13รีวิว
4.28
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My second contracted book! I hope everyone will give this a chance! Because it's a slow burn Yuri story of an Ice Empress and a former thief- currently an assassin now in the future!A lot of angst, politics, diving into rebellion, romance, love and a bit of teasing! I'm experimenting on this book and I hope you enjoy!
I tried to read it since I found the synopsis interesting, but I couldn't go through more than 10 chapters since the reading and grammar are very simple, it was very disappointing for me, because I thought I was going to love it because these types of stories are my favorites but it wasn't like that, the story itself was not what I expected, I did what I could to continue reading but I couldn't stand it :'v
Great story so far and love the characters, the only problem I have is near the end of the book so far its repeating chapters, word for word, for the next 20 chapters, with the same title and words and I can't find any message detailing why or when it will be fix.
This is another moronic trash YURI novel. The grammar is trash. The characters are morons. The MC is a moron. Their actions are moronic and so are their thoughts. Everything is a mess. Any1 rating this higher than 3 stars is a paid actor or a moron themselves. 4.9 stars :D what a joke. I feel like I should get paid for having to read this atrocity for 7 chapters.
Loving the story and the characters, the pacing and the world-building are good. I can't wait for the next chapters!
The story is very interesting and even how it gradually builds itself is cute and nicely done 😊
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How dare you make me cry!😫 Because of the sypnosis I thought this story would be more of a comedic type where side characters almost seem to die but actually never would. So I got attached to them and you just had to kill her...whyy!!! It is darker than I thought and now I'm crying. I am bad with this stuff😞 But I still love the story but make it more happy please, for my fragile heart. I think you even killed my ship....wahhh😭
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Okay, so this is purely my opinion. Anyways, I'm trying to remember or summarize this story based from my understanding. Summary: Ice Queen Ami dies, Truck-kun style(and golf too hehe..), and the god(dess??) that killed her gave her another chance to live, but in a different world. Writing quality: I can spot a some punctuation errors, and grammatical errors. The English is better than good though. Story Development: A decent pace, I gotta say. A little girl trying to learn her new surroundings, and by that we are also trying to know the new world she lives in. Listing one like the impact of the "important" characters around her, even in subtle or little details. (You get it, just shortened it cause I don't want to reach 1k words of this) World Background: I'd say it's great! There's nothing more I can say since I will really spoil too much. Character Design: I don't have a strong imaginations, but their character designs are good and simple; just the way I like them. Updating Stability: I suppose it's consistent.
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the story is quite entertaining, ......................................................................................................................
My second contracted book! I hope everyone will give this a chance! Because it's a slow burn Yuri story of an Ice Empress and a former thief- currently an assassin now in the future!A lot of angst, politics, diving into rebellion, romance, love and a bit of teasing! I'm experimenting on this book and I hope you enjoy!
I tried to read it since I found the synopsis interesting, but I couldn't go through more than 10 chapters since the reading and grammar are very simple, it was very disappointing for me, because I thought I was going to love it because these types of stories are my favorites but it wasn't like that, the story itself was not what I expected, I did what I could to continue reading but I couldn't stand it :'v
Great story so far and love the characters, the only problem I have is near the end of the book so far its repeating chapters, word for word, for the next 20 chapters, with the same title and words and I can't find any message detailing why or when it will be fix.
This is another moronic trash YURI novel. The grammar is trash. The characters are morons. The MC is a moron. Their actions are moronic and so are their thoughts. Everything is a mess. Any1 rating this higher than 3 stars is a paid actor or a moron themselves. 4.9 stars :D what a joke. I feel like I should get paid for having to read this atrocity for 7 chapters.
Loving the story and the characters, the pacing and the world-building are good. I can't wait for the next chapters!
The story is very interesting and even how it gradually builds itself is cute and nicely done 😊
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How dare you make me cry!😫 Because of the sypnosis I thought this story would be more of a comedic type where side characters almost seem to die but actually never would. So I got attached to them and you just had to kill her...whyy!!! It is darker than I thought and now I'm crying. I am bad with this stuff😞 But I still love the story but make it more happy please, for my fragile heart. I think you even killed my ship....wahhh😭
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Okay, so this is purely my opinion. Anyways, I'm trying to remember or summarize this story based from my understanding. Summary: Ice Queen Ami dies, Truck-kun style(and golf too hehe..), and the god(dess??) that killed her gave her another chance to live, but in a different world. Writing quality: I can spot a some punctuation errors, and grammatical errors. The English is better than good though. Story Development: A decent pace, I gotta say. A little girl trying to learn her new surroundings, and by that we are also trying to know the new world she lives in. Listing one like the impact of the "important" characters around her, even in subtle or little details. (You get it, just shortened it cause I don't want to reach 1k words of this) World Background: I'd say it's great! There's nothing more I can say since I will really spoil too much. Character Design: I don't have a strong imaginations, but their character designs are good and simple; just the way I like them. Updating Stability: I suppose it's consistent.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ the story is quite entertaining, ......................................................................................................................
Loving this story and it’s characters. Can’t wait for the chapter.