing quality is poor, and the way characters interact is not well-executed. I find the story overall unsatisfying. I'm uncertain about the recent chapter updates. The narrative feels disjointed, and I'm struggling to understand how it's plausible for a 5-year-old to behave like an adult. It's difficult to take a 5-year-old seriously in such a context. Additionally, the story appears to be granting more power to the enemy without clear justification, which is confusing. While the story may have some similarities with 'Game of Thrones' in terms of characters, it lacks the depth and consistency of the original series. Overall, the narrative feels disorganized. I would appreciate some revisions or, at the very least, a time skip to make the progression of events more believable. It's challenging to consider this level of maturity as normal, even in a fictional setting, when the character is only 5 years old. Please consider addressing these issues for a more coherent reading experience.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
El_nominador

La historia va evolucionando, de un fanfic original pero con características genéricas en una obra propia que se distancia del mundo en que se ambientó desarrollando personajes inexplorados, creando transfondos nuevos que dan profundidad a los personajes. Lo único que puedo criticar es la edad con la que el protagonista empieza a intervenir en la trama y que después de casi 200 capítulos me sigue pareciendo que me introducen a un conflicto que llevo esperando muchas páginas. En resumen una buena historia en la que queda patente la evolución del autor a lo largo de los capítulos. Muchas gracias por tu trabajo, espero con ansias el 194 y la recuperación de Jamie.

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Bro_is_bored

this is very thoughtful and unique fanfic i have evrer read great work author i can say u research is very thoughrally

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Desertstorm

I really liked this story at first but this is game of thrones and there's barely any action just non stop planning/plotting for the future and the realms enemies. which I wouldn't mind but there's like 160+ chapters or whatever and I think we've had maybe about 12 chapters with actually action elements in it. I know game of thrones has plots and I'm not against it but the story needs balance man, it's suppose to have fighting,murder, poison and all the evilly things we love as fans of the show.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jasonenrick

To be honest, I expected more from this wondering it has 3, 6 million views, 90 reviews, and nearly 180 chapters but It seems I can't. -Failure of common sense - Random Comedy where it isn't needed or wanted - Constant shouting in random moments -cringy Monologue - Logic mistakes - Trying to nerf the Mc by making the World stronger( God and the Angels put him in this World I doubt it acts according to Le Chatelier even when this isn't chemistry, it feels like you applied this law here Etc etc

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Dick_Wizard

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
FnaticOtaku

It’s an amazing read, not written like other fanfics but a book in of itself. Each chapter long and informative, able to grasp emotion and moments. The first few chapters were noticeably of less quality compared to the later chapters. I enjoyed the info dumps but others might disagree. The whole powers and blessings might have confused a lot of people and especially a lot of new readers who are unfamiliar with this fics version of magic. But the one downside would have to be the many point of views. I think I can speak for a few who read and wait for new chapters to update. That it takes too much time I understand having to flesh out the story and it’s one of the greatest strenght and also weakness in my humble opinion.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Torhelm

This story was great until around chapter 50 where he lost all martial prowess and intellect against Dacey Mormont. Then after she says that she found his friend more attractive, you have them like each other out of no where a few chapters later. Dacey sucks as a pairing as well, no political gain at all, and she sucks as a person.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SeventhLord

I'm ngl, I enjoyed the story at first but the cons outweigh the pros at this point (50 chapters in). The dialogue was akward with multiple misplaced commas and overuse of "my lord". Other people also profit from the MC's efforts. I wasn't against other people getting stronger as a butterfly effect of his existence like if magic came back earlier and was expanded or if the gods saw his potential and started becoming more active; but they level up with him, meaning that despite him being the one to put in the effort and not having complete access to the benefits provided by his level, they get all the benefits. The thing that really put me off though was that he became a pedophile simp (technically the same age range in his new life but he spent 100+ years in Heaven and was an adult in his previous life). Basically he lets a tomboy girl beat him up despite suffering extreme training and not even dodging.

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2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
DetachedDreamer

This is my favorite game of thrones fanfic. The MC is awesome. the development of the story and plot is moving along well. I love the detail and amount of time the author has put into this story, I can feel his heart in this tale. Two suggestions I'd say is keeping the story more on the MC, it hasn't felt like his story at all in the second half of the story, too many POVs. second, the new queen of the bank seems like the new MC and honestly has become a bit annoying, for a while now. she's always angry and pushing people around, threatening her allies more than the enemies. she might have some cause but she's blown past her allowance. At this point, I kinda just want to see her die. Characters like her can only be tolerated for so long. Other than that the story is perfect to me. Keep up the work, its amazing.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Viswa_Teja_443

This story is good, really good. I started reading this with no prior knowledge of asoiaf and was still impressed by it. The author can sometimes give excessive information and backstory about the world, but if you brace through it, then the rest is good. Characters feel like real people, and not some words to push the plot forward. OCs are also well put together. cons: Antagonists are really powerful compared to the protagonist(ch-171) and if the story moves at the pace it is moving, it'll take a long time to complete the book(that's good too). Others getting powers for balancing every time he advances is irritating at first, but we rarely come across them, and it feels like they worked for it as well. Author, you are trying to cram politics, business, action, and magic into one story. I hope you don't get overwhelmed. I know you are writing a DnD-type power system here, but it'll confuse folks like me. Heal is easier to remember than 'lay of hands'. Also, pls show the stats from time to time or else people may forget them. I was initially conflicted about this story and after reading this, I tried reading other GOT fics only to realize that this is a gem compared to the other ones.

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
shadow_sage

this story is ok but it is so fragmented by the povs every chapter that you can't really follow. there are multiple times where something should have concluded just to switch to something completely different. all in all this is more like a bunch jumbled up thoughts not full brought out.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
alexandra11

I had been following this story since day 1 and just want to say thank you author for creating one of the best got fanfic there is and hope you the best and can't wait for your original book

2yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
sacred_daoist_4

best story ever ...............................................................................................................................

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
anubis1650

I'm going to be honest and say I really like the story when it first started but along the way it started to get weird and a little out there not saying it's a bad story but kind of got turned off it at some point for multiple reasons one of them being without giving too much away that the author decided to start giving out powers to other people because the main character had powers but we're supposed to be a gift which I have really disagree with I believe I brought this up to the author and he said he needed a balance out the world which in my opinion makes his gifts Absolutely pointless and negates the whole beginning of the story which I actually thought was kind of the 1 of the coolest part of the story The other main part of why I drew issue with the story is the author started to go way too deep and change the history of the world Some of it made sense from the story perspective and other parts we're just odd and did not make sense in any way shape or form it just got a little too strange and out there for me I think I stopped around chapter 108 reason I'm giving this three stars is because I really have not decided whether I want to continue reading this and if it's good or bad yet

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Zero_24

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Piggy
LV 15 Badge

good kingdom building at start protagonist acts cringey/unbearable magic structure is introduced late writing structure is not my cup of tea introduction of extras

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
wiliton

Alguma chance de você estar publicando este romance em outra plataforma? Agora só é possível ler no aplicativo do web novel e não tem como traduzir logo não dá pra ler se tiver algum outro lugar pra poder continuar acompanhando o seu trabalho eu ficaria muito feliz

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SionZephiner

No es la más apta ni la mejor que podías encontrar por hay pero es muy buena a su manera, el desarrollo de personaje esta muy equilibrado pero aún está demaciado verde para afirmar que es sin dudas la mejor de juego de tronos

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
reflex_seam

This story is amazing with it's wonderful world building and background of history behind Westeros and Essos making it a very enjoyable read that I highyly recomend.

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
moddddddd

Hey man, when are you going to continue writing again.

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Silas_Savitar_

Very good story with several good sections. I found the magic theme and storyline to be exceptionally good and creative and haven't read it like this anywhere else. Grammar and character interactions are well written.

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lord_of_darkness99

best asoif story ever written in the app

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Caleb_Welbeck

Have you stopped releasing or you are releasing somewhere else

9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Man_Utd_8369

Excellent story development. The world development has been very clear and characters have been very well fleshed out. The story looks to be reaching very exciting stage, although the enemies are very powerful, the development of North is in very early stages

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Paladin_of_the_God

But all a good book excellent characters in story background

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Paladin_of_the_God

A good story with great character development great background lore it isn’t too hard to follow.

11mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Aniket_Aggarwal

This story is a colossal disappointment, a fanfic that fails to capture the essence of what made "Game of Thrones" so enthralling. Unnecessary humor, butchered characters, and a predictable plot make for a narrative that belongs in the crypts with the forgotten lore of Westeros. It's a fate worse than the Iron Islands – utterly forgettable and a waste of precious reading time.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
malhiharjot

Only able to read first two chapters and not able proceed further,only for mental age 6 to 7 year, move further with caution. Idiots who give this story more then 3 or 4 stars.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Asta_4626

"The writing quality is poor, and the way characters interact is not well-executed. I find the story overall unsatisfying. I'm uncertain about the recent chapter updates. The narrative feels disjointed, and I'm struggling to understand how it's plausible for a 5-year-old to behave like an adult. It's difficult to take a 5-year-old seriously in such a context. Additionally, the story appears to be granting more power to the enemy without clear justification, which is confusing. While the story may have some similarities with 'Game of Thrones' in terms of characters, it lacks the depth and consistency of the original series. Overall, the narrative feels disorganized. I would appreciate some revisions or, at the very least, a time skip to make the progression of events more believable. It's challenging to consider this level of maturity as normal, even in a fictional setting, when the character is only 5 years old. Please consider addressing these issues for a more coherent reading experience.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
El_nominador

La historia va evolucionando, de un fanfic original pero con características genéricas en una obra propia que se distancia del mundo en que se ambientó desarrollando personajes inexplorados, creando transfondos nuevos que dan profundidad a los personajes. Lo único que puedo criticar es la edad con la que el protagonista empieza a intervenir en la trama y que después de casi 200 capítulos me sigue pareciendo que me introducen a un conflicto que llevo esperando muchas páginas. En resumen una buena historia en la que queda patente la evolución del autor a lo largo de los capítulos. Muchas gracias por tu trabajo, espero con ansias el 194 y la recuperación de Jamie.

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Bro_is_bored

this is very thoughtful and unique fanfic i have evrer read great work author i can say u research is very thoughrally

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Desertstorm

I really liked this story at first but this is game of thrones and there's barely any action just non stop planning/plotting for the future and the realms enemies. which I wouldn't mind but there's like 160+ chapters or whatever and I think we've had maybe about 12 chapters with actually action elements in it. I know game of thrones has plots and I'm not against it but the story needs balance man, it's suppose to have fighting,murder, poison and all the evilly things we love as fans of the show.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jasonenrick

To be honest, I expected more from this wondering it has 3, 6 million views, 90 reviews, and nearly 180 chapters but It seems I can't. -Failure of common sense - Random Comedy where it isn't needed or wanted - Constant shouting in random moments -cringy Monologue - Logic mistakes - Trying to nerf the Mc by making the World stronger( God and the Angels put him in this World I doubt it acts according to Le Chatelier even when this isn't chemistry, it feels like you applied this law here Etc etc

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Dick_Wizard

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
FnaticOtaku

It’s an amazing read, not written like other fanfics but a book in of itself. Each chapter long and informative, able to grasp emotion and moments. The first few chapters were noticeably of less quality compared to the later chapters. I enjoyed the info dumps but others might disagree. The whole powers and blessings might have confused a lot of people and especially a lot of new readers who are unfamiliar with this fics version of magic. But the one downside would have to be the many point of views. I think I can speak for a few who read and wait for new chapters to update. That it takes too much time I understand having to flesh out the story and it’s one of the greatest strenght and also weakness in my humble opinion.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Torhelm

This story was great until around chapter 50 where he lost all martial prowess and intellect against Dacey Mormont. Then after she says that she found his friend more attractive, you have them like each other out of no where a few chapters later. Dacey sucks as a pairing as well, no political gain at all, and she sucks as a person.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SeventhLord

I'm ngl, I enjoyed the story at first but the cons outweigh the pros at this point (50 chapters in). The dialogue was akward with multiple misplaced commas and overuse of "my lord". Other people also profit from the MC's efforts. I wasn't against other people getting stronger as a butterfly effect of his existence like if magic came back earlier and was expanded or if the gods saw his potential and started becoming more active; but they level up with him, meaning that despite him being the one to put in the effort and not having complete access to the benefits provided by his level, they get all the benefits. The thing that really put me off though was that he became a pedophile simp (technically the same age range in his new life but he spent 100+ years in Heaven and was an adult in his previous life). Basically he lets a tomboy girl beat him up despite suffering extreme training and not even dodging.

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2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
DetachedDreamer

This is my favorite game of thrones fanfic. The MC is awesome. the development of the story and plot is moving along well. I love the detail and amount of time the author has put into this story, I can feel his heart in this tale. Two suggestions I'd say is keeping the story more on the MC, it hasn't felt like his story at all in the second half of the story, too many POVs. second, the new queen of the bank seems like the new MC and honestly has become a bit annoying, for a while now. she's always angry and pushing people around, threatening her allies more than the enemies. she might have some cause but she's blown past her allowance. At this point, I kinda just want to see her die. Characters like her can only be tolerated for so long. Other than that the story is perfect to me. Keep up the work, its amazing.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Viswa_Teja_443

This story is good, really good. I started reading this with no prior knowledge of asoiaf and was still impressed by it. The author can sometimes give excessive information and backstory about the world, but if you brace through it, then the rest is good. Characters feel like real people, and not some words to push the plot forward. OCs are also well put together. cons: Antagonists are really powerful compared to the protagonist(ch-171) and if the story moves at the pace it is moving, it'll take a long time to complete the book(that's good too). Others getting powers for balancing every time he advances is irritating at first, but we rarely come across them, and it feels like they worked for it as well. Author, you are trying to cram politics, business, action, and magic into one story. I hope you don't get overwhelmed. I know you are writing a DnD-type power system here, but it'll confuse folks like me. Heal is easier to remember than 'lay of hands'. Also, pls show the stats from time to time or else people may forget them. I was initially conflicted about this story and after reading this, I tried reading other GOT fics only to realize that this is a gem compared to the other ones.

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
shadow_sage

this story is ok but it is so fragmented by the povs every chapter that you can't really follow. there are multiple times where something should have concluded just to switch to something completely different. all in all this is more like a bunch jumbled up thoughts not full brought out.

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
alexandra11

I had been following this story since day 1 and just want to say thank you author for creating one of the best got fanfic there is and hope you the best and can't wait for your original book

2yr
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
sacred_daoist_4

best story ever ...............................................................................................................................

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
anubis1650

I'm going to be honest and say I really like the story when it first started but along the way it started to get weird and a little out there not saying it's a bad story but kind of got turned off it at some point for multiple reasons one of them being without giving too much away that the author decided to start giving out powers to other people because the main character had powers but we're supposed to be a gift which I have really disagree with I believe I brought this up to the author and he said he needed a balance out the world which in my opinion makes his gifts Absolutely pointless and negates the whole beginning of the story which I actually thought was kind of the 1 of the coolest part of the story The other main part of why I drew issue with the story is the author started to go way too deep and change the history of the world Some of it made sense from the story perspective and other parts we're just odd and did not make sense in any way shape or form it just got a little too strange and out there for me I think I stopped around chapter 108 reason I'm giving this three stars is because I really have not decided whether I want to continue reading this and if it's good or bad yet

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Zero_24

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Piggy
LV 15 Badge

good kingdom building at start protagonist acts cringey/unbearable magic structure is introduced late writing structure is not my cup of tea introduction of extras

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
wiliton

Alguma chance de você estar publicando este romance em outra plataforma? Agora só é possível ler no aplicativo do web novel e não tem como traduzir logo não dá pra ler se tiver algum outro lugar pra poder continuar acompanhando o seu trabalho eu ficaria muito feliz

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SionZephiner

No es la más apta ni la mejor que podías encontrar por hay pero es muy buena a su manera, el desarrollo de personaje esta muy equilibrado pero aún está demaciado verde para afirmar que es sin dudas la mejor de juego de tronos

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
reflex_seam

This story is amazing with it's wonderful world building and background of history behind Westeros and Essos making it a very enjoyable read that I highyly recomend.

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2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
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