Carnal Immortal

LV 4

Dahoosa

From one author to another, I have to say this is good content as far as wish fulfillment of OP MC indulging in naughty fantasies goes. Amon gets a kick out of going slow and teasing his prey. Definitely is not for everyone, since Amon is immortal and doesn't love any of the girls (yet). He is also a fairly laid-back kind of guy. The second chapter illustrates this well. If you are trying to judge this against a more fleshed out nertori novel like Sinful Life of the Emperor, you're probably going to be disappointed. This is as generic as they come, but even a generic ero' can be enjoyable, much like Reality TV. Writing quality: English does not seem to be the author's main language. It is easy to tell with the frequent run-on sentences and miscellaneous typos. Despite these issues, they are minor enough not to ruin the flow of the story. Anyone reading this is probably not here for beautiful grammar anyway. 4 Stability of updates: No problems here. 5 Story Development: Still young, but the tone and style of the story leads me to believe that there will be no conflicts that Amon cannot easily overcome with his power. The current story itself reminds me of a combination of a bunch of different h-doujins smacked together. 5 Character Design: Interactions and dialogue are well done. Author switches to female POV occasionally to get in their heads on how their corruption is coming along and how unsatisfied and needy their nethers are. Otherwise, the female characters don't waste wordage talking about their issues or going in-depth into their backstories. This is appropriate, because the readers don't really care either. 5 World Background: Modern world and University setting. No problems here. 5 All I gotta say to you Author is keep doing your thing and don't worry about the haters. I'll keep reading :D

LV 3

HAREM_K1NG_Revived

I don't wanna look like a nerd when I do this but honestly I love the build up in the story and I'm always checking my library 3 times a week to see if this has updated or not writing quality 3.7 rn but I see you're improving a bit as you go along

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LV 4

Mular_Arthur

Good but the update takes to long I like the story it's really good and character fits the story and story development is good again all In all good story

LV 13

Tesseis

Boa história, muitas cenas lemons picantes com harem, o único problema é a baixa atualização de capítulos,

LV 4

Gurpreet_singh_3985

AUTHOR NEVER EVER stop WRITING this novel...

LV 10

Raquel_Ruquinha

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LV 4

Gurpreet_singh_3985

Loved it keep doing good work and bring more stories

LV 14

Oblivion21

The characters are written with complete thought but lack foundation. The storyline is simple so readers can easily comprehend the main focus of the story.

LV 14

G_Mango

I really the story and how it is built up. It is different from a lot of stories on this platform. Definitely recommend the only issue I have is that it updates weekly which is fine because it is consistent but I would love the have more chapters a week but I’m glad it’s quality over quantity.