Reviews of The First Dungeon Core by Yotro - Webnovel

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Itlab_Soup

This is a very good book I really like the dungeon building parts, especially some of the earlier chapters The mc is a dungeon core (Magic rock that make death traps) and it follows the dungeons creation and expansion as well As how various Civilizations interact with it

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Ashton_A

Amazing new take on the dungeon core genre. No cliches, original plot, original design, and an mc who is not reincarnated but an actual dungeon core born and raised. The Core doesn't act human like which is a common mistake in other novels, and instead acts realistically like a newborn dungeon core. The influence/expansion thing was cool as well. All in all great novel, hope you keep it up.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
_Nitro_
LV 10 Badge

Im loving everything so far, i dont write reviews so imma just say what i like about the story so far and recomend you to give it a shot if your reading this. Just a few things things I really liked; World building is pretty good, instead of just telling of everything about where the mc starts the author does it so he learns of his surrounds from the civiliations around him and the memories of those he kills. And when it comes to those civilizations the authors takes their time to go into their workings, like what their good at and focus on while showing how it leads to some points being stronger while what they ignore being behind. When it comes to the dungeon building and monster/tier system it good at some points and great at others. I especially like the tier system.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
wrightyboy

My favourite dungeon core book of all time love how the story is going so far as well as how the creatures evolve and adapt to the environment. hope you keep on showing cool evolutions. I also hope the dungeon creates its own intelligent species.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Yotro
LV 1 Badge

Well, as I am the Author of the book I of course love my little baby, duhhh!!! Anyways ... read it, its quite good, or so I hope!!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
GOD_SLAYER

Wow just wow this is a masterpiece I love dungeon master and core novels and this is a high quality novel bro I like the mc's personality and how he creates monsters and the way he creates them has so much potential

3yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Itlab_Soup

This is a very good book I really like the dungeon building parts, especially some of the earlier chapters The mc is a dungeon core (Magic rock that make death traps) and it follows the dungeons creation and expansion as well As how various Civilizations interact with it

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Ashton_A

Amazing new take on the dungeon core genre. No cliches, original plot, original design, and an mc who is not reincarnated but an actual dungeon core born and raised. The Core doesn't act human like which is a common mistake in other novels, and instead acts realistically like a newborn dungeon core. The influence/expansion thing was cool as well. All in all great novel, hope you keep it up.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
_Nitro_
LV 10 Badge

Im loving everything so far, i dont write reviews so imma just say what i like about the story so far and recomend you to give it a shot if your reading this. Just a few things things I really liked; World building is pretty good, instead of just telling of everything about where the mc starts the author does it so he learns of his surrounds from the civiliations around him and the memories of those he kills. And when it comes to those civilizations the authors takes their time to go into their workings, like what their good at and focus on while showing how it leads to some points being stronger while what they ignore being behind. When it comes to the dungeon building and monster/tier system it good at some points and great at others. I especially like the tier system.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
wrightyboy

My favourite dungeon core book of all time love how the story is going so far as well as how the creatures evolve and adapt to the environment. hope you keep on showing cool evolutions. I also hope the dungeon creates its own intelligent species.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Yotro
LV 1 Badge

Well, as I am the Author of the book I of course love my little baby, duhhh!!! Anyways ... read it, its quite good, or so I hope!!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
GOD_SLAYER

Wow just wow this is a masterpiece I love dungeon master and core novels and this is a high quality novel bro I like the mc's personality and how he creates monsters and the way he creates them has so much potential

3yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ