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Yes, don't waste your money. If the first two chapters are terrible so is the rest of it. I can't believe that it starts charging after two chapters. The first line wasn't eye catching either. I wanted to give it a chance and it's just mindless dribble. Needs a lot of work in the character and story development.
Honestly I wanted this short gay novella to be great. It is not worth wasting your time or money on. The characters are poorly written tropes with names. There is barely a solid storyline to follow and everything is reduced under terribly flowery and gaudy language which gets so encompassing you don’t know where the scene actually begins and the descriptions end.
Yes, don't waste your money. If the first two chapters are terrible so is the rest of it. I can't believe that it starts charging after two chapters. The first line wasn't eye catching either. I wanted to give it a chance and it's just mindless dribble. Needs a lot of work in the character and story development.
Honestly I wanted this short gay novella to be great. It is not worth wasting your time or money on. The characters are poorly written tropes with names. There is barely a solid storyline to follow and everything is reduced under terribly flowery and gaudy language which gets so encompassing you don’t know where the scene actually begins and the descriptions end.
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