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this story is very interesting and i really enjoy it... I hope the author will speed up the continuation of the story and I will continue to support your work.
Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik. Saya hanya berharap cepat updated dan semakin seru ceritanya.. Tapi saya hanya mengharapkan MC 'sedikit' menahan diri dalam mengumpulkan haremnya,kesannya seperti sedang mengumpulkan pokemon di dunia BTTH
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Huh Very interesting story the plot is amazing, I really liked the personality of the protagonist he is much better than many protagonists out there, the harem I really liked the personality of the day Heroines and their stories, I highly recommend you won't be sorry
Man its one heck 9f an amazing fanfic to get hooked up to this fam fic u need to read atleast 35-40 chaps as the story begins properly from there
This fanfic is well done in every way: grammar is good the story is good the characters are well described
One of the best fan fics for me thou the only drawback is mc leaps in cultivation ranks as eating and sleeping............................. .. .......... ...
Btw, this original novel or TL from raw ?? #Still waiting from new chapter 😊😊😊 -exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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nice fan fic, I am all for large harem stories but could do with not trying to catch every girl he sees like pokemon . ----------------------------------
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Nice, keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Está bueno .................... ...................................................... ..........................................................................
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Nice man. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏅🏅
Tus ff son demasiado buenos para mi gusto, sin embargo, casi nunca los terminas, aun estoy esperando capítulos de el ff de btth, espero que sigas también con este, ¡suerte!
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this story is very interesting and i really enjoy it... I hope the author will speed up the continuation of the story and I will continue to support your work.
Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik. Saya hanya berharap cepat updated dan semakin seru ceritanya.. Tapi saya hanya mengharapkan MC 'sedikit' menahan diri dalam mengumpulkan haremnya,kesannya seperti sedang mengumpulkan pokemon di dunia BTTH
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Huh Very interesting story the plot is amazing, I really liked the personality of the protagonist he is much better than many protagonists out there, the harem I really liked the personality of the day Heroines and their stories, I highly recommend you won't be sorry
Man its one heck 9f an amazing fanfic to get hooked up to this fam fic u need to read atleast 35-40 chaps as the story begins properly from there
This fanfic is well done in every way: grammar is good the story is good the characters are well described
One of the best fan fics for me thou the only drawback is mc leaps in cultivation ranks as eating and sleeping............................. .. .......... ...
Btw, this original novel or TL from raw ?? #Still waiting from new chapter 😊😊😊 -exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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nice fan fic, I am all for large harem stories but could do with not trying to catch every girl he sees like pokemon . ----------------------------------
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Nice, keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Está bueno .................... ...................................................... ..........................................................................
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Tolong lebih banyak update nya , dan dipercepat juga [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Nice man. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏅🏅
Tus ff son demasiado buenos para mi gusto, sin embargo, casi nunca los terminas, aun estoy esperando capítulos de el ff de btth, espero que sigas también con este, ¡suerte!
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