Harry Potter but I am a side character?

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Aedan

OK, I don't usually leave a review in a novel with so little chapters, cause it can really bad really quickly , but this one has opened my mind to so many possibilities in HP world and how it can go on that I will leave one So far it has been a great read, the author made the flow of history really good and so far it has a great development, however I can't say much more it has to little chapters so far The only criticism I have it is that I can't imagine the MC looks, hopefully the author will give a detailed description in the next chapters Hope u can continue the good work, and don't give up halfway Man only 8 chapters so far...

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Tv_Tv_7716

I have read many Harry Potter fan-fic and in them they just make the Mc busted. I am glad that this story doesn't do that try to follow the rules of the Harry Potter universe and tries not to enter the MCU. The updates are stable and the story is nice I have never read a fan-fic with an Indian Protagonist and honestly it is pretty exciting to read about the only place this is lacking might be the punctuations but I love the author could fix them in the future. Otherwise, it is a solid read.

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BobboLobbo

The story started in a messed up way; The 1st couple of chapters had a mashed-up paragraph in which you would get confused by who is speaking. For the people who don't want many changes in the Canon, the Author introduces God's, changes the fact that the Basilisk is the strongest snake and makes it so that there is a stronger one which has something to do with God's? Anways the story is very messy and hard to read because of the writing.

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manyaktavuk

Decided to drop after 17. Chapter ........ Good potential but so bad decisions on story no one say this book is good Sorry but its awfull