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I know I'm pretty late with my review but here's my honest opinion. The writing quality is quite amazing for a fanfic of this specific series (trust me I saw too much cringy stories about this series) “So it's a five stars for me in this category.” For the story development however I still can't predict it's development as of now so I can't truly rate it accordingly, however as of now I like it's development. “So five stars in this category.” However for character design it's still pretty fantastic as of now because of his background and history. I also find it interesting for him to slowly unravel some secrets in his previous lives. “So it's a five stars for me in this category.” For updating stability However I'll have to rate it slightly lower because the updates are random, however it's not unbearable nor is it annoying so don't stress over this too much. “For this category my rating is 4.” For the World background I'll have to say pat yourself in the back cause trust me your background is so fantastic! “So my rating for this is 10-.... Ah right I forgot it's only up to five... I really want to rate it higher but meh.” All in all I'll have to say great story and be proud of yourself because it has so much potential! However Author Kun don't think that you can troll me again... Cause I'm now prepared for your trolls author Kun I'm prepared for trolls.....
Good novel, Solid worldbuilding and the MC actually thinks about what he does. MC has a good personality and its fun to read things from his POV. Characters from DanMachi are written as they should be with no alteration to their personalities, or how they act. All in all the novel is really good and the author has talent and there is no bad grammar when he writes chapters 10/10 cant wait for more chapters :D
The writing quality is decent, and there aren’t any big mistakes, but plot wise the author makes some confusing choices or just forces things cause they can’t figure out how to do what they want without forcing certain plot points. My biggest problem with the story is that it has no tension, it’s not exciting at all. Between that and how slow the plot is I constantly found myself scrolling through large sections of chapters only for nothing to change. Every chapter I was forcing myself to keep reading, hoping for the story to pick up and something interesting to happen, but even him joining a familia felt so boring and anticlimactic. I had to just give up at chapter 25
This review is abit overdue considering I read this novel 3 years ago when it was released and am only doing this now, but yeah this was a really solid novel, I only read till chap 120 or something and once I go through it all again I'll write another review
fairly good novel, i enjoyed it for the first hundred chapters or so. however I found myself enjoying it less and less the further along it went. as the world around the main character expended so did the interactions. where at the start it felt like every chapter was a day or two, maybe even a week of his progress. later around chapter 200 you can have 10 chapters go by just for a bunch of people to talk and nothing really happen. the power scaling is a problem but not bad enough that you cant just turn off your brain and enjoy it.
I'm not criticizing the author here. I'm not sure if the book is good or bad. I couldn't get past the second chapter. The writing is good, but the way the author writes is so confusing that it's difficult to follow. My English is not as strong as it once was, and when I read it, I can't always tell if it's a thought, a speech, or narration. If that doesn't bother you, it's certainly an excellent read.
Didn't quite sit well with me the writing style and flow of the story, found it boring and too confusing to read. I only read the first few chapters though so it might have gotten better later on without me knowing.
honestly everything was perfect.I just can't handle Harems my heart just can't take watching someone else succeed.Great job in the story, I am going to stop reading this because of the Harem though but that's just my preference since I can't handle them in the first place.Read what you will have a nice day guys would recommend.
The best danmachi fanfic out there by miles. It has romance, fights, training and its entertaining. The first FF that I had read for this anime and has not found another even close to the quality of this work
back to reading again . let's see if i can finish it tomorrow. keep up the great work and Thank you 💯
3 months of stocking chapters, wow. this is probably the longest time i had to hold off reading, well understandable sinde good novels are pretty rare nowadays. anyways congrats for wasting your time reading this and ima stock for more since i hate the number 3, bye.
Este fanfic está bien trabajado y el autor está buscando siempre originalidad en la historia tratando de no imitar casi nada de la historia a excepción de puntos claves de la historia original del Fanfic
I just straight up love how this story is developing and the power of the mc👍🥰👍so I hope it can continue till its complete and not end up dropped in the future
Overall, it is very boring, it became a chore to read with the long and drawn out internal monologues and lengthy explanations. The power scaling is a mess, the character interactions and the characters themselves are plain and uninteresting, and the pace is incredibly slow. A slow pace is not necessarily a problem if it weren't accompanied by some major pitfalls. Firstly, the development of the characters' relationships are poorly conveyed and the general dialogue format is very shallow and unpolished. Dialogues between the Mc and other characters always come off as aimless and very impersonal, always maintaining the level of casual banter or small talk one would have with an acquaintance. This is highlighted by a striking lack of detail and emphasis given to non-vocal character communications, something I attribute to the story's strange narration style, as body language and facial expressions aren't explored above a primitive application. Secondly, relationships are developed at an extremely slow pace as well. As a result, everything aside from the occasional fights feels very mundane, aimless, and passive. I personally find this very boring, I cannot stand a slow paced story with so little character development, especially when everything aside from that is the Mc doing chores, ceaseless internal monologues, and the author's constant fights with his power scaling. The power scaling is sloppy, the Mc kills an armored level 3 berserk floor boss at lvl 0 and then loses to a lvl 3 human at lvl 2. Onto the main character's character, I find it extremely disappointing. I will keep it short, but he certified that he would win the war game with 100% certainty just to get beaten by a lvl 3. If the lvl 3 hadn't forfeited without fighting for some god forsaken reason like he did, then not only Hestia, but he himself would have become a sx slave due to his unrestrained arrogance, All self inflicted as he himself provoked the situation. Nuff yap bye.
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Honestly ,this is the best danmachi fanfic that I have read so far . I only hope that it just don't drop.
This is a fun story that has given me a lot of laughs and excitement while reading with the mcs unique powers and well described fight scenes definitely a story I would recommend 👍😊👍
I would like ask what is MC s current age at this point in story... *don't mind spoiling *
I haven't read this yet and just want to start. So I'll get straight to it. Is Bell Crane in this story or not?
Oh boy, this one might just be the best danmachi fanfic I've ever read. Well in my opinion.
I am at chapter 108, and reading this Fanfic can be quite emotional. The MC is initially introduced as a smart and genius person. After reincarnating into Danmachi, the MC slowly transforms into a maniac fighter, making many foolish decisions with challenges that could get him killed anytime. During the WG, he could have been killed by the captain of the Apollo family due to his carelessness. In the fight against Level 8, in my opinion, it was the dumbest, if Aetos hadn't restrained himself, the MC would have died. At that moment, I even hoped that Aetos would kill the MC. But nevertheless, it's a good story.
E sua outra história meu amigo Abadom? abandonou ou deu um tempo sem avisar? 🤨😭😭😭. Msm ela sendo uma obra que você fez por diversão poderia voltar a lançar. Leve isso numa boa só quero saber se vc pretende voltar com ela ou não.
Amazing book and I love the MC. I can’t recommend this book enough. The only thing I would have to say is if the Benihisago was ever used on the author, “Albeit” would be what killed him!
I liked the story so far, the characters and how they interact with each other. But the progression of MC is too slow, it takes him around 190 chapters to become a level 4 despite his powers... no thanks.
This is a bised review that is extremely late. The characters all have good development I love bioshock so it’s really cool to see it crossed over into some other verses. Good pacing, character interactions, and over all a great novel. Ps I’m really bad at putting my thoughts into words 😅
Current Chapter - 30 I can only say that this is a great read, The world building is going great. The Mc is great.
It is only 7 chapters in but I gotta say it is going awesome so far. The MC doesn’t become OP instantly which is a plus from me. In many other books, The MC becomes invincible in the first chapter but I enjoy reading growth type books and this one is great at it. Keep up the good work author, you are doing great!
I know I'm pretty late with my review but here's my honest opinion. The writing quality is quite amazing for a fanfic of this specific series (trust me I saw too much cringy stories about this series) “So it's a five stars for me in this category.” For the story development however I still can't predict it's development as of now so I can't truly rate it accordingly, however as of now I like it's development. “So five stars in this category.” However for character design it's still pretty fantastic as of now because of his background and history. I also find it interesting for him to slowly unravel some secrets in his previous lives. “So it's a five stars for me in this category.” For updating stability However I'll have to rate it slightly lower because the updates are random, however it's not unbearable nor is it annoying so don't stress over this too much. “For this category my rating is 4.” For the World background I'll have to say pat yourself in the back cause trust me your background is so fantastic! “So my rating for this is 10-.... Ah right I forgot it's only up to five... I really want to rate it higher but meh.” All in all I'll have to say great story and be proud of yourself because it has so much potential! However Author Kun don't think that you can troll me again... Cause I'm now prepared for your trolls author Kun I'm prepared for trolls.....
Good novel, Solid worldbuilding and the MC actually thinks about what he does. MC has a good personality and its fun to read things from his POV. Characters from DanMachi are written as they should be with no alteration to their personalities, or how they act. All in all the novel is really good and the author has talent and there is no bad grammar when he writes chapters 10/10 cant wait for more chapters :D
The writing quality is decent, and there aren’t any big mistakes, but plot wise the author makes some confusing choices or just forces things cause they can’t figure out how to do what they want without forcing certain plot points. My biggest problem with the story is that it has no tension, it’s not exciting at all. Between that and how slow the plot is I constantly found myself scrolling through large sections of chapters only for nothing to change. Every chapter I was forcing myself to keep reading, hoping for the story to pick up and something interesting to happen, but even him joining a familia felt so boring and anticlimactic. I had to just give up at chapter 25
This review is abit overdue considering I read this novel 3 years ago when it was released and am only doing this now, but yeah this was a really solid novel, I only read till chap 120 or something and once I go through it all again I'll write another review
fairly good novel, i enjoyed it for the first hundred chapters or so. however I found myself enjoying it less and less the further along it went. as the world around the main character expended so did the interactions. where at the start it felt like every chapter was a day or two, maybe even a week of his progress. later around chapter 200 you can have 10 chapters go by just for a bunch of people to talk and nothing really happen. the power scaling is a problem but not bad enough that you cant just turn off your brain and enjoy it.
I'm not criticizing the author here. I'm not sure if the book is good or bad. I couldn't get past the second chapter. The writing is good, but the way the author writes is so confusing that it's difficult to follow. My English is not as strong as it once was, and when I read it, I can't always tell if it's a thought, a speech, or narration. If that doesn't bother you, it's certainly an excellent read.
Didn't quite sit well with me the writing style and flow of the story, found it boring and too confusing to read. I only read the first few chapters though so it might have gotten better later on without me knowing.
honestly everything was perfect.I just can't handle Harems my heart just can't take watching someone else succeed.Great job in the story, I am going to stop reading this because of the Harem though but that's just my preference since I can't handle them in the first place.Read what you will have a nice day guys would recommend.
The best danmachi fanfic out there by miles. It has romance, fights, training and its entertaining. The first FF that I had read for this anime and has not found another even close to the quality of this work
back to reading again . let's see if i can finish it tomorrow. keep up the great work and Thank you 💯
3 months of stocking chapters, wow. this is probably the longest time i had to hold off reading, well understandable sinde good novels are pretty rare nowadays. anyways congrats for wasting your time reading this and ima stock for more since i hate the number 3, bye.
Este fanfic está bien trabajado y el autor está buscando siempre originalidad en la historia tratando de no imitar casi nada de la historia a excepción de puntos claves de la historia original del Fanfic
I just straight up love how this story is developing and the power of the mc👍🥰👍so I hope it can continue till its complete and not end up dropped in the future
Overall, it is very boring, it became a chore to read with the long and drawn out internal monologues and lengthy explanations. The power scaling is a mess, the character interactions and the characters themselves are plain and uninteresting, and the pace is incredibly slow. A slow pace is not necessarily a problem if it weren't accompanied by some major pitfalls. Firstly, the development of the characters' relationships are poorly conveyed and the general dialogue format is very shallow and unpolished. Dialogues between the Mc and other characters always come off as aimless and very impersonal, always maintaining the level of casual banter or small talk one would have with an acquaintance. This is highlighted by a striking lack of detail and emphasis given to non-vocal character communications, something I attribute to the story's strange narration style, as body language and facial expressions aren't explored above a primitive application. Secondly, relationships are developed at an extremely slow pace as well. As a result, everything aside from the occasional fights feels very mundane, aimless, and passive. I personally find this very boring, I cannot stand a slow paced story with so little character development, especially when everything aside from that is the Mc doing chores, ceaseless internal monologues, and the author's constant fights with his power scaling. The power scaling is sloppy, the Mc kills an armored level 3 berserk floor boss at lvl 0 and then loses to a lvl 3 human at lvl 2. Onto the main character's character, I find it extremely disappointing. I will keep it short, but he certified that he would win the war game with 100% certainty just to get beaten by a lvl 3. If the lvl 3 hadn't forfeited without fighting for some god forsaken reason like he did, then not only Hestia, but he himself would have become a sx slave due to his unrestrained arrogance, All self inflicted as he himself provoked the situation. Nuff yap bye.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Honestly ,this is the best danmachi fanfic that I have read so far . I only hope that it just don't drop.
This is a fun story that has given me a lot of laughs and excitement while reading with the mcs unique powers and well described fight scenes definitely a story I would recommend 👍😊👍
I would like ask what is MC s current age at this point in story... *don't mind spoiling *
I haven't read this yet and just want to start. So I'll get straight to it. Is Bell Crane in this story or not?
Oh boy, this one might just be the best danmachi fanfic I've ever read. Well in my opinion.
I am at chapter 108, and reading this Fanfic can be quite emotional. The MC is initially introduced as a smart and genius person. After reincarnating into Danmachi, the MC slowly transforms into a maniac fighter, making many foolish decisions with challenges that could get him killed anytime. During the WG, he could have been killed by the captain of the Apollo family due to his carelessness. In the fight against Level 8, in my opinion, it was the dumbest, if Aetos hadn't restrained himself, the MC would have died. At that moment, I even hoped that Aetos would kill the MC. But nevertheless, it's a good story.
E sua outra história meu amigo Abadom? abandonou ou deu um tempo sem avisar? 🤨😭😭😭. Msm ela sendo uma obra que você fez por diversão poderia voltar a lançar. Leve isso numa boa só quero saber se vc pretende voltar com ela ou não.
Amazing book and I love the MC. I can’t recommend this book enough. The only thing I would have to say is if the Benihisago was ever used on the author, “Albeit” would be what killed him!
I liked the story so far, the characters and how they interact with each other. But the progression of MC is too slow, it takes him around 190 chapters to become a level 4 despite his powers... no thanks.
This is a bised review that is extremely late. The characters all have good development I love bioshock so it’s really cool to see it crossed over into some other verses. Good pacing, character interactions, and over all a great novel. Ps I’m really bad at putting my thoughts into words 😅
Current Chapter - 30 I can only say that this is a great read, The world building is going great. The Mc is great.
It is only 7 chapters in but I gotta say it is going awesome so far. The MC doesn’t become OP instantly which is a plus from me. In many other books, The MC becomes invincible in the first chapter but I enjoy reading growth type books and this one is great at it. Keep up the good work author, you are doing great!