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A very good pokemon fanfiction hopefully you continue this fanfiction is really good and also masterpiece and kenta personality is cool overall this fanfiction is really good hopefully you continue this fanfiction
O protagonista é uma espécie muito rara no site Webnovel, ele não é um 'simp' que brinca de capiturar 'pokewomans', ele e calma, mas também muito decidido e também implacável, esse tipo de protagonista que eu queria em muitas outras fanfics por esse Site... ps; Eu achei a escrita do autor, ruim, parecido com um MTL bem traduzido, mas sem a história ser ruim. Parece que o autor tá melhorando a gramática nos capítulos recentes.
🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊💗🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊💗💗💗🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊 nice story, kudos author
What can I say about this novel?! Whatever I say would be an underestimating compliment. This novel is so awesome, that you just have to try it!!! Such an engrossing novel!! Please keep up the good work, Author!>3 Wishing you the best for your amazing novel!
A nice throwback to the my childhood. Definitely give this a read the progression so far has been great and I hope it keeps on going that way.
Ok, being really honest here, I have never watched/read Pokemon before XD. But I feel like this book was really cool and cute at the same time. Though it is kinda like fanfiction? it was still a great read and easy to understand. But I feel like some parts of the dialogue could be written more indepth (just really persona opinion). Keep up the good work Author!
With this the rating should show up. Full marks here keep the chapters coming. …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… ……………………………
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The plot is good but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes and the flow sometimes feels incomplete, other than that the novel is a must-read one.
Writing Quality: Really good all I could say/ask is what does () and [] mean. Otherwise, the only grammar problem I could find was capitalization. Other than that unique way of writing haven't thought of that. Stability: Sort of jumped around but rl issues and all that so ya at least it more than one chapter a month Story Dev: Have the main idea and it slowly building up Character Design: Strangeish but all I would suggest is going in a little more depth with characters that MC will interact with more because right now I don't know anything other than what I had in my before knowledge World Background: Same I know about but it was gone over quickly so that is good. My Opinion: Really good just want the update schedule to be a little faster but rl is first. Would like a little more detail but starting be hard so I waiting for future chapters. Oh and just saying that I hate the potential thing, if you can increase it then that would be wonderful but otherwise plz remove potential it makes everything run on plot armor. I fine with nature but it's not really necessary just plz don't put too much base on it.
a very interesting take on the Pokemon world so far I find the erratic behaviour of the main character interesting although having one of the powers locked by an outside force seems to be an interesting choice can't wait to see where it goes ID recommend this for someone who's sick of the ash follower
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Wow!!.. The storyline is captivating and I love the author's choice of words, This is a pue nostalgia to those days when I use to come back to watch pokemon series. Good work keep it up
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
don't expect a serious novel and for a new writer I like the characters, very entertaining. maybe fix the speaking stuff a little bit. I don't know how to review a novel.
I would say for a novest writer it's good and the authors slowly improving now let's talk about writing quality I say its gotten better in the most recent chapters story development is lackluster but the author doing everything ok so far nothing bad but nothing very good, character design is the same reincarnation, wants to be the best you know the same usual tho for me I would like the characters to have some depth like show his past where he watched the anime or played the pokemon games and stuff, updating stability isn't to bad, world background well it pokemon with some game characters in it
j]ust author giving his book five stars,no suspicious activity here anyway you can comment anything ,feel free to comment Anything regarding this book
The novel is good and the story development also great, but there are lots of grammar mistakes and as for the character, will... I like the MC but his personality sort of.. not interested? I mean like he doesn't have a goal, but if that's the point of this novel... then forget about that part what i just said. And as for the world building..come on it's Pokemon, and i give it 2 star ⭐ for update stability.
Hope that this Fanfic will be unique as you. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
A very good pokemon fanfiction hopefully you continue this fanfiction is really good and also masterpiece and kenta personality is cool overall this fanfiction is really good hopefully you continue this fanfiction
O protagonista é uma espécie muito rara no site Webnovel, ele não é um 'simp' que brinca de capiturar 'pokewomans', ele e calma, mas também muito decidido e também implacável, esse tipo de protagonista que eu queria em muitas outras fanfics por esse Site... ps; Eu achei a escrita do autor, ruim, parecido com um MTL bem traduzido, mas sem a história ser ruim. Parece que o autor tá melhorando a gramática nos capítulos recentes.
🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊💗🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊💗💗💗🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊 nice story, kudos author
What can I say about this novel?! Whatever I say would be an underestimating compliment. This novel is so awesome, that you just have to try it!!! Such an engrossing novel!! Please keep up the good work, Author!>3 Wishing you the best for your amazing novel!
A nice throwback to the my childhood. Definitely give this a read the progression so far has been great and I hope it keeps on going that way.
Ok, being really honest here, I have never watched/read Pokemon before XD. But I feel like this book was really cool and cute at the same time. Though it is kinda like fanfiction? it was still a great read and easy to understand. But I feel like some parts of the dialogue could be written more indepth (just really persona opinion). Keep up the good work Author!
With this the rating should show up. Full marks here keep the chapters coming. …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… …………………………… ……………………………
/./////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The plot is good but there are a lot of grammatical mistakes and the flow sometimes feels incomplete, other than that the novel is a must-read one.
Writing Quality: Really good all I could say/ask is what does () and [] mean. Otherwise, the only grammar problem I could find was capitalization. Other than that unique way of writing haven't thought of that. Stability: Sort of jumped around but rl issues and all that so ya at least it more than one chapter a month Story Dev: Have the main idea and it slowly building up Character Design: Strangeish but all I would suggest is going in a little more depth with characters that MC will interact with more because right now I don't know anything other than what I had in my before knowledge World Background: Same I know about but it was gone over quickly so that is good. My Opinion: Really good just want the update schedule to be a little faster but rl is first. Would like a little more detail but starting be hard so I waiting for future chapters. Oh and just saying that I hate the potential thing, if you can increase it then that would be wonderful but otherwise plz remove potential it makes everything run on plot armor. I fine with nature but it's not really necessary just plz don't put too much base on it.
a very interesting take on the Pokemon world so far I find the erratic behaviour of the main character interesting although having one of the powers locked by an outside force seems to be an interesting choice can't wait to see where it goes ID recommend this for someone who's sick of the ash follower
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Wow!!.. The storyline is captivating and I love the author's choice of words, This is a pue nostalgia to those days when I use to come back to watch pokemon series. Good work keep it up
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
don't expect a serious novel and for a new writer I like the characters, very entertaining. maybe fix the speaking stuff a little bit. I don't know how to review a novel.
I would say for a novest writer it's good and the authors slowly improving now let's talk about writing quality I say its gotten better in the most recent chapters story development is lackluster but the author doing everything ok so far nothing bad but nothing very good, character design is the same reincarnation, wants to be the best you know the same usual tho for me I would like the characters to have some depth like show his past where he watched the anime or played the pokemon games and stuff, updating stability isn't to bad, world background well it pokemon with some game characters in it
j]ust author giving his book five stars,no suspicious activity here anyway you can comment anything ,feel free to comment Anything regarding this book
The novel is good and the story development also great, but there are lots of grammar mistakes and as for the character, will... I like the MC but his personality sort of.. not interested? I mean like he doesn't have a goal, but if that's the point of this novel... then forget about that part what i just said. And as for the world building..come on it's Pokemon, and i give it 2 star ⭐ for update stability.