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This is a very good fanfic. I have given 5/10 rating to most novels on WebNovel, but this one deserves 7.5
This is an excellent one piece fanfic. It has fresh ideas and new ways to develop other than the original one piece. There is no fluff in the dialogues and the relations between the members of crew is pretty good and feels like they are part of the crew and the mystery surrounding the mc is pretty awesome too...
I like every book of this author.His point of view is quite unique It's a gem for one piece fan.But plz,,update it timely.
I've made it through 88 chapters, and it has been steadily progressing. The story is just average for me; initially, I anticipated an epic fanfiction vibe, but our main character appears to have a penchant for island hopping without clear reasons. This is somewhat understandable since it's One Piece. However, I wish there could be more to the story than gaining random devil fruits and abducting women—bro's on a charity spree. It feels like the plot occasionally loses its way due to this, and his Blackstar Pirates seem more like an orphanage to me. With younger girls in the crew, it gives off the impression of him grooming potential wives for himself. That, particularly, I don't hate, but I'm not a fan of the repetition of these actions. Certainly, I've read it all, so there's a certain level of liking there. However, there's room for improvement. It exudes a slice-of-life feel, not exactly my cup of tea. It's lacking a bit in the excitement department lately, and the author could invest some extra effort into the storyline. From the very first chapter, I anticipated a thrilling action novel, but alas, it turned out to be a bit of a bait-and-switch. Action scenes lack detail, and there's a noticeable absence of info dumps. While this might be good news for some, as someone who enjoys descriptive writing, it's a bit frustrating to survive on dialogues alone. Best of luck—I'm hopeful that the story will evolve beyond its current slice-of-life vibe.
unique, no transmigrated mc, harem, definitely worth reading .................................................................................................
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Esta historia es una de las mejores de todos los tiempos, al menos para mis gustos, tanto el diseño de personaje como la expansión de mundo................................................................
Well , first lets talk about character development ; Compared to most fan fic novel interaction between characters are good, each and every character have their personality not blindly follow mc cause he is well MC. Every one have their own ideals and dreams.Update stability : It is kind , i consider from his previous novels, unstable.Story Development : Well talking about this most of fan-fic novel failed here because they emphasize too much on original crew and whatever undone stuffs in OG storyline. They rush to much on giving mc and his crew op power little too earlier without considering the story behind them which could most likely attract more positive response From reader, i guess. Till now, i have read around chapter 15 , which quite better experience than i have expected. Let if he is able to maintains till the end or just like any if not most of the novels , it became kind a bland for taste, or author just stop writing in the middle of the story, which happens with many fan-fic novels.My suggestion : Just give try, its nice and you will enjoy journey. If u like don't forget to give review here which might motivate author to give more effort to this novel....
I have to say I found gold this time! I was surprised to know that the author had dropped it in the past and hadn't done any updates for a few months But what a surprise, it was back in the update the moment I decided to read it! Let's talk about the fanfic a little now Perfect grammar and ambiguous plot and the MC is not incarnated The harem is perfect for me since I have a fetish for Robin and Hancock~ Adding Bonnie to the harem was nice and special! I will not talk more about this, and I just hope that the writer will continue to update and not drop this masterpiece!
I like the story. Its Different and had a good pacing. There is just one thing I want to make sure. Was MC a reincarnated? or aware of one piece world. I don't know if i just miss it. Based on what I read MC doesn't know One Piece
I only picked this novel up on a whim, but I can honestly say I'm really enjoying it. The unique creativity and the story telling very enjoyable, I am glad you came back and started releasing new chapters or I would of missed this get work.
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Evaluation: Above Average WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought/structured storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With a slow to average paced of development without affecting the story & MC progression. In addition, this is a pre-cannon which is good as it has its own development (in between, 5-10 yrs before cannon) 5/5 CD: MC is chaotic-neutral or antihero which is a plus. Has a high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of OPverse. BTW, MC is an OC & not an SI or transmigratot/reincarnator just to be clear. 5/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block as the updates isnt up to speed. 3/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any big changes yet nor adventures as they are still at the initial part of grandline. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
Oh the updates are back ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's a novel worth reading, so give it a try, for those who wants to know the MC is nor reincarnated, transmigrated or has future knowledge about the world, also it appears to be an AU. About the novel I like how the story ir going so far and I am also curious about what teh author will do until the start of the Canon, i think there's still like 8 years or so. Thank you for this work author :)
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Nice developmend I wonder if Chopprer will join the crew. ...................... .................................. ..........................................
Very good story. One of the best. Good text, interesting plot. I suggest to everyone read this story. Only one minus- last update was 15 days ago. But I believe that these story will be fully published Thank you[img=recommend][img=update]
Boney's birth should be around 1510 sea calendar because she is now 12 years old. Orohara buster call was around 1502 SC. Six year latter mean her mother didn't gave birth to her. Story character timing are messed up
This is a very good fanfic. I have given 5/10 rating to most novels on WebNovel, but this one deserves 7.5
This is an excellent one piece fanfic. It has fresh ideas and new ways to develop other than the original one piece. There is no fluff in the dialogues and the relations between the members of crew is pretty good and feels like they are part of the crew and the mystery surrounding the mc is pretty awesome too...
I like every book of this author.His point of view is quite unique It's a gem for one piece fan.But plz,,update it timely.
I've made it through 88 chapters, and it has been steadily progressing. The story is just average for me; initially, I anticipated an epic fanfiction vibe, but our main character appears to have a penchant for island hopping without clear reasons. This is somewhat understandable since it's One Piece. However, I wish there could be more to the story than gaining random devil fruits and abducting women—bro's on a charity spree. It feels like the plot occasionally loses its way due to this, and his Blackstar Pirates seem more like an orphanage to me. With younger girls in the crew, it gives off the impression of him grooming potential wives for himself. That, particularly, I don't hate, but I'm not a fan of the repetition of these actions. Certainly, I've read it all, so there's a certain level of liking there. However, there's room for improvement. It exudes a slice-of-life feel, not exactly my cup of tea. It's lacking a bit in the excitement department lately, and the author could invest some extra effort into the storyline. From the very first chapter, I anticipated a thrilling action novel, but alas, it turned out to be a bit of a bait-and-switch. Action scenes lack detail, and there's a noticeable absence of info dumps. While this might be good news for some, as someone who enjoys descriptive writing, it's a bit frustrating to survive on dialogues alone. Best of luck—I'm hopeful that the story will evolve beyond its current slice-of-life vibe.
unique, no transmigrated mc, harem, definitely worth reading .................................................................................................
I hope you will back to update this soonㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Esta historia es una de las mejores de todos los tiempos, al menos para mis gustos, tanto el diseño de personaje como la expansión de mundo................................................................
Well , first lets talk about character development ; Compared to most fan fic novel interaction between characters are good, each and every character have their personality not blindly follow mc cause he is well MC. Every one have their own ideals and dreams.Update stability : It is kind , i consider from his previous novels, unstable.Story Development : Well talking about this most of fan-fic novel failed here because they emphasize too much on original crew and whatever undone stuffs in OG storyline. They rush to much on giving mc and his crew op power little too earlier without considering the story behind them which could most likely attract more positive response From reader, i guess. Till now, i have read around chapter 15 , which quite better experience than i have expected. Let if he is able to maintains till the end or just like any if not most of the novels , it became kind a bland for taste, or author just stop writing in the middle of the story, which happens with many fan-fic novels.My suggestion : Just give try, its nice and you will enjoy journey. If u like don't forget to give review here which might motivate author to give more effort to this novel....
I have to say I found gold this time! I was surprised to know that the author had dropped it in the past and hadn't done any updates for a few months But what a surprise, it was back in the update the moment I decided to read it! Let's talk about the fanfic a little now Perfect grammar and ambiguous plot and the MC is not incarnated The harem is perfect for me since I have a fetish for Robin and Hancock~ Adding Bonnie to the harem was nice and special! I will not talk more about this, and I just hope that the writer will continue to update and not drop this masterpiece!
I like the story. Its Different and had a good pacing. There is just one thing I want to make sure. Was MC a reincarnated? or aware of one piece world. I don't know if i just miss it. Based on what I read MC doesn't know One Piece
I only picked this novel up on a whim, but I can honestly say I'm really enjoying it. The unique creativity and the story telling very enjoyable, I am glad you came back and started releasing new chapters or I would of missed this get work.
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Evaluation: Above Average WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought/structured storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With a slow to average paced of development without affecting the story & MC progression. In addition, this is a pre-cannon which is good as it has its own development (in between, 5-10 yrs before cannon) 5/5 CD: MC is chaotic-neutral or antihero which is a plus. Has a high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of OPverse. BTW, MC is an OC & not an SI or transmigratot/reincarnator just to be clear. 5/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block as the updates isnt up to speed. 3/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any big changes yet nor adventures as they are still at the initial part of grandline. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
Oh the updates are back ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's a novel worth reading, so give it a try, for those who wants to know the MC is nor reincarnated, transmigrated or has future knowledge about the world, also it appears to be an AU. About the novel I like how the story ir going so far and I am also curious about what teh author will do until the start of the Canon, i think there's still like 8 years or so. Thank you for this work author :)
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Nice developmend I wonder if Chopprer will join the crew. ...................... .................................. ..........................................
Very good story. One of the best. Good text, interesting plot. I suggest to everyone read this story. Only one minus- last update was 15 days ago. But I believe that these story will be fully published Thank you[img=recommend][img=update]
Boney's birth should be around 1510 sea calendar because she is now 12 years old. Orohara buster call was around 1502 SC. Six year latter mean her mother didn't gave birth to her. Story character timing are messed up