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God awful start to a story. Stuffing so much forced tragedy down an audiences throat. No natural feel at all, if you gotta do all that to make this story happen it just ain't meant to be. Letting the webnovel readers control the direction of the story is another red flag. I know where this story is eventually headed.
totally didn't expect this fanfic concept you caught me of guard.😁😁👏👏👏 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinggggggggggggllllllllllyyyyyyyyy gooooooooooooooodd
Great story please dont drop........................................................................................,l.................................. .... .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
PLEASE MAKE MORE ALSO WHAT IS NARUTO DOJUSU FOR IS EYE LOOK LIKE ? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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just finished reading and i gotta say im likeing it so far. Hope this doesn't get dropped. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story please do not drop .. . . . . . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . .. .. ... . . .. . . ... . . . . . . .. . .. . .
Great story please dont drop .. .. . . .. .. . . . . .. ......... . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .
bro great novel I want to see how he will take his revenge More than anything else so man complete this novel plzzz ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..............
Can someone tell me what chapter people realize that Naruto was the supreme genius and they regret their actions because that would 100% be the most satisfying thing to read
Although it is an overused Idea I still like neglect Naruto stories. I love the small changes you made and would love for you to make more chapters.
It is the same cliche` beginning, but if you can look past that the novel is one of the best fanfic's in this genre. Furthermore, the novel developing well; I can't wait to see how the story develops. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I really liked this Novel. Good job.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍🤙🤙
mano to gostando da historia, so não gostei muito da divisão da kurama porque ela é puro chakra então se tu para e pensa a alma é o propio chakra ja que chakra é energia fisico e mental, mais isso pode ser iginorado, so gostaria que naruto não perdoaçe ele no final odeia fanfic que naruto perdoa toda mizera que fiseram.
God awful start to a story. Stuffing so much forced tragedy down an audiences throat. No natural feel at all, if you gotta do all that to make this story happen it just ain't meant to be. Letting the webnovel readers control the direction of the story is another red flag. I know where this story is eventually headed.
totally didn't expect this fanfic concept you caught me of guard.😁😁👏👏👏 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinggggggggggggllllllllllyyyyyyyyy gooooooooooooooodd
Great story please dont drop........................................................................................,l.................................. .... .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
PLEASE MAKE MORE ALSO WHAT IS NARUTO DOJUSU FOR IS EYE LOOK LIKE ? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!piš častěji !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes yes yup yes I yup yes
just finished reading and i gotta say im likeing it so far. Hope this doesn't get dropped. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story please do not drop .. . . . . . . .. . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . .. .. ... . . .. . . ... . . . . . . .. . .. . .
Great story please dont drop .. .. . . .. .. . . . . .. ......... . . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .
bro great novel I want to see how he will take his revenge More than anything else so man complete this novel plzzz ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..............
Can someone tell me what chapter people realize that Naruto was the supreme genius and they regret their actions because that would 100% be the most satisfying thing to read
Although it is an overused Idea I still like neglect Naruto stories. I love the small changes you made and would love for you to make more chapters.
It is the same cliche` beginning, but if you can look past that the novel is one of the best fanfic's in this genre. Furthermore, the novel developing well; I can't wait to see how the story develops. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I really liked this Novel. Good job.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍🤙🤙
mano to gostando da historia, so não gostei muito da divisão da kurama porque ela é puro chakra então se tu para e pensa a alma é o propio chakra ja que chakra é energia fisico e mental, mais isso pode ser iginorado, so gostaria que naruto não perdoaçe ele no final odeia fanfic que naruto perdoa toda mizera que fiseram.