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It's a good fanfic, fun to read! Just a suggestion for the author, I think that instead of releasing a massive chapter every few months, you should release lighter chapters more often, it would be easier to follow!
If it wasn’t for the mc it would be a pretty good book, but the mc seems to get quite a few deus ex michinas and yet still manages to be a wallflower.
Hello author is this novel dropped or not?, also I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel.
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if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info)
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Very good story and world building loving it so far you prob know this but with the grammar only problem I can see that effect it is for quite a lot of the book she and he r mixed up
The translation is quite bad, stability of updates is also meh, character is quite lame and the story/world isnt anything special... too bad
love the story please continue on with what youre doing and ignore all the hate also i hope you update more frequently looking at the long gaps in updates makes it a little discouraging to read
well first of all, I've only read up until the four of them finished fighting the troll. the writing is a mess. it's either your english is bad or the way you translate it from your mother language is wrong. also, your pharagraps is too long to read comfortably, especially so for mobile users. you should've shortened it to 20-50 words. I could easily see many pharagraps having more than 50 words. the story is meh. no innovation from the canon, pretty much just MC being a side character in the overall story. the idea for the MC is not bad. though the author haven't explain properly how the MC gained his powers. don't know if the author will explain it in the future chapter. don't care, i won't continue reading it anyway.
This is one of, if not the, best HP FF's on this site. It's absolutely amazing, the story mostly follows canon events but puts it's own spin on them, MC i cold and calculating in the beginning but develops well with the story. His bloodline isn't just an OP power up, it takes time to develop and even then it's not just an upgrade. There are some grammatical things to fix such as Spanish pronouns, refering to objects as she and so on, which I personally think only adds to the story but that's me. Would love to read more when author has time again!
keep going in the book it is pretty good so far but it suddenly stops It is so aggravating what do his 'parents' mean by his first awakening
Очень хорошее произведение, которое по моему мнению незаслуженно занижают. Конечно в тексте есть ошибки и я это не отрицаю, но это не повод ставить 1 звезду на такое проищведение, особенно учитывая то, что в следующих главах ошибок становится менише. История интересная и запутанная. Особенно с родителями главного героя. Я только очень прошу автора не прощать родителей, по какой то тупой причине. За такое нет никакого прощения. Рекомендую.
ahahahaha harem in harry potter ahahahah, get the f out ............................................................................................................
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if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story... because anything related to the golden trio, the mc automatically becomes air. it's almost a copy of history... no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info) in general, I wouldn't recommend it... but you're there to read and pass the time
Cringe overload, very average I gave 5 not because of the story but because I don't even care to rate it. Thank you for the very average story I salute you for the creativity that went into this which seems like absolutely nothing.
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I enjoy what you have done in the book so far. Hope you continue writing because you are doing great 👍 .
good book ...... ....,...........................................,,.............................................................,............
Good. I very much like this fan novel, i can't wait for more ch.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
more chapter (acostumbrado a escribir en ingles de tantos libros de solo ingles xD). *9********************************************************************************
I love this novel. love what you're doing and how you're going about. love that you, including more magical creatures, as well as giving magical creatures powerful and interesting ancestors. Love the main characters personality, but hopefully, his personality doesn't take a nose dive. Can't wait for thr next chapters keep up the great work
It's a good fanfic, fun to read! Just a suggestion for the author, I think that instead of releasing a massive chapter every few months, you should release lighter chapters more often, it would be easier to follow!
If it wasn’t for the mc it would be a pretty good book, but the mc seems to get quite a few deus ex michinas and yet still manages to be a wallflower.
Hello author is this novel dropped or not?, also I wanted to know if there is ntr or Yuri in this novel.
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if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info)
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Very good story and world building loving it so far you prob know this but with the grammar only problem I can see that effect it is for quite a lot of the book she and he r mixed up
The translation is quite bad, stability of updates is also meh, character is quite lame and the story/world isnt anything special... too bad
love the story please continue on with what youre doing and ignore all the hate also i hope you update more frequently looking at the long gaps in updates makes it a little discouraging to read
well first of all, I've only read up until the four of them finished fighting the troll. the writing is a mess. it's either your english is bad or the way you translate it from your mother language is wrong. also, your pharagraps is too long to read comfortably, especially so for mobile users. you should've shortened it to 20-50 words. I could easily see many pharagraps having more than 50 words. the story is meh. no innovation from the canon, pretty much just MC being a side character in the overall story. the idea for the MC is not bad. though the author haven't explain properly how the MC gained his powers. don't know if the author will explain it in the future chapter. don't care, i won't continue reading it anyway.
This is one of, if not the, best HP FF's on this site. It's absolutely amazing, the story mostly follows canon events but puts it's own spin on them, MC i cold and calculating in the beginning but develops well with the story. His bloodline isn't just an OP power up, it takes time to develop and even then it's not just an upgrade. There are some grammatical things to fix such as Spanish pronouns, refering to objects as she and so on, which I personally think only adds to the story but that's me. Would love to read more when author has time again!
keep going in the book it is pretty good so far but it suddenly stops It is so aggravating what do his 'parents' mean by his first awakening
Очень хорошее произведение, которое по моему мнению незаслуженно занижают. Конечно в тексте есть ошибки и я это не отрицаю, но это не повод ставить 1 звезду на такое проищведение, особенно учитывая то, что в следующих главах ошибок становится менише. История интересная и запутанная. Особенно с родителями главного героя. Я только очень прошу автора не прощать родителей, по какой то тупой причине. За такое нет никакого прощения. Рекомендую.
ahahahaha harem in harry potter ahahahah, get the f out ............................................................................................................
more chapter. *************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ A Question Why Is There An R*pe In The Tags? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
if you remove the mc, it becomes a good story... because anything related to the golden trio, the mc automatically becomes air. it's almost a copy of history... no mention of what mc skills can do (more detailed info) in general, I wouldn't recommend it... but you're there to read and pass the time
Cringe overload, very average I gave 5 not because of the story but because I don't even care to rate it. Thank you for the very average story I salute you for the creativity that went into this which seems like absolutely nothing.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I enjoy what you have done in the book so far. Hope you continue writing because you are doing great 👍 .
good book ...... ....,...........................................,,.............................................................,............
Good. I very much like this fan novel, i can't wait for more ch.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
more chapter (acostumbrado a escribir en ingles de tantos libros de solo ingles xD). *9********************************************************************************
I love this novel. love what you're doing and how you're going about. love that you, including more magical creatures, as well as giving magical creatures powerful and interesting ancestors. Love the main characters personality, but hopefully, his personality doesn't take a nose dive. Can't wait for thr next chapters keep up the great work