The thing we can't reach

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Bk1010

Yeahhhh... i know i am reviewing my own freakin book:) anyways what i want to say is... if you really like this book, if you REALLY like it then please add it to you library. Anyways thanks for checking it out:)

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TofSpades

Really love the premise. The world building is really thought out and carefully done. The grammar is good, so I did not have to waste braincells trying to understand what author is saying. Great job Author!

LV 2

PrugnaKerai

I would say the author is raw potential. They need to do more work to make their narrative smoother, which, at the moment is largely chunky and rigid. The grammar is slightly inconsistent in places. They are inexperienced when using a variety of different terminology, and should be wary when overloading the reader with too much detail, expecially names.

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Ramsha_Rais

The plot of this story is really good and I will keep reading it and I have also added it to my Library! I really hope the author doesn't stop writing! Good work

LV 2

Megana4

Quite an interesting plot and so far the book is great. The writing style and dialogue are on point and well written. The characters are well portrayed and the story is medium-paced. Highly recommended!!! Keep up the good work, author!!